LIMITED TIME/POEMS.

Closed.

Rules:
Anything goes
Not an epic poem, 50 lines max as a guide.
only 15 poems allowed so reserve your place.
One poem per person.
Ends when i have 15 people's poems.

Prizes
1st prize 8 comments added to favourites
2nd prize 5 comments added to favourites
3rd prize 3 comments added to favourites
2 runners up - 2 comments added to favourites.
Everyone else .. 1 comment each.

go go go guys !! xxxx

I Melt With You

It's a rhythm i found in your heart
That makes me sing at nights
Sometimes it is your guard
You make me melt with your eyes

Sometimes I sing it slow for you
To dance with me in dreams it's why
I'll see when you hold me it's a clue
You make me melt with your smile

It's the place that you look upon me
We aren't equal we don't have possibilities
Of being together,I'm just your secretary
You make me melt with your realities

I see in your eyes,your wide smile
You're happy with who you're with
It's not me i know this,it's my pit
You make me melt with your bliss

Thanks for adding me back hun
Take care of yourself
From your friend
LAURA

1.Roddy Flores
2....
3.Twistedheart
4.No Need For A Name
5.Wasted Fake Smiles
6.ImperfectionIsBeauty
7.CiaoBella:)
8.Forever ♥ Yours
9.Briddy
10.J,Lau
11.BriBri
12.Singing In The Rain
13.PrettyInPunk
14.Nessa
15.Mark

Please reserve me a place.

Thanks
Jeannie

If We Should Meet Again
By: Twisted Heart

Will I still feel the hunger
of your taste upon my lips
The sweetness of your arms
That held me with such bliss

Will I remember all the things
You told me through the night
The lingering sensations
Of the love held in your eyes

Will your arms reach out to touch
And hold within there span
The heart and soul that tore
Away the life like sifting sand

Will there be a longing
For the love we two had shared
Before you left me wanting
With nothing to show you cared.

Inside my mind are memories
That clash against the heart
That shattered in the wake
Of what was pulled apart

My soul has found the secret
To begin my life anew
But will it hold up stronger
In the light of seeing you.

Will resolution hold me
Stronger than I've ever been
To give me faith to walk away
If we should meet again.

These are short lines, so please except it. Thank you for understanding.

Clocks

Hear the process moving
Round in circles again
Hear the constant pounding
Of our heads

Everything is moving faster
And we're slowly killing us
Everything is disaster
Rewind back up

We hear it on the radio
A calming frequency
We hear it on the stereo
Ticking ticking

(Chorus)
And our bodies are clocks
And our minute hand has stopped
Our gears are all stuck
And all we hear is
Ticktock ticktock

Seconds fly by
Feel us growing old
Seconds excite
No one at all

Now these rust stained hands
Are finally slowing down
My shaking finger tips
Are finally stopping now

Now my biological make up
I've gotten washed off
No more timers to wake me up
I'm finally shutting off

(Chorus)
And our bodies are clocks
And our minute hand has stopped
Our gears are all stuck
And all we hear is
Ticktock ticktock
And our minds are minutes
So easy to forget
All these blackmailing secrets
And all we hear is
Ticktock ticktock

We're now slowing down
Killing time and sound
Our time has run out
But I can still hear
You breathing in my ear
The motion of the gears
Inside of our heads
It's never too late
It's never too late
To rewind the ticking

(Chorus)
And our bodies are clocks
And our minute hand has stopped
Our gears are all stuck
And all we hear is
Ticktock ticktock
And our minds are minutes
So easy to forget
All these blackmailing secrets
And all we hear is
Ticktock ticktock

No.Need.For.A.Name.

yes of course, that's fine. x

it says reserve so can i reserve, despite ill have the poem up in like 2 seconds? lol

ok here's the poem

Just Another Emo Girl

Goodbye my love. Hello to the pain.
Never again will you say my name.
Goodbye sunshine. Hello to the dark.
Never again will the sun leave its mark.

Goodbye smiles. Hello to the tears.
Alone I will stand for the rest of my years.
Goodbye to everything that I held on to,
Hello darkness, my devotion's to you.

This time I can't take another blow,
So this is my suicide. I've got to go.
As I lay this razor upon my fragile skin,
This is the end; let my afterlife begin.

The blood now pours out as I write this,
Let death come upon me with his kiss.
No more will I feel pain over him,
Goodbye my friend. My vision's going dim.

(Just then she took her last breath on this world,
Never again to be called some emo girl.
He took away her life, when he said goodbye,
And now her body's cold, with one final cry.)

~*Who Cares?*~
in ( ) is the narator just so ya know. hope its ok:)

laura disqualified for being just plain rude. When i only just joined.. just getting the hang of things.. there's no need for capital letters and shouting.

ok i'm so sorry for breaking your rule
But i didn't know it
Bye

Fingerprints

Vaguely specific
Are the words of our own
Torn, tattered, horrific
No pretenses of home

A lonely perfume
A scent of defeat
Bruised necks, scarred wrists
Lips curved in deceit

Straight lines
Marching coins
Too different, unique
Too late to rejoin

Fingerprints of descendants
Melted and blank
Reaching for the fire
Tripping on the plank

Simply they say
Thinking too much
Racing, and winning..
But needing just a touch

Almost perfect
Basked in delight
Transforming beauty
This disobedient plight

can i reserve a space? does it have to be new?

Just Because You Are You
by CiaoBella :)

I laugh because you're stuck in my head
I smile my whole day through
You are the only one I want
Just Because You Are You

I smile because you're gorgeous
You laugh, but you know it's true
Fighting that issue is usless
Just Because You Are You

You tell me that I'm perfect
To that point, I argue
But you hold fast to your ideas
Just Because You Are You

People laugh and people stare
They don't get what we're up to
They could never imagine the love we have
Just Because You Are You

I imagine my life alone
And I wouldn't know what to do
Without you, my life's incomplete
Just Because You Are You

Your sense of humor heals me
While your eyes see right on through
My usless facade; my sweet charade
Just Because You Are You

I loved you then as I do now
I know you always knew
When people ask my reason I say
"Just Because You Are You"

Hold me close; tell me so
That you love me and you'll never let go
I love you now and I knew you knew
It's Just Because You Are You

can i please reserve?

5 more to go =] new/old poems - they're all fine but just one per person.. (Y) thank you! xxx

5 MORE ENTRANTS PLEASE.

thank you!

xxxx

Desires
by J. Lau

Dreams and reality collide,
Hope and faith survives.
Desires and fate entangle,
Lust and love entwines.
Vision and goals coincide,
Life and destiny defined.

< - - - - - - - - - - - >

There are so many things in life that are out of our control. So many things we desire, yet will not pocess.

Can I please reserve? Thanks, hun. :]

Don't Move On
by BriBri [x]

We're crazy in love; like one of those forbidden romance movies.
So incapable of being indissoluble [strings attached].
Spend our days at the beach & nights by the moonlight.
Compatible; most people say [so perfectly matched].

..... (Don't move on) .....

Love; so deep nothing can stand in the way.
Conquering all mistakes, everything that goes wrong.
Happiness overwhelms our souls [like a cup over flowing].
Spinning in circles around each other to our favorite song.

..... (Don't move on) .....

Laughing endlessly, splashing around in the water.
Whispering adulating words in each others ears.
Cuddling by the warmth of sweet scenting candles.
Keeping one another safe from their fears.

..... (Don't move on) .....

Noticing; it's not only fairy tales or made up stories.
Wishes, fantasies, prayers, & dreams really do come true.
The man that has always accompanied me in my dreams,
I've come to find, that man was you.

..... (Don't move on) .....

plz reserve me

Break Me
by K. H.

I'm tired of your girl
I hate her; yes, I do
I hate her just as much
As I used to like you

I falter at your touch
You always make me smile
But somewhere, deep inside
You make me want to cry

I hate you. I hate you for
Hurting me when I thought
I could finally have had
Just one chance -- one!

I wanted to take it. I really did
Just as much as I wanted to take
The pills for my allergies
Bittersweet cure, my remedy

And, like relationships
Having them makes my stomach ache
I wake up, in the morning
With a dreadful taste

Dread of missing you; I thought you were
Someone close to me; but instead
Of me holding your hand, guess who?
It was her! Her with her

Pretty eyes and tame hair,
Fake happiness, because
She doesn't know, deep down
You don't even love her.

Why are you with her? You should be with me!
I loved you first, so why
Are you still with her? I loved you!
But you walked away, way too fast

I miss you. I really do; I used to
Say your name over and over in my head
Along with, "I love you... I love you...
Do you feel the same way, too?"

And when I said it out loud, it made
Such a pretty sound; I was so
Happy... until she tore it apart
Her, barging in secretly... my rival

Lord, God, help me
Not to hate her so much... I hate her
Guts because she took you
My friend, she took you from me

I hate it all... I wish I never
Told you how I felt; I wish you
Didn't feel the same, and still
Be with her... I hate her!

Go ahead... break me!

added laura back in... two more people please... xxx

me please,

what i miss the most
i*do*still*love*him

I miss the way you kissed me
i miss the way you cared
i miss the way you always held me
even though you were truly scared

i miss the long nights
i miss the wonderful sights
i miss the times we fought
and the way you were last night

i miss the way you kissed me
so soft and to true
i miss the way you cared
always there to share
i miss the way you always held me
even with the guys around
even though you were always truly scared
i would leave

i miss the long nights
and all of our long talks
i miss the wonderful sights
mount Rushmore in the snow
i miss all the time we fought
over stupid silly stuff
and the way you were last night
scared and full of fright

Title: I did it Myself
by Mark
Genre: Sad

Hopes and dreams
beware of this call
faith has chosen
to put up this wall

the wall that separates and injures
my already wounded soul
you left me naked
now without any goal

memories leaving
my inner desire
was for you to see
in my heart the deeply fire

now its gone
I did it myself
you are out of reach
another book on the shelf

I still remember
the look in your eyes
that placed me in heaven
far from all the lies

you brought me the light
the light for me to see
that i had already won
and we were yet to be

though thats only fiction
a novel that now has ended
and the warm hand of yours
I myself descended

its so hard to believe
we are now so far from one
though more hard to believe
that we are all done

Link: http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=853914

i'll judge tomorrow if i have time
thanks everyone xxxx

i dont think i got my poem in so is it too late to put it in even tho iv reserved??