15 and dead...please comment on my poem, post something here and

i wrote a poem about my cousins death. she was fifteen and killed herself for the same reason i want to now. please read my poem and comment on it and please rate it. it means alot to me to hear opinions of other poeple. its called suicide- your free now. if you have time please do the same with the others. i always rate and comment on peoples work tht comment on mine
thanx
oh and if you post back i will also read and comment

okaeys i'm commenting..

thankyou all for taking the time to read it, thankyou so much, ive already commented on some of your work but i will go now and read the rest. thanks again.