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Okay, in this contest you should use the form of a Parquette. There are four different catagories and 3 poems for each. You can reserve a spot, but if you do not post within a week it will become unreserved again.

The contest will end on :: 6th APRIL

.Rules.

`Can be new or old
`Only one poem per person
`No profanity
`Must be yours

.Prizes.

`1st Place - 4 Comments/Rates
`2nd Place - 3 Comments/Rates
`3rd Place - 2 Comments/Rates
`Honorable Mention - 1 Comment/Rate

.Catagories.

Dark ::

`Lush.Fcuk-*
`Infected With his Deadly Love
`

Love ::

``&& lOve* [Done]
`Itallion Stallion [Done]
`*Gem*

Errotic ::

`Carrie
`Romantic Lover
`

Sadness ::

`Poetess Call Me Glen-Duh!
`xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
`[[*~Lucy~*]]

.Parquette.

It has four stanzas, each containing four lines.The first line of the poem is repeated in every stanza as the first line. Each line except the first has 10-12 syllables. The rhyme scheme is "abca abcb acbc abcc"

Here is an example ::

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/explicit/poems.php?explicit=1&id=785986

Whooo!
I'll reserve.
Just reserve . . . I'm not sure what topic I'll end up with. I write when an ideal comes and only the end of the poem can tell the genre. =]

Oh, and I've attempted this stupid form twice and messed it up, so keep a watchful eye and make sure I do it right. . . third time's the charm! ;]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

I'll post an old one I did. Love the style!

My Heart [Parquette]
by `&& lOve*

Mystery hides deep in my heart.
Conveying thoughts left only to the unseen
Hiding away the scars of yesterday
You stole away a tiny, little part

Mystery hides deep in my heart.
At times, the secrets make me want to scream
All I want is for you to come back and stay
And to stop these tears that constantly stream

Mystery hides deep in my heart.
And the memories that my heart tries to convey
How could I feel this at barely sixteen?
I just don't know what else there is to say

Mystery hides deep in my heart.
As I try to pass off my manner as serene
I just want to hear those three words you say
And I pray to God you'll come back to me one day

Ciao

I'll TRY. Reserve one under......sadness?

Thank you!

I would like to reserve one under erotic, I have been trying to play with new styles so this should be great :)

Lust

Such sultry lips of toxic lust,
They burn through me igniting a fever,
My senses are on fire and I am lost,
Every inch of my being ready to bust.

Such sultry lips of toxic lust,
They should never have come to creation,
Gods sweet temptations to test my poor soul,
Have now left me with great inspiration.

Such sultry lips of toxic lust,
Are slowly cascading over my shape,
I'm melting inside, you're drinking me down,
Even if I could, I wouldn't escape.

Such sultry lips of toxic lust,
They have left me here trembling with want,
You are the sweetest sin I've ever known,
And love is a slave, to what you have grown.

I'll reserve one under Love

Amongst all odds (Parquette)
by Italian Stallion

Amongst all odds
I've come to find a love close to my heart
A love unlike any other I've seen
A love in which makes me ponder and prod

Amongst all odds
I've found "the one" I want to love and never part
I just wish I could've at least foreseen
This love within my heart from the very start

Amongst all odds
I'd like to move forward with my love and convene
Hold each other close and never depart
Let me be your king and you my love can be queen

Amongst all odds
I've found the one for my passionate heart
The one in which I don't want to demean
I just want to be absolutely serene

© Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion

I'll reserve under love please x

Xx I Fell In Love xX

I fell in love with a special guy
He put my broken heart back together again
Wiped away the tears and showed me the light
Gave my soul wings and taught me how to fly

I fell in love with a special guy
He showed me all the things that love could contain
Painted a picture with a romantic sight
Where love is released from the hurt and pain

I fell in love with a special guy
He has helped me through each day and each night
Released me from the bind of the heartbreak chain
Took me in his arms and held on to me tight

I fell in love with a special guy
He showed me how easy love is to maintain
Because when you're in love there's no need to fight
Love is the only cure that makes everything right ©

*Gem*

(Parquette - It has four stanzas, each containing four lines.The first line of the poem is repeated in every stanza as the first line. Each line except the first has 10-12 syllables. The rhyme scheme is "AbcaAbcbAcbcAbcc")

Thanks everyone, it's great to see so much participation. I'm just going to check over them now to make sure all the rules were followed. =]

Sheena, I would love to reserve you a spot but it would be helpful if you could tell me what catorgory becuase as you can see love is already gone. But take your time, I will definetely keep a spot for you, it just might be one you don't want. =P

Anyone else? We still have plenty of spots left!

[[MISTAKES]]

My Heart [Parquette]
by `&& lOve*

Mystery hides deep in my heart.
Conveying thoughts left only to the unseen
Hiding away the scars of yesterday
You stole away a small, little part - [Only 9 syllables]

Mystery hides deep in my heart.
At times, the secrets make me want to scream
All I want is for you to come back and stay
And to stop these tears that constantly stream

Mystery hides deep in my heart.
And the memories that my heart tries to convey
How could I feel this at barely sixteen?
I just don't know what else there is to say

Mystery hides deep in my heart.
As I try to pass off my manner as serene
I just want to hear those three words you say
And I pray to God you'll come back to me one day

Just fix up that tiny mistake and it will be great =]

[[MISTAKES]]

[A] Such sultry lips of toxic lust,
[B] They burn through me igniting a fever,
[C] My senses are on fire and I am lost,
Every inch of my being ready to bust.

Such sultry lips of toxic lust,
Should never have come to creation, [Only 9 syllables] [Must rhyme with B]
Gods sweet temptations to test my soul, [Only 8 syllables] [Must rhyme with C]
Have left me with great inspiration. [Only 9 syllables] [Must rhyme with B]

Such sultry lips of toxic lust,
Are cascading all over my shape, [Only 9 syllables] [Must rhyme with C]
I'm melting inside, you're drinking me down, [Must rhyme with B]
Even if I could, I wouldn't escape. [Must rhyme with C]

Such sultry lips of toxic lust,
They have left me here quaking with want, [Only 9 syllables] [Must rhyme with B]
You are the sweetest sin I've ever known, [Must rhyme with C]
And love a slave, to what you've grown. [Only 8 syllables] [Must rhyme with C]

Okies hunni, I think it was a bit more complicated than you realized. Fix up your mistakes and it will be much better. =]

I kind of want to do two lol. Dark and erotic but I will reserve a spot in dark but I might end up writing erotic :$.

all fixed! =]

Ciao

Ahhhh. [Groans, moans, and complains.] Lmao.

I GUESS I'll take . . . [takes awhile] um. . . errotic. [I don't think that's the right spelling, but oh well.] Well, I'm off. Sorry about that, dear Jessy!

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Lol, Sheena, I love you.

Thanks for fixing up your mistakes Ciao. =]

Okiess, everyone is reservedd. Still a few more places left. Anyone brave enough to take them?

I'd like to reserve erotic please.

His Sensual Touch

His sensual touch caresses my every curve
His fingertips run softly through my silky hair
Softly teasing strands that linger over my face
Sending chills through my body's every nerve

His sensual touch caresses my every curve
His lips rubbing against and molesting my breast
While his fingers roam, my hips they do trace
His pace soon quickens and my heart beats won't rest

His sensual touch caresses my every curve
Slowing taking my hand, he wets my thumb
Eyes locked in a gaze, the deeper we stare
I begin to moan but the fun has just begun

His sensual touch caresses my every curve
Tongue gliding down my leg, defining the shape with care
This moment so erotic, he makes me so hot
As he glides back up to lock in on my secret spot

Damn, can I reserve 'sad' instead?
That's how this poem came out =/ I tried to make it erotic, but it took the turn to sad . . . sorry for the incovience.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

You Make My Heart Itch [With Regret] {Parquette}

You make my heart itch [with regret.]
I'll burn down your regretful dreams [to the ground,]
If you will kindly hang me [from my smile--]
A tale of deathly tall lies is your best bet.

You make my heart itch [with regret.]
In his darkened, pitied eyes [may you drown],
As you break my hopeless heart [with style--]
In his ugly heart your glass lust is found.

You make my heart itch [with regret.]
Exasperated after running the mile,
From the 'love' to which you are timelessly bound,
You will make me smile...[only with regret.]

You make my heart itch [with regret.]
If the silver grass is taller than the town,
Then walk your way through the disgusting bile;
If only you hang me from my smile.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

A silver blade strikes fresh skin -
As screaming Angels watch in despair from the sky,
Laughing as death creeps through their crooked veins,
With scarlet blood dried onto their ashen chins.

A silver blade strikes fresh skin -
Silence shattered from a sorrowful good-bye,
Broken wings trapped in jagged rusty chains;
As faded stars whisper a hoarse lullaby.

A silver blade strikes fresh skin -
Candy coated with powder white cocaine,
But hush my little Darling, don't you cry;
Swallow down your pride and ignore the pain.

A silver blade strikes fresh skin -
Horror clouds in the Angel's charcoal eyes,
As they watch with agonizing disdain,
The beating of another naive heart slain.

-Jenna Elphick
March 28, 2007.

reserve me for sadness pleeeease :)

You Stood By Me, So I Ran

Through all of my lies
You see exactly who it is I really am
My smile you saw through but I couldn't confide
No matter to knock backs you try and you try

Through all of my lies
It scares me to think that you know I'm a sham
But this I can't fix so I run and I hide
up to my special place next to the dam

Through all of my lies
You saw me for me and still stood by my side
Fading out fast now I'm just a hollogram
But because of your friendship I took a small ride

Through all of my lies
I lost who I was and i't's thanks to you Cam
On my ride i saw my fake life collide
With darkness it fell so of me... I'm horrified.

[{Lucy}]

I'll try. Reserve under sadness please.

^ I'm sorry hun, but there were no more spots under that category. Would you like to try another?

I'll check these over when I have some more time. There's still a few more spots left.

So...yeah. It's the first time I've tried this...it was damn hard...lol. And my bad if it's not as good....I'm under the influence of...life. ha. And it's kinda ironic (i just realized this)...Gem's is titled Fell In Love...and mine is...

Fall Out Of Love [Parquette]

Can someone fall out of love?
After loving another for so many years.
Can reality suddenly become untrue,
And dreams turn to something you hadn't thought of.

Can someone fall out of love?
Feelings once so obvious seem to become unclear.
Hatred erases everything you ever knew.
A beautiful memory slowly disappears.

Can someone fall out of love?
Not having to worry about shedding more tears.
A past full of happiness begins to undo,
love and life become part of someone's biggest fear.

Can someone fall out of love?
And forget a beloved they once held so dear?
The way two people fall in love; knowing it's true,
It seems that I am falling out of love with you.

© Poetess

I'll try Dark then.

This is my first Parquette ever.

Dig my grave
By Sarah Elliott

Dig my grave and bury me
As the knife gouges my skin deep and blood pours out
Blood stains the carpet and my screams go unheard
Tonight, my dear I am setting my soul free

Dig my grave and bury me
Can't you hear me scream, can't you hear me shout?
I'm lying here alone getting lathered.
As the knife goes deeper I can't live without.

Dig my grave and bury me
These questions I ask, go unanswered
I am not the girl you love or want, I breakout.
The knife's sharp blade plus me equals butchered

Dig my grave and bury me
One more time and its going to end my drought
The knife is in my hand, eyes are watered
My pain ends now, no more being tortured.

Bump, due to spam

Nevermind. =]

Is this over, being that it's the seventh and all...?

Ciao~

[[ MISTAKES ]]

His sensual touch caresses my every curve
His fingertips run softly through my silky hair
Softly teasing strands that linger over my face
Sending chills through my body's every nerve

His sensual touch caresses my every curve
His lips rubbing against and molesting my breast
While his fingers roam down and shape my hips [Has to rhyme with c]
His pace soon quickens and my heart beats won't rest

His sensual touch caresses my every curve
Slowing taking my hand, he wets my thumb
Eyes locked in a gaze as he takes me deeper [Has to rhyme with B]
I begin to moan but the fun has just begun

His sensual touch caresses my every curve
Tongue gliding down defining the shape of my leg [Has to rhyme with B]
This moment so erotic, he makes me so hot
As he glides back up to lock in on my secret spot

I am SO sorry this is taking so long, I just don't have a lot of time lately. I'll try and finish it as soon as possible.

But from now on, NO more entries. =]

Ok, I think I've cleaned up my mistakes.
Hopefully its right now.

Sorry about that.

[[ MISTAKES ]]

You make my heart itch [with regret.]
I'll burn down your dreams [to the ground,] [Should be 10-12 syllables]
If you hang me [from my smile--] [Should be 10-12 syllables]
A tale of tall lies is your best bet. [Should be 10-12 syllables]

You make my heart itch [with regret.]
In his darkened eyes [may you drown], [Should be 10-12 syllables]
As you break my heart [with style] -- [Should be 10-12 syllables]
In his heart your lust is found. [Should be 10-12 syllables]

You make my heart itch [with regret.]
Exasperated after the mile, [Should be 10-12 syllables]
From the 'love' to which you are bound, [Should be 10-12 syllables]
You will not make [me smile.] [Should be 10-12 syllables]

You make my heart itch [with regret.]
If the grass is taller than the town, [Should be 10-12 syllables]
Then walk your way through the bile; [Should be 10-12 syllables]
If only you hang me from my smile. [Should be 10-12 syllables]

[[ MISTAKES ]]

Through all of my lies
You see exactly who it is I really am
My smile you saw through but I couldn't confide
No matter to knock backs you try and you try

Through all of my lies
It scares me to think that you know I'm a sham
But this I can't fix so I run and I hide
After the battle I've fought I now can condemn [Should rhyme with B]

Through all of my lies
You saw me for me and still stood by my side
Fading out fast now I'm just a hollogram
But because of your friendship I took a small ride

Through all of my lies
I lost who I was and i't's thanks to you Cam
On my ride i saw my fake life collide
With darkness it fell so of me... I'm horrified.

[[ MISTAKES ]]

Can someone fall out of love?
After loving another for so many years.
Can reality suddenly become untrue,
And dreams turn to something you hadn't thought of.

Can someone fall out of love?
Feelings once so obvious seem to become unclear. [Should be 10-12 syllables]
Hatred erases everything you ever knew.
A beautiful memory slowly disappears.

Can someone fall out of love?
Not having to worry about shedding more tears. [Should rhyme with C]
A past full of happiness begins to undo, [Should rhyme with B]
love and life become part of someone's biggest fear. [Should rhyme with C]

Can someone fall out of love?
And forget a beloved they once held so dear?
The way two people fall in love; knowing it's true,
It seems that I am falling out of love with you.

[[ MISTAKES ]]

Dig my grave and bury me
As the knife gouges my skin deep and blood pours out
Blood stains the carpet and my screams go unheard
Tonight, my dear I am setting my soul free

Dig my grave and bury me
Can't you hear me scream, can't you hear me shout?
I'm lying here alone getting lathered.
As the knife goes deeper I can't live without.

Dig my grave and bury me
These questions go unanswered [Should have 10-12 syllables]
I am not the girl you love or want, I breakout.
The knife plus me equals butchered [Should have 10-12 syllables]

Dig my grave and bury me
One more time and its going to end my drought
The knife is in my hand, eyes are watered
My pain ends now, no more being tortured.

Okay, there we go. Those are everyone's mistakes. And don't worry about them okay? This is a hard style to master. =]

People who have not corrected their mistakes, please do so. Their names are as follows ::

[[*~Lucy~*]]

The contest will be judged once everyone has fixed their poems. =]