O please please please please please read my poem

please lol? I just got my new poem on "Simply Morbid" can you rate and comment on it, ya know what you don't even have to rate or comment on it, just read it, I just want people to read my poetry and be inspired? well I don't know lol just read it please before I ramble on any longer, ok I will stop now lol, Shana stop lol... ok I stoped