Syllable Contest (HARD)

  • Avrii Monrielle
    17 years ago

    I'll do one ^_^

  • Avrii Monrielle
    17 years ago

    Beloved

    I feel so happy
    When you're next to me, staring
    Deep into my eyes

    You listen to
    Me, even if
    I say stupid
    Things, and accept
    Me for who I am

    I want to look
    Away, shift my
    Gaze, I'm not used
    To guys like you
    That give me respect

    I never knew someone
    That acts like you
    Listening, speaking,
    Each smile, each touch
    I grow silent
    By each passing day,
    I fall in love again

    You listen to
    Me, even if
    I say stupid
    Things, and accept
    Me for who I am

  • Poetess Lana
    17 years ago

    2 DAYS LEFT!!!!!!!

    not including the rest of today of course...

  • Poetess Lana
    17 years ago

    Okay...

    today was the last day. I will accept tomorrows entries up until when I check online for the contest entries, and then Ill judge!!!

    ~~~PRIZES~~~

    1st PLACE- Spot in Favorites and 4 comments on poems!!
    2nd PLACE- 4 comments
    3rd PLACE- 3 comments
    4th PLACE- 2 comments
    Honorable Mention: 2 comments

    All other poem entries will get one comment on any poem of their choosing!!!

  • Avrii Monrielle
    17 years ago

    * drum roll *

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    Good luck everyone.

  • Poetess Lana
    17 years ago

    And thats it!!! the end! finito!!!! done!! finshed!

    ar-rite... tomorrow is when the winners will be posted! WHOO!!!

    guys... there were a LOT of people who didnt follow rules.

    your haikus HAD to be about nature!!! and it makes me really sad because some of the ones that were wrong format were SOOOO good!!! ='(

    ~CLOSED~CLOSED~CLOSED~CLOSED~CLOSED~

  • Poetess Lana
    17 years ago

    1st- Gem
    2nd- Romantic Lover
    3rd- Hidden Soul
    4th- Infected
    HM- Lucy

    CONGRADULATIONS EVERYBODY!!!!!

    this was a really hard contest... and you did really well.

    you can post these poems on your profile if you like them enough to do so.

  • dollwithafrown
    17 years ago

    Thank you so much for third place.

    Well done everybody else!

    Could you please comment on:

    `Dark Blue
    `Fallen Leaves
    `Mascara Bleeds

    Thank you. :)

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    Thank you for the 4th place.

    And congrats to everyone else.

    Any two poems will be fine.
    Thank you.

  • Romantic Lover
    17 years ago

    Thanks for the placing, this was fun to write.
    All the poems were great and congratulations to all the winners.

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Oh wow!! Now that was unexpected!!
    Thank you. =) =) =)

    Just my latest four please if hyou will
    Congrats everone else, this was a tough contest! =)
    *Gem*

  • Poetess Lana
    17 years ago

    So...do any other entrants have poems they want me to comment on?!

  • Romantic Lover
    17 years ago

    How about my latest 4?
    Thanks a bunch :)