New contest *(Kaila)*

ok here are the rules

offer is until March 23 2007
The poem has to be atlest 5 lines long
It has to be angered towards a boy or girl (not related)
I wanna c some anger! lol
1st place 5 comments and favorites
2nd place 4 comments
3rd place 3 comments
4th place 2 comments
5th place 1 comment

thx guys

Die F-cking Trying

The sky can turn the blackest of nights and your threats of tomorrow will always shoot me down,
But I'll hold my head high and practice as I fall, no longer will I let you push me around.

Cry to me and I'll cry the sorriest tears to you; forget who you are and speak through your emotions,
You'll be most surprised what you find, with your dirty thoughts and faithless notions.

Breathe with every deep breath and live until the end of your days with a smile on your face,
Open your arms to all that you can do and let love be the last thing that you embrace.

Be faithful to my memory and don't give up, love me for me, or not at all,
I'll be your perfect little angel if you love me with your heart, I'll be your little doll.

Hold your head high and accept what fate has given you; pray you suffer more;
Do not fight against all the odds -- until death do us part, f-cking w|h|o|r|e.

Take a deep breath now, with a smile on your face and know you are dying,
Let yourself live the way you are; love me for me or die f-cking trying.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Xx So pathetic xX

You look at me
Like I tore out your heart
As if I was using you
Right from the start

But we know thats not true
Because you did the using
And when we were together
I felt like I was losing

I'm not gonna go back
To the arguments and pain
I'm not gonna make all
The same mistakes again

You were the one who ended it
Don't look for sympathy
Don't even think of trying
To pin the blame on me

Boy, it's so pathetic
It's actually quite sad
No one believes your stupid lies
Stop making me look bad

If you really want me back
That's not the way to do it
When will you just realise
When you finished me you blew it ©

*Gem*

Never Again

"Never Again." Isn't that what you said?
You promised to love me, but you love her instead.
No one will ever hurt me like this again.
Some say love's the beginning, I say it's the end.

"Never Again." A promise better left unspoken.
You said you'd heal my heart, but it's lying here broken
"Never Again." Ten letters that mean nothing to you;
Now people stare are I don't know what to do.

"Never Again." Two words with just one meaning.
But I could never imagine you would have this feeling.
You promised me this would never happen again!
I'm sick of the past and the what have been's.

"Never Again." I'm so sick of this pain.
I'll run outside and cry in the rain.
I'm sick of all this. This is going to end.
So I will never have to say "Never Again."

Ciao

here is one if it's is ok to enter, i hope it is, thanks bye

I f***ing hate you
by Nikki

Anger, rage, dismay, betrayal,
his life is looking rather frail,
to take it away would be a breeze,
yet i can't afford the legal fee's,

you damned i hate you- i hope you burn,
you stupid p**** i hope you learn,
f*** you I'll kill you- your not my friend,
you've torn my heart- for that you'll end,

fury burning with passion of sun,
die you b******- you were my only one,
will my love for you forever endure,
i don't think it can ever stay honest and pure...

Mind Games

Even after all these years,
You still try to cause me tears.
What have I done that was so bad,
for You constantly wanting me to be sad?

Told me You slept with my best friend.
When are these mind games going to end?
I fell out with her five years ago,
because I could not help my suspicions show.

Now today You've caused me more pain,
bringing back memories with Your game.
Never again will I let You get to me,
She's forever my friend, why can You not see?

Whatever You do, whatever You say,
our friendships too strong for it to go away.
If it weren't for the kids, You'd be out of my life.
I friggin regret ever becoming Your wife.

You once had control, You still cause me pain,
I've had it with You and your stupid game.
Do me a favour and leave me alone.
I'm so much better now, on my own.

If You want to talk, do NOT ring me,
unless about the kids, just let me be.
You've got your life, let me live mine.
Without your games I will be just fine.

Whatever You say does not mean sh*t.
So give me a break and get over it.
You won't get a reaction, I'm better than that.
I've enough going on without You being a tw*t.

You messed up my life, played with my head.
Sometimes I think You would like me dead.
I've always said I can't hate anyone......
I loathe Your mind games and I'm NOT your fun.

I'm Ready

Rain drops are trying so hard to stop me
Wind's voice is becoming a silent scream
But my belief is strong,my willing is steady
It's not time to give up not now as I'm ready

Cried so many times to release my pain
Fought back with a million ways
But now I'm stronger enough to be insane
Fear of me when I will be ready

You're acting like you don't care as always
But now you see a burning flame in my eyes
Flame's burning to hurt like you did with your lies
I'll distinguish all my hate for you as I'm ready

As lightning's giving me a light of this darkness
Weather gets cold but my inner anger keeps me warm
I won't get enough till you get I'm something that'd harm
You should have known you'd be ended up in hospital
Cos I was ready...........

I hope it can be an old poem,if it can't be then you can count me out

Truths To Face
By: Twisted Heart

Don't say that you will miss me
When I turn and walk away
Your words no longer hurt me
They land on clay today.

Don't think that I will hunger
For the touch that burns like fire
It cannot hold a candle to
The tempted fate's desire.

You think I cannot hope to find
Someone to take your place
But buddy, you've alot to learn
And some truths to face.

Don't wait for me to come running
I won't be looking back
I've tried to do what you want
This time, I'll help you pack.

Now, get your shit together
Or I'll throw it out the door
If you haven't realized
I don't need you any more.

I'm through with trying harder
To please you I can tell
It's not a bit convinient
And you can go to hell.

GLORY BE TO CAPTAIN SMEE

HE SAILS THE SEVEN SEES WITH GLEE

HE PLUNDERS AND PILLAGES, THE COASTAL VILLAGES

SMEE IS RUTHLESS AND CLEVER, HE'LL SAIL ON FOREVER

HE'LL HOIST UP THE YARDARM, WHILE HIS PREY SHOUTS THE ALARM

SMEE CUTS DOWN THEIR MAINMAST, AND CUTS DOWN THEIR CREW TO THE VERY LAST

WHERE SHOULD BE A LEGG, INSTEAD YOU FIND A PEG

ON HIS SHOULDER A PARROT, IN SMEE'S HANDS A GARROTE

OVER SMEE'S EYE A PATCH DOES REST, HE LOOKS MOST FEARSOME UP IN THE CROW'S NEST

WITH THE JOLLY ROGER AS A CAPE CAPTAIN SMEE STOOD WITH A SCOWL, THEN HE LEPT TO THE POOP DECK AND GAVE A GREAT HOWL

HE YANKED DOWN HIS BRITCHES, AND LET LOSE THE SHIT GEYSER

MONTEZUMA'S REVENGE FROM THE WATER, HE SHOULD HAVE BEEN WISER

SMEE STOOD ON THE BRIDGE, AND LOOKED THROUGH HIS SPYGLASS,

HIS DIAHREA EXPENDED, HE HAD PISSED TWENTY GALLONS THROUGH HIS ASS

AND YET HE DID NOT WIPE WELL ENOUGH, HE FELT MANY ITCHES,

LOOKING BEHIND HIM, HE HAD A BIG POOP STAIN ON HIS BRITCHES.

Guideline #4 in terms and guidelines:
Do NOT submit texts in CAPITAL LETTERS.

P.M.S.

They say I have a disorder
and there's a name for it
An abbreviation of letters
for putting up with your shit
You said I'd never find
another quite like you
Looking at our past
I hope that this is true
Now that I'm free
from your burdens full of sin
Time for the real me
to spread my wings again
Hang out with my friends
and watch a girly flick
Talk about the past
and how you were a prick
Eat chocolate for dinner
whenever I get home
To help me get over
this P.M.S. syndrome
In love with this freedom
so don't you even think
I'm even missing you
or dirty bathroom sink
I don't miss the laundry
or skid marks that you left
My gratitude for this
I hope you will accept
No more finding you
on my couch asleep
While I'm busy cleaning
the house you wouldn't keep
Now that you're gone
I don't worry anymore
No more yellow stains
left on the bathroom floor
I won't even mention
all your "shortcomings"
It's better left unsaid
about these type of things
You left the keys to your apartment
on the countertop
Said if I get the urge
when passing by go ahead and stop
Maybe to say hi
and just hang out for awhile
What the hell I figured
as I pulled into your drive
I knew you weren't home
but I let myself inside
Hoping you'll understand
the intentions I implied,
Beer caps I collected
from all those games of Football,
I designed them into a mural
of a jackass on your wall,
There to remind you
there's no one quite like you
I hope you get the picture
that we're finally through
You claim that I am crazy
and should have some therapy
There is a first for everything
On this we can agree

Dixie

“Late Realization”

Why do you do these things to me?
You know how it makes me feel,
And yet for some reason I cannot perceive
I continue to love you still

The anger builds up inside of me
But when you kiss me it all fades away,
It’s hard for me to be mad at you
For even a single day

But one day you’ll push me a little too far
and your kisses just won’t suffice,
When that day comes I hope you realize
we could have had a wonderful life

Wishing I Could
~Forever♥Yours

You don't know me
You don't know all these secrets I've kept,
They're still burning inside me
You don't know all the nights that I've slept,
Wondering why you did this to me
You don't know all the times that I've wept
Thinking of the lies you've spread

You've ruined me,
And everything I've ever been
Not just from the outside,
You ruined me from within

Now it's all different
They don't look at me the same
At least I'm famous now,
But it's the wrong kind of fame

I could be just like you
And tell them all lies,
Or I could tell the truth
And watch the water form in your eyes

I want to do it so bad,
Bring you down and ruin you
I want you to feel the pain I had,
You know I can, just by saying the truth

So you don't know
All the secrets I've kept
All the nights that I've slept
And all those times that I've lied here and wept

Haha! Anger! I hope you like it:

Hatred

You assume that I'm incompetent,
And that I go against your will,
That I sneak,
That I hide,
And that I rush from your side.

Some people aren't like that,
Get it through your head,
I don't want to hear your voice,
Screaming in detest.

I hate how you act,
I hate your voice,
Why don't you just crawl,
Crawl into a ball,
I'll kick you around,
And you'll finally know,
How I truly feel,
Since that's all you've ever done for me.

I Hate You

I hate you, with every ounce that is within me,
You hurt me, but I want you back so badly.
Would you care to know why I want you now?
(So I can beat you as much as my fists will allow)

I hate you. I hate the way you look my way,
"Darling" can't you see that this is just not your day?
It's over. And you know what? That is fine!
You can find someone new; I'll find someone to be mine.

I hate you. The way you always try to get my attention,
When it was you who left when you had my affection.
You know very well I would done anything for you,
Now I see I was just another girl. So good...we're through.

I hate you, but you could never guess how much.
I think I would die if you ever gave me another touch.
You make me so sick. When I see you I feel so sick...
So don't even think I'll retake you, so quick..

~*Who Cares?*~
hope that's angry enough:P

My Violent Heart.

Tears bestowed upon them.
Fear along with pain.
For what you've done
shall put their hearts in vein.

Forgotten yet remembered.
That past will be the past.
But, today was a new start..
And, you pushed it by too fast.

Your own two daughters,
wondering if he'll stay.
Your own two daughters,
broken this very day.

My silent heart can't take this.
Rapidly, rage is building up.
For, you've taken too much control.
And, they're beginning to corrupt.

My mind's ready to explode,
My eyes can't watch it any longer.
You say you want the best for them,
but you're not making them any stronger.

Weaker and weaker the two become.
Until, the end is beneath their nose.
Weaker and weaker the two become.
When he'll leave, neither knows.

The trials they going through.
Three dad's within nine years,
This one may leave again
And, that's their biggest fear.

My silent heart; silent no longer.
My exploding mind; exploding no longer.
My burned eyes; burning no longer..
For, my violent heart has become stronger.

I'm ready to change the way you think.
The truth shall come out, and set them free.
And, you shall realize that..
You and him aren't meant to be.

trust was never a game for me!
Current mood: pissed off
Category: GRRRrrrrrrrrrrRRRRRRRRRRRRR Friends

It Was Never A Game!

tell me what happened
whats happened since you left?
why are you like this now?
i thought you new me best!

why would you believe them
when you know i'm not like that
why would you leave me hanging
do i not get my say?

you don't trust me right
thats what you said
after knowing me so long
thats now how it ends

i used to beg for your forgiveness
when we always used to fight
but this time its not me
its you who gets the bite

it hurts doesn't it
when a true friend is lost
but it hurts even more
when they are never coming back

i don't know whats happened to you
but you aren't who i used to know
your the one that should be sorry
for wasting my time in the first place

no matter what people said
i always stood up for you
i never listened to their bitchy remarks
because i believe in oneselfs own judgment

i trusted you and you knew it
i trusted you with everything
and than you went and blew it
and so down my life goes once again

you think im someone different?
mate... your the one whose changed
and you better start believing
that trust is never a game!

so next time you do see me
remember to look the other way
because i will never forgive
the lies you said about me!

hate couldn't come close
to the way i feel about you now
you used to be my everything
but now, to me, your nothing!

[{Lucy}] its probably as angry as you were hoping haha but yeah i was real angry when i wrote it if that helps
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A thousand years ago,
a trillion miles away,
A war was raging fiercely;
the fate of the universe was in play.

Two factions battling -
the space ninjas, and the awesome Dinobot,
Locked in eternal combat,
across the galaxy they fought.

The space ninjas are fearsome warriors,
trained in the deadly arts,
They are high-tech crusaders;
they traded their shirukens in for laser-darts.

Dinobot is a magnificent robotic beast;
he can fly and shoot energy-beams,
His creator is long gone,
but still his powerful armor gleams.

In their last horrendous battle,
the space ninjas gained the upper hand,
Dinobot was forced to flee the ninjas;
he escaped to a far distant land.

He traversed the breadth of time and space,
and yet the space ninjas pursued,
Finally he landed on a planet,
his powers recharged and renewed.

According to Dinbot’s sensors,
the space ninjas were off his trail,
Yet, a greater danger lurked on the planet,
a beast that we all hail.

From deep within his lair,
a great monster stirred and awoke,
Dinobot had transgressed upon this being’s domain,
and that is no laughing joke.

This creature, this fiend,
this legend from eons ago,
Stands fifty stories tall,
and still continues to grow.
His fangs are razor sharp;
his eyes are blood red,
His claws drip with rotting gore,
from prey long-since dead.
With skin green and scaly,
and a row of plates down his back,
The Great Gargantor emerged from his dwelling,
and prepared to go on the attack.

The ground trembled beneath his gait;
destruction is Gargantor’s spoor,
When he scented Dinobot’s trail,
he unleashed a mighty roar.

Dinobot’s array of sensors,
gave warning of Gargantor’s status,
But he underestimated the Green Goliath,
and trusted his high-tech apparatus.

On the plain of Varfleet,
the two giants met face to face,
A conflict for the ages,
each the last of their race.

Gargantor leapt forward,
and let loose a bloodcurdling shriek,
Dinobot gnashed his beak,
and emitted an electronic squeak.

And just as the two foes met,
in a titanic clash of metal on might,
The space ninjas arrived on the scene,
and immediately joined in the fight.

With Gargantor and Dinobot locked in combat,
the space ninjas opened fire,
They shot laser beams from their spaceships;
death to both monsters was their desire.

As it is commonly known,
laser beams cannot penetrate the Great gargantor’s skin,
It merely made the beast furious,
and gave him an insatiable drive to win.

He flailed about with his stubby arms,
and smashed a space ninja ship out of the air,
Then he ignored the annoying ninja,
dismissing the buzzing flies without a care.

Dinobot squawked with pain,
as a ninja blast caused a great sting,
Then Gargantor struck with fury,
and ripped off his entire left wing.

Dinobot had underestimated Gargantor;
his robotic systems were easily overpowered,
He could not survive further battle,
or he would surely be devoured.

Executing an emergency escape,
Dinobot’s head blasted away into space,
His torso remained behind,
and most of the space ninjas gave chase.

The space ship that Gargantor smashed,
did not become a ninja tomb,
They survived the crash,
and went on to oppose the forces OF Doom!

Good luck everyone!

good luck to you and every1 else. :)

good luck everyone!
Ciao

when is this over????

When's judging gonna take place??

wasnt this sposed to finish days ago haha wheres the judge?

I agree...

good luck everyone anyway :)

Wasn't this suppposed to end on the 23rd?

Yup, still waiting.

Ok where is Kaila?? somehow I don't think this is going to get judged :(

Darn. I don't know, I hope she didn't forget!

Is she on vacation or something?

I don't know.

Hey guys if your looking for the judge of this poem i've seen her in the request comments area lately so someone might wanna track her down their :)

^^^
Thanks.
I asked her in one of her threads. See if she responds.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

She emailed me and said that someone would have to pick up the judging. She can't access the contest boards . . . I'd say that's a lie, but nonetheless, someone needs to judge this or we forget about it. =/

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

I'm not a very good judge, and I submited a poem. I know someone who might be able to judge this though.

Haha! She can. Her name is Yuna.

Sounds exciting.
Get her in here. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

She'll probably judge in a day or two. The suspense :D

My name is Yuna and I can judge this contest for you all. There are a lot of entries so I shall get started right away! Kepp checking back cause I should be done in a day or two.