'Do as you please' title contest

Hiya everyone. A title contest with what I thought was some unusual titles. They can be about ANYTHING you want, and you can write in any form. Do as you please =)

You can reserve spots if you want and pick which title you want. There can be more than one person doing a title if needs be.

The rules are:
- Newly written
- Try to keep profanity and swearing to a minimum

Prizes:
1st place - 4 comments and votes
2nd place - 3 comments and votes
3rd place - 2 comments and votes
Everyone else - 1 comment and vote

(You need to let me know what poems you would like commented/voted)

Here are the titles:
* Eternal Sunshine - Done by PrettyInPunk[LauRa]
* Moonlight Magic - Done by Romantic Lover
* Starlight, Starbright - Done by gabriella
* Vanilla Sky - Done by HiddenxSoul
* Cloudy Mind - Done by skater girl
* Midnight Massacre - Done by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
* Winds Of Affection - Done by Payne Drewelow
* Ice Heart - Reserved by robin milford
* Snow Patrol - Reserved by `&& lOve*
* Sands Of Time - Reserved by !$$NESSA$$! and Done by dhaval

The closing date will be the end of April so plenty of time and will be judged by the ever ready panel of judges (6 people)

So good luck and have fun.

*Gem*

Hi Gem,

I'd like to reserve Moonlight Magic please.

Thanks!

starlight starbright plz!
gabriella

i want Sands Of Time please??
nessa

Cheers everyone =)

wow these our some cool titles they r so cool i cant pick just 1. hmmm I'll reserve Ice heart

can you comment and rate my poems please

i would liek cloudy mind please

Eternal sunshine please!
Thanks alot

-edit- nvm

Ciao

i'm done with mine. comments would be lovely. cloudy mind

can it be short?

starlight starbright (unedited)

starlight starbright
in the middle of the night
just give up, don't have to fight
starlight starbright

starlight starbright
don't ever let it out of sight
just walk into the burning light
starlight starbright

starlight starbright
as the sky turns flowing white
as the birds into the air take flight
starlight starbright

starlight starbright
in the middle of the night
for once everything is right
starlight starbright.

yeah, i don't think this'll win, but i tried.

Midnight Masacre, please? =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Ok, i've updated all the reserved and skater girl, if you've done a poem, please post it here like everyone else and please don't ask for comments here. There's a whole other board for stuff like that.
Thanks everyone
*Gem*

Eternal Sunshine

It was a peaceful morning
Feeling the breeze on my skin
At the balcony still waiting
For sunrise like a gean

Rain started to fall when i was on my way
To work i shouldn't have been late today
But when i saw a man that looks like a kane
Sun started to shine brightly again

He asked me to date after a week
I gave him two girls and we're fine
It won't stop shining no need to seek
I finally found my eternal sunshine

Hope you like it

In the event that NESSA doesnt submit, please accept this:

SANDS OF TIME

I’ve started smelling you in roses,
feeling you in the damp, dim evenings,
and seeing you in its lilac dew.

Meaning it was that I’d searched for,
and meaning it was, that you gave me.
This cold oil had never known
that there would come a day, when
your loving flame would kiss my lamp
and thaw my miseries away…
Now amidst your loving arms,
I am draped in peace, and a warmth
that I think my heart has grown addicted to…
The light illuminates, yet warns me,
and I can see the misty road just far enough
to tell me that it’s wise to be scared,
for reality is harsh, and the past tells me
that there are no hands of fate or circumstance
that do not believe in cruelty;
none that do not like lashing sand-castles
with their unrelenting waves of time.
Even a semblance of a parting is piercing
so if the winds of change ever cruelly blow,
and our time together is set in stone,
I know not what will remain of me…

But I’ll never stop smelling you in roses,
feeling you in the damp, dim evenings,
and seeing you in its lilac dew.

Because I can’t.

BY DHAVAL

I'd like to reserve "Vanilla Sky" please?

Thanks.

sorry about the commetn thing, here's my poem.

cloudy mind

When i look in the eyes of the love i find,
i see how amazing and so Devinne,
the look in your eyes says that your lost,
I'll stand beside you till you find what you want,
although i love you and your cloudy mind,
the tears i hide way deep inside,
won't be seen by a guy so fine,
i can't help but to wander why you don't see,
i love you so much, you should be with me,

the look in your eyes have become so dark,
it's like your hiding something from me I'm afraid to know what,
there is no lightness, not even a spark.
you know what is funny,
that you still have my heart,
i can't let you go it hurts so much,
so you'll always have a little part of my heart.

to see you with her talking and laughing,
brings tears to my eyes that once were filled,
with the love you gave me forever until,
she came back to you and took you away,
best friends forever you said we'd stay,
you see what has happen since she came along,
she took you form me and now we're done,
not even close like we used to be,
i still remember the days you loved me.

your eyes are so dark, why can't i see through,
just like how i used to do.
it's just to hard to be like we we're,
you just say that probably cause of her.
well good bye my friend,
i love you so much but this is the end.
the clouds in your mind have caused you to pretend,
we're not friends we never were,
i mean nothing to you so good bye good friend.

Midnight Massacre

Storms softly thunder
An ebony of decay
Held to perfection.

------

For perfection,
Not the living
Make the largest
Demands; we die
For eternity.

For perfection,
Hell speaks strongly
Over tomorrow’s
Forgotten worries
Burning ruby red.

For perfection,
Only Heaven
May speak. We must
Stand strong against
These treacherous lies

For perfection,
Not the living,
Make the largest
Demands; we die
For eternity.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Vanilla Sky {Terzanelle}
by HiddenxSoul

The soul was like a beautiful lullaby,
From the opening of welcoming windows,
To the loving heart of a vanilla sky.

The warmth so eloquently wraps around us,
As we wait excitedly, holding on tight, clutching.
From the opening of welcoming windows.

Standing side by side, our bodies touching:
Hand on hand, precious heart to heart,
As we wait excitedly, holding on tight, clutching.

No one can pull our embracing arms apart,
As our excitement increases at a loving pace.
Hand on hand, precious heart to heart.

The awakening of a precious new place;
A new image surrounding a brand new day,
As our excitement increases at a loving pace.

Together we surpass this old life, and make our way,
To the loving heart of a vanilla sky.
A new image surrounding a brand new day:
The loving heart of a vanilla sky.

--

This is my first ever Terzanelle. I hope you enjoy.

I'll do it. I'll try anyway. :]

Ciao

It's not actually the last title since there can be two poets per title if needs be.
Besides there's no rush, this contest is open til the end of April cos i have a lot of other stuff going on at the moment.
So take your time people x

Moonlight Magic

Sitting on my patio just enjoying the cool night air
Clearing my mind of all worries, tensions and care
Shining so bright is the full moon tonight
Amongst millions of stars sparkling so ever bright

The flame of the candles perform their routine dance
Soft music in the background leaves me in a trance
I feel a soft touch on my shoulder so bare
And soon a soft blow through the back of my hair

He slowly pulls me up in locks me in his embrace
Chills run up my spine as my heart begins to race
One hand moves down and curves around my hip
While the other finds my fingers and form a tight grip

Our bodies up close and move with the tune
Passions begin to unveil as we dance under the moon
We gaze in each others eyes as our lips begin to quiver
Longing to meet I feel a sudden shiver

On his shoulder I lean in to rest my head
He breaks my glide and kisses me instead
A deep passionate kiss we share under the stars
The most romantic experience we've shared by far

He slowly pulls back and looks into my eyes
Says "I love you very much" and leaves a deep sigh
He whispers in my ear "My Dearest Romantic,
How sensual it is to create this Moonlight Magic"

I wrote Snow Patrol and I'll have to type it up when I get home from the city. =] It came out better than I expected.

Ciao

Snow Patrol [Villanelle]
by: Ciao

Covered lies, unseen by naked eyes
Footprints trample the new fallen snow
All the pain, hidden by more lies

The pain, you can plainly realize
But no one's supposed to know
Covered lies, unseen by naked eyes

Slipped away, as she passes and dies
Laying on the ground, upon her, you bestow
All the pain, hidden by more lies

Solemn tears fall from reddened eyes
Blood mixed with the lace-white snow
Covered lies, unseen by naked eyes

Hiding in the depths of Death's despise
Where no one has yet to go
All the pain, hidden by more lies

Snow patrol, searching from the skies
All because she didn't say no
Covered lies, unseen by naked eyes
All the pain, hidden by more lies

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
A Villanelle is a nineteen-line poem consisting of a very specific rhyming scheme: aba aba aba aba aba abaa.

The first and the third lines in the first stanza are repeated in alternating order throughout the poem, and appear together in the last couplet (last two lines).