EVERYONE Gets a prize bby. :]

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    Okay.
    I want happy friendship poems.

    Rules:
    1: Must be happy FRIENDSHIP poem.
    -If love poem, or anything other than friendship, you will be disqualified.
    2: Must be at least 5 lines long.
    3: You must have fun!!!
    4: Must be in by March 30th. :]

    Okay, those are the rules.

    Prizes-

    1: First Place will get 10 comments.
    2: Seconds & Third Place will get 7 Comments.
    3: Fourth& Fifth place will get 5 comments.
    4: Everyone else will get 2.

    :]
    Good Luck Everyone.

  • ŘÅÇĦ♥
    17 years ago

    I Can't Promise
    by ŘÅÇĦ♥

    I can't promise I'll always be By your side to give you a hug
    But I will be on the other side of the phone.
    I can't promise everything will be alright
    because sometimes I know it won't.
    But I will do my best to help you.

    I can't promise I'll stop your tears
    but i'll cry with you!
    You cry silent tears
    but they fall so loud.
    But some day I'll be able to catch them.

    I can't promise I'll catch you when you fall
    But hey I always wanted to fly.
    And I'll hold your hand all the way down!

    I can't promise you I can get you outta you hole
    To tell the truth I'm right there with you
    But I can help ease your pain

    I can't promise I can make you better
    When you feel like you're not strong enough to go on
    But I can be strong for you

    I can't promise to give you a reason to live
    when you can't take it anymore.
    But I hope you would choose to live and stay here with me. No matter what trails we have to go throw at least we'll have each other.

    And I can't promise
    That things will be ok soon
    But I can promise that I"ll love you

    Now,
    Forever,
    And always.

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    Can they be old poems?

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    yes they can, hunni.

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    You and Me
    By Sarah Elliott

    Walking in the dark
    You stand beside me
    Crying in the rain
    My tears you see

    You see my pain
    And help me through
    You understand me
    Not many do

    If I feel down
    I know you'll be there
    If my heart is broken
    I know you'll care

    If I need an answer
    I'll come to you
    If I have any doubts
    You'll know what to do

    You see your my best friend
    And always will be
    This is just the beginning
    Of you and me

  • Avrii Monrielle
    17 years ago

    Nobody Cries

    I see him,
    Back straight,
    Eyes wide open,
    Looking at
    The sky

    In all its glory
    He opens the window
    Staring out
    Hoping for better
    Tomorrows

    I want to
    Hug him, hold him
    Tight, so that
    He won't melt away
    From my reach

    He stares into space
    The air his window
    The seat my arms
    The floor, sadness
    The walls, a trap

    My arms surround him,
    Sinking in, invisibly,
    I hold him, in my head
    I hug him, I talk to him,
    Whisper in his ear

    Like he did to me,
    Although he didn't know,
    What I felt, how I felt
    Around the first few
    Days we met

    He changed me
    Just a little
    At first, I didn't open
    Up, but in the end
    We grew closer

    His smile, his laugh
    Every secret, pout,
    I cherish, deep down
    His jokes, his sweetness
    Penetrate ice

    The days we met
    Grew; here he is
    I see him, I know him
    My friend; I can see
    What he's like

    I want to tell him
    It's okay, please smile
    Let's play
    A game, one more
    Get rid of the pain

    Boys don't cry
    That's what's sad
    He never talks
    About mom or dad
    Wishing away

    We joke, laugh,
    Forget everything;
    No more sadness
    When I see him, I know
    He'll cheer me up

    The days are rough
    I hate the hours
    But it turns around
    When we reach class
    And act out

    Of ourselves, we
    Can talk for hours;
    Every minute, a life
    No more sadness
    Just joy

    We don't see the pain,
    The hidden tears,
    We laugh it all away
    This is why, for an hour a day
    Nobody cries

  • Coeur Cassa Sage
    17 years ago

    Best Friends

    I got your back
    you got mine;
    I'll help you out
    Anytime
    To see you hurt
    To see you cry
    Makes me weep
    And wanna die
    And if you agree
    To never fight
    It wouldn't matter
    Who's wrong or right
    If a broken heart
    Needs a mend
    I'll be right there
    Till the end
    If your cheeks are red
    From drops of tears
    Don't worry
    Let go of your fears
    Hand in hand
    Love is sent,
    We'll be friends
    Till the end

  • Liz
    17 years ago

    I wrote this a long time ago. I THINK this is 'qualified'. If it's not then let me know. lol.

    When Laughing Makes You Cry

    When you thought you couldn't take it,
    your whole day was going bad.
    Everything was getting worse,
    everybody got you mad.

    You talk to your best friends,
    only in them you can confide.
    They bring a smile to your face
    and they don't even have to try.

    They make you giggle and laugh
    you don't have to fake a smile.
    It makes you feel so much better,
    even if its only for a while.

    You're having such a good time
    there's not a thing that you would change.
    Only they can make you happy,
    and for nothing in exchange.

    You laugh until your stomach hurts
    'til its too hard for you to breathe.
    But you enjoy the pain you feel
    and in a way you feel relieved.

    You laugh until your tears pour out
    and your face is red and sore.
    But its the best pain that you've felt,
    this really is worth crying for.

    So if a tear rolls down your cheek,
    don't ever let it dry.
    Times like these are worth the tears,
    when laughing makes you cry.

    © Poetess

  • Bridget
    17 years ago

    I just finished writing this about 10 minutes ago. Hope it's ok :)

    I'll Be There For You
    by ~BRiDDY~

    I'll be your perfect wings,
    when you need help soaring through the sky.
    My shoulder will always be here,
    when you're down and need to cry.

    I'll bring you rainbows and sunshine,
    when skies over you are grey.
    I'll be your handy tool-box,
    at the end of a broken day.

    When no one else is around,
    I'll be the crowd who cares about you.
    I'll help you make decisions,
    when you don't know what to do.

    I'll help you back onto your feet,
    if you happen to stumble and fall.
    My hand is here to hold if you get scared,
    all you need to do is call.

    I'll be your loudest cheerleader,
    when things are going great for you.
    And when your life is one big lie,
    you can rely on me to stay true.

    All these things I'll do and be for you,
    are all part of being a friend.
    I'll be your friend through thick and thin,
    and NONE OF IT will be pretend.

  • swill
    17 years ago

    Friend

    From the darkness of misery
    to the light of this day...
    your truthful words and kindred heart, my friend
    through thick and thin, has shown me the way
    and you have transformed me....

    .....from the darkness of misery,
    to the sweet dew of glee.

  • Jessica
    17 years ago

    Friends [Pleiades]by .b.r.o.k.e.n.

    Following you slowly through each and every life
    Filling in small gaps that sadly love could not fill
    Fluttering angels eternally dedicated to care for you
    Fitting easily into your life, like a key into a lock
    Flowers on a baby tree, beauty floating in the air
    Flowing rivers of love, elegantly swirling around
    Friends here, friends there, friends are everywhere..

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    A Pleiades is a poem where only one word is allowed in the title, followed by a seven-line stanza. The first word in every line must begin with the same letter as the word in the title

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  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    Secrets
    by `&& lOve*

    No one but me will ever know,
    So many things you're afraid to show.
    Hiding so much from the crazy world out there.
    You can never trust anyone; they may not care.

    Secrets locked away inside a sturdy vault.
    You and I both know that it's not your fault.
    Smile and laugh as the world passes you by.
    To many you're just some teenage guy.

    No one knows how deep your mind has gone.
    How far in the recesses you've been forced to withdrawn.
    But you let me in, and that's fine with me.
    Sharing secrets no one else will see.

    My best friend, my half, through all of my days;
    Helping each other, giving advice in many ways.
    Sharing our troubles and sharing our laughter,
    Finally the friend that I have sought after.

    Ciao

  • Twisted Heart
    17 years ago

    Daisy Chains
    By: Twisted Heart

    As little girls we used to sit
    Among the daisies in the glen
    And chain the flowers all together
    Our friendship then, would never end

    As we reached our days as teens
    With first love, broken hearts we'd share
    When you saw one of us
    The other one was always there.

    We graduated from high school
    Together in our college days
    It wasn't until we each got married
    That we went our separate ways.

    Many miles were there between us
    Each facing trials of our own
    But through the years we lent hope
    To each other on the phone.

    And travel through these many years
    We'd chance to meet from time to time
    And see each other through all the pain
    That clutched our hearts and tore our minds.

    Our children grown and here we are
    Two souls that swore to never part
    But though the distance in between
    Has never seemed to stay our hearts

    We've lived our lives through daisy chains
    For many years have bound us fair
    With comfort to each one of us
    When life has been to hard to bare.

    I know I have but to call your name
    And somehow you will see
    The friendship in those daisy chains
    Bind us together, you and me..

  • emmerz
    17 years ago

    Friends Forever

    Through good and bad
    Both happy and sad
    Ive counted on you
    To count on me too

    So many regrets
    I could say that I get
    But they would not be true
    Cause Ive confided in you

    Through bitter fights
    And endless nights
    Of giggling under the covers
    And never scheming about the other

    You never have to say
    A single word of dismay
    I hope that I can understand
    All of your dreams and plans

    I know that line
    When you say everything is fine
    I want to know the truth
    To guide and help you

    We can listen to the songs
    We can even sing along
    All of us with our air guitars
    Singing in front of the mirror

    The inside jokes no one gets
    Make it the best year yet
    All of us so close
    We never feel alone

    Youve reached into my soul
    Lifted it beyond control
    Given thought to my cares and worries
    Even when you were in a hurry

    The simple truth is that
    No matter who is there
    We will stay together
    True Friends forever

    ---Emily

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    oh. i love them all. :]
    great job.
    keep 'em coming, everyone.

  • Ashleigh Skye
    17 years ago

    Not Your Traditional Friendship
    By: Ashleigh Skye

    My best friend cannot talk to me,
    but she's always there when I cry,
    she helps me stand up off the floor,
    and on her I can always rely.

    She always wipes my tears away,
    and never leaves me side,
    she always listens to what I have to say,
    and from her I can never hide.

    She can always sense when I need her,
    and to my rescue she does come,
    showing me that she loves me,
    cheering me up when I'm feeling glum.

    She can always see through my disguises,
    when no one else has a clue,
    and she's never ashamed of me,
    not matter what I do.

    She loves me unconditionally,
    and would protect me with her life,
    and I know she wouldn't even think twice,
    on jumping between me and a knife.

    She is my best friend in the world,
    however human she is not,
    four legs and a tail,
    is what my best friend's got.

    Some would call her a bi*ch,
    but I just call her my friend,
    because I know she will stay with me,
    until the very end.

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Xx Turn My Sky To Blue xX

    One upon a time
    My sky was dark
    Shrouded in shadow
    Empty and stark

    There was no light
    No room for dreams
    It's just depression
    As the common theme

    But then came a spark
    A small ray of hope
    It was a lifeline
    A magical rope

    It lit up the night
    Banished the grey
    Gave birth to colour
    Started a new day

    It painted a portrait
    With brilliant dye
    Displaced the darkness
    And lit up the sky

    This brand new me
    Is all because of you
    The day you came along
    And turned my sky to blue ©

    *Gem*

    (Dedicated to Marcus. My true love and my bestest ever friend!)

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    anyone else want to join?

    you guys have done a fantastic job so far. : ]

  • Bridget
    17 years ago

    cool does this close today?

  • Sarah Ann
    17 years ago

    As Time Lets Us Be

    by Sarah Ann

    As the sun and stars start to slip away
    And cloudy skies make up your day
    And as the wind blows off your trust
    I'll be there when everything's unjust

    No matter however lost you feel
    And when you know the pain is real
    Trust in me and I'll stand right behind
    When everything feels out of line

    I will try to weaken all your fears
    And kiss away unwanted tears
    For you I owe my heart and soul
    And I'll give you strength, my love, my all

    Nothing will keep me from your reach
    I will listen when you cannot speak
    I will see you when the world can't see
    And keep you close in heart to me

    Do not fear the fake and guile laughs
    I will be true as long as friendship lasts
    And though it seems like much to say
    I promise to make things okay

    Through times of need and many cries
    My light of bonding never died
    Because in you I seen the world
    So adequate for any girl

    Of course one day our lives won't meet
    For both would be gone on our feet
    But I'd like to say till death do us part
    You will have my ample piece of heart

    And you will always be precious to me
    As long as time allows us to be
    And I hope that if you ever fear
    Call on me and just know I'm here

  • ŘÅÇĦ♥
    17 years ago

    When's the judging?
    -Rachel

  • Coeur Cassa Sage
    17 years ago

    Its past the deadline. Not to be naggy or anything.

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    Winners:
    First:
    Twisted Heart - Daisy Chains.

    Second & Third:
    Poetess Call Me Glen-Duh! -When Laughing Makes You Cry.
    & Sarah Ann- As Time Lets Us Be.

    Fourth & Fifth:
    Ashley Skye - Not Your Traditional Friendship.
    & Infected With His Deadly Love - You and Me

    ++Everyone did an amazing job. It was quite hard to judge, which is why it took so long. Sorry. :|

    Let me know if you have any specific poems you'd like to be commented on.

    -teria.

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    Thanks for the placing. Any poems will do.
    Congrats everyone.

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    Congrats Winners :)

    Ciao

  • Liz
    17 years ago

    Ooh! Thanksss!! And congrats everyone else! =]

    I don't even remember my own titles. Er. The latest ones will do. =]

  • Sarah Ann
    17 years ago

    Wow, thank you! Congrats winnerrsss!!!

    Any of my newest will do also. =D

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Congrats people!

    so the rest of us get 2 right?

  • Bridget
    17 years ago

    congratz everyone!!
    does everyone else get 2 comments?

  • Twisted Heart
    17 years ago

    First Place, thanks. You can do any of mine that you want.

    Congrats to all.

    Jeannie

  • Bridget
    17 years ago

    Thanku for the comments! :]