Mmm. Smells Like A Contest.

Can I please reserve Admit it?

Does it have to be related to the song?... If not I will reserve Admit it too please... if that's ok... If it does have to relate to the song then I am sorry for wasting your time xx

Also can't do the exclaimation mark because my keyboard is a bit messed up and the numbers/symbols at the top don't work *doh

I agree... does it have to go with the song? ... I wanna do 'Woe' :) But I don't know that song I just came up with a good idea for writing thats all...

An orgy of critics please x

Definately.
Orgy of Crititcs.
Whooo I'm excited about this title. . . [[Gets excited face on.]]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

I will reserve Every Man Has a Molly. Will post it shortly!

Every man has a Molly
Perfect in every way
Curly hair
That any man can barely bare
Red rose lips
Nice small hips
Big brown eyes
And to their surprise
A gift when they get home
Smooth voice
When they hear it they rejoice
But what about Mea?
No, I am imperfect
My hair is straight
From my long hair's weight
My lips are pink
And cause the men to not think
My hips are big
And look like a pig
Small blue eyes
Of which I despise
A rough sound
Like the bark of a hound
But very man has a Molly
Not a Mea

I hope that's ok!

I'm not, I actually have a boyfriend(YAY!!!! I LOVE HIM TO DEATH!!!!) Ahem, anyway, I wrote it that way because of many reasons. #1- First, I felt like that last year. EVERYONE had a love and I didn't. #2- I didn't just want to describe Molly, I wanted to compare her to something. So, I chose me. I thought it would be easier for me to do me. And it was!!! P.S. That is how I thought of myself last year. LOVE TO ALL!

Could I please reserve "The Spider-Song"?

Thanks.

Reserve "Orgy of Critics"

Orgy of Critics {Kyrielle Sonnet}

The dice of life we scorned and threw,
'You can't cheat life!' Reaper mimcs --
With lies that are casually true --
I am an orgy of critics.

A bucket to cover your eyes
To number the great statistics,
May he rape you of your alibi;
I am an orgy of critics.

I am a close-call bad habit,
With a heart greatly acidic,
I will seduce you with quick wit --
I am an orgy of critics.

The dice of life we scorned and threw;
I am an orgy of critics.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

The Spider-Song
by HiddenxSoul

“Itsy bitsy spider,” that’s what my momma sang
With her strong Scottish accent, and an American twang.
She sang it in the daytime, and then again at night.
It seemed to cure my worries, for things that gave me fright.

How ironic is that? That something so frightful,
Could calm me right down, it’s somehow delightful.
A story of a spider, an ugly hairy beast;
A simple bedtime tale, that seemed to scare me least.

So I thank my momma now, for telling me about,
The itsy bitsy spider, that tried to climb its spout.
It helped me when I was younger, I slept all night long,
Just because my momma sang me, The Spider-Song.

Admit it.
By Sarah

Admit it
You never loved me
I was only fun for you

Admit it
You never really cared
I wasn't the one

Admit it
You never told the truth
I was the fool

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Sorry its not that good.

Can I still reserve and do "Woe"?

Admit It!

I have felt like giving up,
a lot over the years.
When I seriously think about life,
I realise others cry many more tears.

(I'll admit it)

All You hear is bad these days,
but if You look around.
You'll see there's beauty and happiness,
and plenty of it to be found.

(Admit it!)

There's a memory hidden away,
that can always bring a smile.
However silly or however small,
it will bring joy for a while.

(Admit it!)

Sometimes life it treats You tough,
things may rarely go your way.
Normally things will start to look up,
if You fight this life and stay.

(Admit it!)

If there was only good news shown,
You'd see it outweighed the bad.
Then the life that You've been given,
would make You feel glad.

(Admit it!)

Tried to write an inspirational poem because I'm poorly and wanted to cheer myself up lol... Hope it's ok.

Xx Orgy Of Critics xX

At the end of the day
Who are we trying to impress
Dying our hair different colours
And trying to weigh less

Everyone is trying hard
To be someone their not
You should just be happy
With the life you've got

Taking part in silly diets
In the race to be as thin
As the girls in magazines
Cos being fat is such a sin

Pasting on all of the make-up
Buying all designer clothes
Always pouting and frowning
In an supermodel pose

It's an orgy of critics
That we're trying to impress
When did our world get into
This super shallow mess?

*Gem*

Copyright©GemmaStott2007

(I tried...)

Woe

Woe unto her who died by Cupid,
Trusting him with her heart...
Then her 'Knight in Shining Armor'
Decided to rip her life apart.

Woe unto him who became a father.
Killing an angel's sweet innocence.
Now the angels scarred for life,
Always scared and searching for guidance.

Woe unto them who think of fun.
Those who like to toy with fate.
They think they'll live forever...
But then they'll realize it's too late.

Woe unto humanity, filled with violence.
Always killing one and each other.
They need to step back and realize.
That the "enemy" is really "brother."

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This is the first poem that a written as a scripture. I wrote it to really make people think. Hope you can understand it.

Thank you!

Well, I'm going to loose!!!

^^^
Keep your head high. Never give up.
And besides, what matters is if [you] like your poem. If you do, that's all that matters. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Thankyou. The only reason I said that was because the person who is doing the same topic as I did really good.

^^^
Maybe I'm just insane, but there is no poem posted for "Every Man Has A Molly" [or whatever it is] besides you, dear... Did they delete their account? =/ Or am I just blind and kept skipping over it?

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

I am utterly excited. Winning in both categories; I'm so happy!
Thank you for the great title; I had so much fun writing it and I was really proud of it. So, thank you. =]

My Titles: [Have fun, read them with no malice, and smile when reading them - all poems are better that way. :] ]

01. The Messenger {Trijan Refrain}
02. Me, I'm Not {Trijan Refrain}
03. Babylon {Ode}
04. Orgy of Critics {Kryielle Sonnet}
05. You Make My Heart Itch [With Regret] {Parquette}
06. Midnight Massacre
07. La, La, Lie {Triquatrain}
08. Not To Arouse Suspicion {Terzanelle}
09. Bullet To My Valentine {Rondeau}
10. Die F-cking Trying
11. A Conspiracy {Triolet}
12. Beauty Vs. Beast

Twelve.. Wow. It's a lot. I hope you enjoy them. =] I tried to give you the best ones, and if not the best, ones with a moral behind it [basically #12.] Oh, and to make it easy on you, they're in order from most recent to least. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

I trust you. =]
Take your time, I understand. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

:O Wow. I was not expecting that. Thank you so much.

Umm, 12 comments. Sheesh, that's a lot! Right, could you please do:

`You Were So Innocent Then
`Fallen Leaves
`Vanilla Sky {Terzanelle}
`The Morning Sun
`Dark Blue
`Secret Sensations
`Little Cup of Death
`Does this Darkness Have a Name?
`Mascara Bleeds
`A Better Way
`Mirrors Hide the Truth
`The Devil's Laugh

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Take your time. And thanks again!

Thanks so much :] I really enjoyed this contest...

Could You please do:

What I Believe
Admit It!
Magic Moments [Snow]
In The End It'll Be Alright

Thankyou xx

Thankyou so much!!! Please comment on Why?, Tears and Blood, My Life is Screwed Up, and The Ancient Speech. I have realized I'm not much of a poet, but your comments could help me actually become one!!! lmao.

You have no idea how shocked I am lol! Thank you so much! Here's my titles:

1. Warped and Twisted
2. The Bell
3. Forbidden Love
4. Death.
5. Death (Part Two)
6. Trapped In Time
7. Into My Head
8. Footprints
9. Too Far
10. You Have My Heart
11. Do I Know You?
12. Chaotic Mind

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Again thank you so much! And on the Death. ... Part two also.. if they are too long ... lol .. you don't have to do them... I'll understand.. Thanks!

Congrats everyone!

My two lastest please =)

Congrats all! x

I'm glad you liked them. Thank you so much! :)

Please do:
-Dig my grave [Parquette]:
-Spilled perfume.

Thank you.

Mooie --
Thank you for the wonderful comments and thank you for reading something to your mother of mine. I don't know why, but that just made me smile.
And I'm glad you laughed during some of my poems. That's my goal, some of the time. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

You know on my poem You Have My Heart... I had:

I'm trying to walk when you make me weak,
I have to tell you I love you each week.

A lot of people said thats a bad rhyme what do you think of this:

I'm trying to walk when you make me crawl.
Drooling over the phone, waiting for your call.

:) Does that sound any better?

Thank you so much for the comments on my poems. It means a lot!

:] Happy Easter.