Will You Make It???

* TO ANY NEW TAKERS! YOU MUST RESERVE FIRST!!!!!

Hey Guys, I really enjoyed Midnight Sun's idea for a 3 round contest. So I thought I'd do the same.

I am accepting 15 entries first time around. But you MUST RESERVE!!!!
For round 1 your poem must be a HAPPY love poem and it must be NEW!!!! This is a test of your talent as of now!
NO CUSSING!
NO SEXUALITY IN YOUR POEMS!!!!
NO RELIGIOUS REFERENCES!
Only 5 will make it to the next round.

ALL POEMS DUE BY APRIL 3RD!!!!!!
1.xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
2. Romantic Lover DONE
3. Mooie Ogen DONE
4. .K.i.T.t.Y. DONE
5. `&& lOve* DONE
6. Twisted Heart DONE
7. *Gem* DONE
8. PrettyInPunk[LauRa] DONE
9.Payne Drewelow DONE
10.[[*~Lucy~*]] DONE
11. ~*Wasted Fake Smiles*~ DONE
12.Making Memories With My Lover DONE
13. Chad
14. skater girl
15. Wings Of Flames DONE
16. Singing In The Rain DONE

I came up with a new one! Enjoy.
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Babylon {Ode}
by XTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Sing to me a song,
Nightingale of Babylon;
A voice of the gods.

Precious angel,
Whisper stories
By nights long gone
Of your sweet sin;
Oh please, pull me in.

I do not mind,
To hold your kiss,
Within my thoughts.
My heart is true,
I will wait [for you.]

Dear Nightingale,
Do not fear the fast pacing hours;
I will stray no further
Than your heart.

Precious angel,
Whisper stories
By nights long gone
Of your sweet sin;
Oh please, pull me in.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

I'd like to reserve please.

EoS you forgot to reserve. I will accept it because it was first. But to everyone else. YOU MUST RESERVE FIRST! Thank you!
Charisma*

I added some new rules because for whatever reason, I forgot to put them in there. So please make sure your poem follows them.
To EoS....if you could submit a diff poem that would be great, so there is no cussing and that it is new. Don't forget it has to be a happy love poem !!!!
Charisma*

The Keeper of My Heart

There is this handsome, wonderful and an amazing man
With an irresistible smile and for that I'd do whatever I can
He has beautiful blue eyes which within I see my reflection
I'm just not sure he really knows how deep is my affection

He gives incredible tight hugs, I'm lost in his embrace
But what is really cool to me is when I touch his face
And I love his witty sense of humor, with him its fun to be
He makes everyone laugh, but does so much more to me

He became one of my greatest friends and I love him for that
He is just wonderful to be with even if its just for simple chat
A truly unique man who somehow became the keeper of my heart
Who also felt the same for me and did from the very start

He has a sensual form of touch simply by running his fingers through my hair
But even without the physical form and when into my eyes he just glares
He makes my heart race like no one has ever done before
He is definitely one in a million and the one I most adore

If I was granted three wishes, I'd have to give away two
Because I only need one, my wish is to be with him and just say "I Love You."

I have what I want, but it needs to be added too. But for now I'll place it here. I will most likely add to it.

Eternal Bliss

Her eyes twinkle,
Twinkle with pride;
She has won,
Once and for all.
***
As of this night,
This beautiful boy
Is finally dubbed hers
Through life and death.

The promise sealed
With a passionate kiss,
Said more than just love,
But the tie between two hearts.

Sparks flew,
Creating fireworks,
A delicate display
Of pure love.

The glimmer in his eyes,
Spoke more than words,
Losing her in an ocean
Of crystal blue water.

The crowd below,
Whispers in awe,
Afraid to disrupt
Such beauty.

The boy of her teens,
Now a man,
Has claimed her his
For all eternity.

please reserve me!

Ciao

Would Like to reserve, please.

Reserve Moi please x

If I have a poem I would like to enter that was written sometime within the last week, would you consider that as new?
xxx

that would be fine ...

thank you to those who reserved! PLEASE RESERVE FIRST!!!!!
Charisma*

Okay, thank you and can you reserve me please?
I shall go find the poem now.
xxx

if I Could

If I could be with anyone
It would be with you
This feeling is so strong
My love for you is true.

If I could make you grin
It would be worthwhile
Deep down inside I know
That you're without guile.

If I could make you laugh
I'd do it all the time
Do anything at all
Just to make you mine.

If I could soothe away your fears
I'd always hold you tight
Do everything in my power
Just to make things right.

If I could lie in your arms
Forever there I'd stay
Nothing would matter much
As long as you were okay.

If I could somehow help you
I'd always find a way
Do you realize that it is you
Who made my sun shine today?

Could you reserve for me?

Music Of The Night(A Fairytlae In 1940)

On radio Nat King Cole screams a sad song
He is the best of my age that 1940 and more
Maybe I shouldn't listen him,I'm doing wrong
Cos I'm not as sorrowful as i was before

To hear his breathing when he's sleeping
A violin's relaxing voice from the next door
A strong whisper comes cos of the wind blowing
Or just to listen my happy dog's snore

He woke up when he felt me near
Kissed my hand that with his ring charmingly
He quickly took of the dress I was to wear
Had me completely when stars wink at me

Felt the rhythm in my head in this lovely mansion
Started to dance with him when his smile's bright
Our kisses'll melt the sky,the sound of our passion
He will be my music of all through the night

You Are My Everything
By: Ciao (`&& lOve*)

A tender kiss on my lips
A hand snakes around my waist
Spinning around up until
We're standing face to face

You brush the fallen hair away
I smile up at you
You've opened the door to the light
And now it shines on through

You look down at me
In your eyes, you have this look
I know exactly what it means
I can read you like a book

We're standing there, staring
Smiling, it lights up your face
Ever since you came to me
My fear has been replaced

I have your hoodie, all warm inside
In exchange, you have my ring
With you, I'll share the world
You Are My Everything

i would love to reserve Charisma!! :)

ï‚© My Heart And Soul ï‚©

To the creator of this man
I owe my eternal gratitude
And to this magical guy
I owe my life 3 times over
ï‚©
From such a dark hole
I managed to climb out
While everyone had doubt
He shone his light my way
ï‚©
I used to feel like I was under the ground
But this man is the reason for my wings
I used to think I wanted to die
But now I have everything to live for
ï‚©
The butterflies that live in my stomach
Flutter everytime we hug
And nothing could reprimand
For him, my truest love
ï‚©
I’ve never wanted to stand out in a crowd
But now that it’s him standing by my side
I want to scream and shout to all that’s about
That this is the man of my dreams
ï‚©
He wakes me up a midnight
With a gentle Eskimo kiss
Than in the morning he always greets me
With ‘your gorgeous sugar lips’
ï‚©
When once I felt so down
This man has raised me high
And to his parents I thank the most
For the way he was brought up
ï‚©
I love him with my heart and soul
And I know he loves me back
You could tell me that I’m dreaming
But you couldn’t change my mind!

[{Lucy}]

The One Who Holds The Key
By: Twisted Heart

As I sit and watch the moon tonight
I feel your whisper on my skin
The tease of it makes me feel light
And stirs the passion held within.

My soul has reached for you tonight
Among the pleasures in you I seek
Your tender touch steers my heart right
For you're the one who holds the key.

A faint seduction to my senses
As surely as my mind can see
You've broke the hold of my defenses
With love you give to me so free.

And as we look up to the moon
And seek a star to make a wish
I hear your voice a taunting tune
With love's caress upon your lips.

No failure to the love I feel
As arm and arm we stand and see
My heart and soul is safely sealed
But for the one who holds the key

can i reserve? i JUST wrote one seriously like 10 minutes ago...is that ok?

ok no reply..so i will just post it now...

Someday

Hello my love, I am waiting to get to know you,
Though we haven't met, one day you'll feel it too.
When you look in my eyes, you feel that tingle inside,
You know that you won't be able to hide.

I'll be waiting until that faithful day somewhere,
You'll find me, and forever you'll be there.
You will hold me in your arms; brighten up my day,
And forever and ever you'll hold me this way.

Someday, I know you'll find me.
Someday, we'll know we're meant to be.
Somehow I know that you're out there,
Somehow I know that you'll truly care.

I'm waiting for you, searching high and low,
What I am looking for, I still do not know.
I just feel it in my heart, I know you're around,
You'll pick my broken heart right off the ground.

~*Who Cares?*~

RESERVE!!!! I am going to go ahead and post it.

My Love

MY LOVE

A true love story is where
Becoming lovers is serious
Causing each to think diffrently about the world
Dancing hand in hand
Effective only when in love
For not all people have felt this feeling
Getting all pretty for your lover
Having fun trying to imress them
I feel this way
Just like my mother did before me
Keeping your faith is hard for others
Like trusting there isn't a 3rd wheel
My life is simple now
Now that I have some one I love
Opening up is no problem
Painting a picture as beautiful as ours
Quarriling happens only never because
Respect is our main key
Starting a love like this takes years
Tieing a knot that can never break
Until love is present no more
Vital passion is involved
With one kiss waiting to come out
X-raying our relationship
You my love will always be mine so that I may be
Zealous to see you everyday

I hope that makes sense. I don't think it does but we will see!

Xx Out Of The Blue xX

I never saw your heart coming
It was completely out of the blue
I'd never felt a love this this
Until the day that I met you

You made my life what it is
You showed me the way I could feel
You took my heart so tenderly
And showed me that love could be real

That it wasn't just a fairytale
That only happens to beautiful girls
You treat me like a princess all the time
You're my everything in this world

You love me for entirely who I am
You don't expect anything more
You know the good, bad and all between
I've never loved like this before

I never saw your heart coming
It was completely out of the blue
I'd never felt a love like this
Until the day that I met you...

*Gem*

Copyright©GemmaStott2007

i would like to reserve a spot.

just two spots left!!!!
Charisma*

Just wondering if you accepted me in the contest as I'm not anywhere on the list lol

Reserve please =]

plz reserve me :)

Sometimes, In My Head...
by SingingInTheRain
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My head lays on his shoulder,
I whisper words I cannot say,
Cuddle up as it gets colder,
Don't want to go away.

I touch his cheek so gently,
Look into amber eyes,
Stroke his hair, so lightly;
Don't want to say goodbye.

I lean in, to stare deeper,
My hand upon his own;
He is my heart's own keeper,
Companion through unknown.

In just one week, I realized,
A longing felt for him;
My feelings were the big suprise,
My longing reached the brim.

I never thought I'd feel this way,
About another friend;
He is just so sweet and nice,
I don't want this to end.

In my head, sometimes, I think,
Of things I'd love to do;
From holding hands, to giving winks,
Those thoughts are just a few.

can i reserve please, i know its kinda short noticed but, i can make one quick..

RESERVE!!!

Silver Angel

You prance through the grass,
And sway your head so soft,
Pronounced so loudly,
As your spirits are aloft,

Your mane a tangle of colour,
As it dances while you move,
Your body rocks in rhythm,
And your strides stay so smooth,

Your dainty legs so white,
Glide through the shimmer of dew,
You stop and stamp your hoof,
And then was when I knew,

Yes, you have the tendencies,
To play the biggest tricks,
But your wings aim higher,
Perhaps that's how I get my kicks,

We fly together when we ride,
You are excited when we do,
Playing in the fields,
Our souls trapped, just me and you.

Your hair falls in the wind,
We have peace among the doves,
And this is when I knew,
You are the one I love.

Please have your poems in by Thursday night. If not, you will be dropped out of the contest and the rest will be judged. Thank you!
Charisma*

Does that mean it's due tonight?
And the judging is soon? :O
I'm excited.
And.
I have my poem in, but you don't have "Done" by my name.. Just saying. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Ok, It's Thursday!!!!

I'll judge by tonight if possible!
Charisma*

Can't wait!! GL everyone!!

Ciao~

Okay...Results are in! The five to go on are.....

1. Kitty
2. Ciao (`&& lOve*)
3. Making Memories With My Lover
4. Payne Drewelow
5. Singing in the Rain

(those are in no particular order)

To all who entered, so many poems were amazing and made this hard to judge. Each poem had something unique that made me want to keep it.
Good job everyone!

Okay, final five. CONGRATULATIONS! Look for a new thread called Final Five Round 2. Look forward to seeing you!
Charisma*