easy way to get rhyming in ur poems

  • Boy
    17 years ago

    hi to all i have some websites. that can help evryone to improve the beauty of thier poem... just type the word it will give u the ryhming words. its gd.. enjoy

    www.rhymezone.com

    www.rhymer.com

  • sibyllene
    17 years ago

    I took your advice. Here is what I came up with. The caps words were the ones that came up with my search of "wake."

    Steak by the Lake

    Every morning when I WAKE
    I fix myself a juicy STEAK
    and in this treasure I PARTAKE
    in my cabin by the LAKE
    with water weedy and OPAQUE.

    There is not much I have at STAKE
    when bread and ceral I FORSAKE,
    and make myself a tender STEAK,
    in my cabin by the LAKE.
    I hope it’s not a BLACK RAT SNAKE.

    Heh heh heh... that line about the black rat snake was just genius. Anyway, moral of the story is - use words that fit in your poem. Don't just use lame rhymes like me.

    p.s. I have to admit, though, I kind of like "with waters weedy and opaque." I might have to actually use that somewhere.

  • xo kisses xo
    17 years ago

    haha...i will definately have to go there sometime!

  • xo kisses xo
    17 years ago

    wow...i checked them out and they have a lot of stuff. i really like www.rhymer.com. they had more word (atleast on the word that i was looking up). thanks for telling about those places!

  • Mark
    17 years ago

    or even rhyme.poetry.com - it's like www.rhymezone.com with out the ads - might have to try go to it twice though

  • Tricky Daze
    17 years ago

    i really liked that site thanks for the guide :)

  • Boy
    17 years ago

    good..

  • Boy
    17 years ago

    its ok carry one. your work