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  • Gem
    17 years ago

    I can't see love poems, any chance you can post the poem here please?

  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    17 years ago

    well this is a coversation poem. a little back ground for you so your not totally lost, my sister lost a baby full term in january of 2005 and this is between her and my niece Nautica.

    My Birthday

    The guests should be arriving
    The house decorated to
    But instead the house is empty
    Except for me thinking of you

    *Dont cry mommy
    I got a parade today in place of a party
    God had great grandma
    walk me down the streets of gold*

    We had planned for you a big party
    With friends and family too
    A cake for you to play in
    A cake for us to eat

    *Hard for you to believe mommy
    But my birthday cake was huge
    I shared with everyone mommy
    Theres a piece in the freezer waiting for you*

    Your new little sister will be here soon
    She will have a new room
    The one you to would have shared
    Your thing put safely in a box
    Forever to last like my baby did not

    *My new little sister is beautiful
    She is here with me till you get to have her
    Weve laughed and played
    Ran and giggled
    She will suit you perfect
    Daddys little girl*

    I held you that day in the hospital
    Counted your toes and sang you a song
    I didnt want to let you go
    but the doctors said its time

    *Mommy I loved your song
    and held you tight
    God said it was my time to
    I tried not to let you go to
    But they took me away*

    You are the love of my life
    Never to be forgotten

    *Mommy I am with you
    forever and for always
    I am your little girl
    That didnt get to stay with you long*

    In loving memory of Nautica
    1/29/07

  • tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup
    17 years ago

    so does mine work?

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Xx Intoxicated Whispers xX

    "You're so hot; you make me want to scream"
    "I think you're being just a bit extreme"
    "No, I'm serious, you're so damn pretty"
    "I'm not interested, such a pity"

    "But I want to feel you, kiss you so much"
    "No you don't, so please don't touch"
    "But you look so hot in that red dress"
    "Oh please, could you just give it a rest"

    "How about me and you go back to mine?"
    "I don't think so, have you lost your mind?"
    "But baby, I'll show you what a real man's like"
    "I won't tell you again, just take a hike!"

    "But I just can't control myself around you"
    "Well sorry, I guess you'll have to learn to"
    "But don't you want to have some fun with me?"
    "Thank you but no, I have to disagree"

    "Look, stop hassling me, trying to touch
    I don't want to be in your drunken clutch
    Intoxicated whispers are all that I hear
    Maybe next time, but without the beer" ©

    *Gem*

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    He Said; She Thought.
    by Bri [x]

    "I thought that you were over me"
    Obviously not.

    "Now, you have me so confused"
    & you have me hypnotized.

    "I did love you, but now I'm with someone"
    She can't love you like I would.

    "I don't know what to do, Hun"
    Follow your heart, baby.

    "I can't deal with all this, it's too much"
    Let's drown in a pool of love together.

    "At least now I know exactly how you feel"
    I can't even explain how I feel.

    "Are you sure that these feelings are real?"
    Real.. & strong..

    "I don't want to be just a game to you"
    You're so much more than that..

    "Why didn't you ever tell me?"
    I was too scared.

    "You made me feel like I never had a chance"
    You were always the one.

    "But now.. I'm in love with someone else"
    Fall in love with me, baby..
    Too little; too late..

  • AGirlWorthFightingFor
    17 years ago

    What Girls Really Think Of Eachother

    She said, "You should put yourself out there more."
    I thought, This is nothing I haven't heard before.

    "Do you think you can work on your communication skills?"
    F*ck you, bitch.

    "What happened to all the nice girls?"
    You should try being one.

    "Stop hanging out with my friends!"
    They were my friends before we ever even knew you.

    "She has some nerve."
    Yeah, I guess do, but I'd rather be bold than desperate like you.

    "You really do know more than people give you credit."
    I wish you could've been sober when you said that.

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    hope it can be old...

    Dead Of A Heartbreak / How Can You Still Call Me Beautiful

    With yesterday’s make-up
    Smeared across her face
    She shies away
    From his loving embrace

    “What’s wrong?” he asks
    “Nothing, why?” she replies
    “I just want to know why
    Your make-up’s smeared under your eyes.”

    “Oh, it’s nothing, don’t worry.
    I’ll be alright.”
    “No really, what’s wrong?”
    What happened last night?”

    She tries hard not to break down
    Right in front of him
    Her soul is shattered again
    She tries to push the pain within

    “You know I care, please tell me.”
    “Don’t worry, I’ll be fine.”
    “No you’re not, you’re not okay
    You’re feeding me a line.”

    “If I were to talk to you
    Would you really care?
    After it’s all done,
    Would you still be standing there?”

    “Oh, honey! You know I do.
    Why wouldn’t I be?
    When ever have I not been?
    It’s alright, you can tell me.”

    “I love this boy, but he doesn’t care…”
    “Are you sure about that?”
    “I’m pretty sure; he never did.”
    “Now, why would you say that?”

    “Well, he lives too far away
    He used to live near me
    And we rarely talk anymore
    It’s hard to deal with really.”

    “Who was this boys?
    Where has he gone?”
    “No, I can’t tell you
    My feelings are wrong.

    He has robbed me of my beauty
    Stole it from within
    When I stopped seeing this boy
    He took it away with him.”

    “You know, I think you’re lying
    Because you know I can tell
    That looking through your eyes
    You can see you’ve gone through hell.

    You’ve been robbed of something, yes
    But not what you speak of
    Your beauty and grace are still there
    So is your kindness and love.”

    “How can you still call me beautiful
    While I’m standing here a mess
    My face looks so horrible
    Plus, this torn and tattered dress?”

    “Baby, you shine from within
    Your beauty glows and shows
    I can see past the make-up
    To see the real eyes, lips, and nose.”

    “You’re just saying that because you have to
    Because you’re just trying to be nice
    But this is too much to deal with
    I can’t let this happen twice.”

    “Sweetie stop…I love you dearly
    You know this much is true.
    I have always been there for you
    And I really truly do.”

    As she stood there stunned
    Her knees began to shake
    As she fell down to the floor
    Her whole body began to quake

    As he bent to pick her up
    He noticed something wrong
    Her eyes were staring upwards
    Her gaze fixed just too long

    He held his dying baby
    As she slowly slipped away
    “I love you and want to marry you…
    I was going to propose Valentine’s Day.”

    Through her last moments of life
    She tried to tell him, with pain
    That he was the boy she loved so dearly
    But her efforts were in vain

    Her body limping, without a soul
    For as she slipped out of life
    Her one last dream that couldn’t come true
    Was just to be his wife

    As her love held her body
    That had once been so full
    He whispered softly in her ear
    “How could I not call you beautiful?”

    After her funeral the very next day
    The boy broke down and cried
    She was his everything in his life
    He didn’t want her to die

    So as the boy walked home
    A dove flew over his head
    As he watched it silently
    He remembered what she said

    And as the boy looked down
    To walk to his home
    He thought he felt something funny
    It’s origin, unknown

    Then he saw it shining
    Lying on the ground
    Her favorite golden necklace
    That he just had found

    He wondered how it got there
    But somehow, it led him home
    Then he finally realized
    That she had already known

    She knew he loved her dearly
    Of course she knew that was true
    But he never even told her
    “Baby, I really love you.”

    As he sat upon his couch
    The boy felt such an ache
    His friends found him the next day
    Dead of a heartbreak.