SoSickOfTears's NEW Contest!!

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    CLOSED FOR JUDGING! COSED FOR JUDGING!

    No need to reserve, I will take all entries before the closing date.

    Closing Date: 31st March 2007

    Prizes:
    1st Place- 7 comments and votes and added to faves.
    2nd Place-5 comments
    3rd Place-3 comments.

    Have fun!
    xxx

  • Beautiful Chaos
    17 years ago

    Loving

    Love me through til' morning,
    Hold me deep inside,
    My head upon your beating heart,
    Tells me not to hide.

    You've lulled me into happiness,
    Now love is all I see,
    Pain is something in the past,
    Of which now I'm free.

    Nothing here can harm me,
    You are all I need,
    Shutting out the prying world,
    So our souls may feed.

  • Kalgalath
    17 years ago

    Everlasting Splendour

    Some have beauty for a shot time,
    But yours is always there
    You are always in your prime,
    And no one even compares

    Your glamour,
    Which is worthy of an angel
    It compels me to be enamored,
    By your enchanting spell

    One look into your eyes,
    I am caught in a snare
    Soaring to the sky,
    My heart goes up into the air

    My world is turned around,
    Everything falling out of place
    I am about to break down,
    With not too much grace

    You are nearly flawless,
    With little erroneous
    Not being your voice,
    Which is extraordinarily harmonious

    I could listen for hours,
    Lost in a fantasy
    The tone of your voice,
    Setting me free

    Such a sweet sound,
    Mingled with your eyes
    It never makes me frown,
    Only making me fly

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Xx Can You Feel The Love Tonight xX

    The candles flicker, softly gently
    Bathing your voice in a soft warm glow
    You massage my shoulders so tenderly
    Kneading out the tension like a pro

    Lying here enveloped in your arms
    A simple hug just means so much
    A tender kiss on my collarbone
    My body is yearning for your touch

    Our fingers intertwine together
    Clutching each others hands so tight
    Our eyes meet with unspoken words
    "Can you feel the strength of this love tonight?"

    The candles flicker, softly, gently
    Burning slowly down to a waxy heap
    As inky darkness settles across the room
    We curl together in a blissful sleep ©

    *Gem*

  • Tricky Daze
    17 years ago

    Music Of The Night(A Fairytale In 1940)

    On radio Nat King Cole screams a sad song
    He is the best of my age that 1940 and more
    Maybe I shouldn't listen him,I'm doing wrong
    Cos I'm not as sorrowful as i was before

    To hear his breathing when he's sleeping
    A violin's relaxing voice from the next door
    A strong whisper comes cos of the wind blowing
    Or just to listen my happy dog's snore

    He woke up when he felt me near
    Kissed my hand that with his ring charmingly
    He quickly took of the dress I was to wear
    Had me completely when stars wink at me

    Felt the rhythm in my head in this lovely mansion
    Started to dance with him when his smile's bright
    Our kisses'll melt the sky,the sound of our passion
    He will be my music of all through the night

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    You Are My Everything
    by Ciao

    A tender kiss on my lips
    A hand snakes around my waist
    Spinning around up until
    We're standing face to face

    You brush the fall hair away
    I smile up at you
    You've opened the door to the light
    And now it shines on through

    You look down at me
    In your eyes, you have this look
    I know exactly what it means
    I can read you like a book

    We're standing there, staring
    Smiling, it lights up your face
    Ever since you came to me
    My fear has been replaced

    I have your hoodie, all warm inside
    In exchange, you have my ring
    With you, I'll share the world
    You Are My Everything

  • Leanne
    17 years ago

    Journey of love.

    Diamonds are a girls best friend
    Thats how the lyrics go
    To me you are that diamond
    With a warm enticing glow

    Without you in my life
    I wouldn't know my place
    Each moment spent together
    Puts a smile upon my face

    Your love, like an addiction
    I'm always wanting more
    Its you I long to hold at night
    So special, the one I adore

    A part of me had died away
    You re-ignited that spark
    Scared at first, now fearless
    On this journey of love I embark

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    Healing Heart

    Restoring a heart once shattered and hurt
    Cared and coddled, then tossed in the dirt.
    You picked it up and blew off the dust
    Rebuilt understanding, compassion and trust.
    You removed the pieces of it's last owner
    The man who made it feel like a loner
    But now with you, it's starting to heal
    Moving past broken, and desiring to feel
    Holding onto your hand, reading your soul
    Finding pieces of you to make it whole
    You were the answer to fixing the pain
    To keep it from drowning in it's own rain
    Every reason it had to quit and walk away
    Was defeated by you because you stayed.
    Without your love to share with this heart
    I could still be in the rain, falling apart.
    That's how I know, you and I will always be
    Together in love, for an eternity.

    By: Charisma*

  • Coeur Cassa Sage
    17 years ago

    I don't really do happy, but I'll give it a go!!!

    Happily Ever After

    I am the princess
    Stuck in the tower
    You sit on the ground
    So we can talk for an hour
    I am that princess
    That slept and slept
    You were the one
    Who's kiss revived me which I'll never forget
    Yes, I am that damsel
    Who bit into the apple
    And when I awoke to your loving face
    We wed in the chapel
    I am that princess
    Who was the fox under the lion's rule
    You were Robin
    Who made the king look like a fool
    I was that very same princess
    Who wished I had legs
    I went to the sea witch
    And begged and begged
    I met you on the shore
    With no voice
    But we still fell in love
    Though you had another choice
    Each story ends happily
    Just like mine
    I am the princess
    And you are the prince
    Who rescues me when I'm in distress
    And for that I give you a kiss
    Not all stories end happliy
    I'm lucky mine did
    I knew it would for when we met
    My heart did not forbid
    Just so we could live
    Happily Ever After

    I hope that's ok!!!

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    closed! yay! lol

    Ciao

  • Coeur Cassa Sage
    17 years ago

    WOOT WOOT!!! CANT WAIT!!!

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    17 years ago

    aw:(((( dang

    i didnt see this contest until today -cries-

  • Coeur Cassa Sage
    17 years ago

    It's ok *pats back*- there are plenty of contests.

  • Coeur Cassa Sage
    17 years ago

    Ok, when are the results going to be posted?

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    I now have the winners =)
    1st Place-*Charisma*
    2nd Place-*Gem*
    3rd Place- ♥ leanne ♥

    If you would leave the titles you would like commenting, I will get to them A.s.a.p

    Thank you to everyone who entered, and may I say all of these poems are wonderful!
    xxx

  • Coeur Cassa Sage
    17 years ago

    Congrads!

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    Congrats winners!

    Ciao~

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    WOW! I wasn't expecting first!!! Thank you and congrats to everyone!
    If you could comment my most recent seven that would be great!
    Thanks again!!!! :)
    Charisma*

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Eeep! lol
    Yay, can you comment my latest. Thank you!!!
    Congrats everyone!
    *Gem*

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    I am only here today for a short while, so I will get to your poems after Easter, that way I don't have to rush through reading them.
    Thanking in adance for patience =)
    xxx