RAP! OFF!

GRAYDOM

Since my friend here speaks about home
Let me too talk about my second womb
Is it gonna be a cocoon like my first
Or the fabric that creates my hearse

A place of dreams, or discarded destiny?
Wheere do I hail from? Lets see..

India, the supposed country of magic
Where each has his own Houdini trick
There are snakes that slither on our roads
Elephants run amuck, trample on toads
Kings queens goddesses and gods
Trees with jewels and glittering pods
Where stars adorn the royal night
That’s what ya’ll think of India, right?

I’m living in a city of a million feet
The only jungle here is concrete
There is money in some pockets
Others are kicked in their crotches
Its commercial, you live on cash
You gotta penny, cool, my old friend’s now trash
A detailed description I shall omit
For an attempt at it would never finish
But Bob my friend, the place from where you come
is a place where I reside too, a filthy home to everyone

You see, there are never fairies in the world
Or devils that make you devour your pet birds
It’s never black and never white
Grey is the only color that is trite
We will never be in heaven or be cast to hell
A poets melodrama is not where reality dwells
We shall live on this world, with the immense wrong
And in it, try to find little peace, a world for which we long.

Where are you mister Bob?

Is it still too late too join!??

Wait some people have already started to battle...

Hey briddy. ill let you join since its the first round, but you have to find an opponent. which means, convince another person to join within the next 5 hours of this post. but as soon as this round is over, i'm sorry you wont be able to play.

so go get, you got 5 hours to find someone. =]

it's only cuz im so nice. just hurry. bcuz once i check it later tonight, i expect these to all be done, and they will be judged, since i will have been 24 hours later, actually much later.

so briddy, once you find your one opponent, start your rap...make sure your opponent does too. and they must say they are in it.

<3 kitty

Well, if my partner doesn't come, I'll be with briddy!

Your making memories right? i just needed to be sure.

Ohk if fading memories' partner doesn't come then i'll be with her!! otherwise i think i'll just flag it aye cos i don't know where to find somebody lol. Thanks so much for letting me join!

No problem. i really doubt poetic is gunna make it by tonight. so briddy prepare a rap that introduces you...

<3
i would also like to see it within the next 3 hours if possible. becuz i want to keep this rolling. i wish to get it done within a week. thnks.

My bad guyz
been at parties n stuff,

but spring started n stuff so ill be on
let me rap bout myself..

They say ima little cocky they say i talk trash
but if my rhymes were money, id be walkin wit cash
they say Ima cheater, they say i cant rap
but why do they keep losin, so wats up wit that
I get judge of being a thug, so i say they dont know me
I rap what i feel, No ones gonna stop, no ones gonna hold me...
okay

i can say it quick i can say it slow
whatever way you want u just let me know
strike quick like a python, leave venon im your vein
ima make yall quit n cry, yeah ima make it rain
dont under estimate me, they call me Poetic
Couple hits wit my lines, your just gonna hear the medic..

again im sorry for being late
Ive had school, n it was my cousins bday, so i was
with him
but im here now, and spring break has started
so ill be home

Ohk kool so how does it work with me and my partner? do they go and then i go or something? i'm not too sure on what happens there..

I forfiet... Sorry this was not what I was looking for...

So you can face my oponent..

Il c ya around guys

BRIDDY, RAP ABOUT YOURSELF. AND YOULL TAKE PERFECTIONS OPPONENT. ILL BE FINALLY JUDGING THIS TODAY. SO HAVE IT READY WITHIN THE NEXT FEW HOURS OR SO.

THNKS.

<3

My guy already did a rap against me
so ima just do a lil thing for him...

you joke on my name, like your the one in fame
but let me be realistic, Ima play you like a game
Ive heard pre-schoolers hit a better rhyme then u
my rhymes so sick, ill even hit you wit the flu
you say you as hot as ice, well then your not hot
I kinda feel bad, cuz i think your one of those grlz who gets joked on a lot

just a little something
cuz she did somethin against me..
Peace Out!

Achk. Just because I'm nice I'll wait two hours for Briddy's rap to come in.

Please hurry.

Other than that, this round is closed.

Sorry closed...

Oh dammit. i prepared a rap before i fell asleep last night.. i've only just woken up now. is it still too late??

Well ok...
go ahead.

since you have one done. that would just be mean to say no. go ahead.

<3

Ohk thanku so much! here it is.. it's not very good but it's very fun 2 do!!

Bridget's my name,
y'all think I'm the same,
as everybody else,
but POOO you're just jealous!!

Cos I'm a flamin' hot rod,
some call me a god,
a blonde sport machine
... I love to clean!

Caring, yeah that's me,
it's all so plain to see,
I feel sorry for the crippled
... the water rippled!

Got a problem wit me?
Solve it fool!
I'm just so cool!
Heck yes i rule,
... I rule the school!

So now y'all know me,
"WHOOP WHOOP!!"
Catch you on the fly,
... sly eye!
See you round punk,
I wish I could slam dunk!

Haha once again thank you so much for letting me enter!!

No prob. hopefully i can judge today.

in advance ill let you know the next topic, so you can be ahead if you make it to the next round.

childhood. anything from back yonder.

Kool kool

Bob! C'mon. lol. i wanted to read your Rap. But Noo, you had to make it explicit so i can't access it on this PC.

=[

Hey Bob, I'm sorry but you had to reserve, and I can't take you. However, I'd love to check it out.

=] =[

Kitty-.. kitty. Bob is sluvious.

Well sluvy is bob. or, he isnt. but he is .. sometimes..

ahh!

What. o. haha.. thnks.

sorry i didnt know that. ><

man these are good.

im judging them now...i think im missiing someone though...

WINNERS OF ROUND ONE

Lauren
Poetic
Lucy
Ashley
Dhaval
won. and its not in that order....
Everyone who participated is receiving one comment. I'll pick it at random. Unless you respond to this within the next 12 minutes.

thank you.

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NEXT ROUND:
CHILDHOOD, YOUR YOUTH. THINGS ALONG THOSE LINES. I'D LIKE THEM WITHIN THE NEXT 48 HOURS. PREFERABLY 24.

TAKE CARE, I'LL CHECK BACK LATER.

Thankx,
i shld have mine by the end of tonight
still doin easter celebratin right now..

thanx n congrats for first round winners

*you can comment any poem u want*

I was just a little girl
Growing up in a house
My eyes were bright blue
My hair like a mouse

I was quiet, softspoken
Trying to make things work
But it was kinda hard
When my mom was always hurt

Dad was always gone
Away on work or something else
Once I fell off a ladder
And he wasn't there to help

My friends were simple:
One or two girls
We were all different
And from completely different worlds

And then some people betrayed me
And the world went cold
I tried to understand
But pain was all I could hold

They say I've seen to much
As a little tiny child
And they wonder why I'm quiet
And not so wild

There's mine!

Just comment on my latest thanks :]

This rap.. contest or whatever is very confusing lol.. but they all soud good good job ya'll

Childhood.

everyone has one, and parts they regret
Good and the bad memories, we just cant forget
some affect our lives, causing such frustration
some filled with work, and filled wit procastination
Mine was pretty good, leading me to my imagination
Taking my parents advice, no discrimination
I did what I was told, and just learned my education
if not, id be beat till i cried, with out any hesistion, no explanation, no negotiation

Living up in school gettin laughed at for my size
So i had to put on a mask, and put on a disguise
to hide my frowns and put on a smile with my eyes
my past as been filled with nothin but these lies
where people would sugarcoat "your not fat"
getting walked on all over like a welcome mat
I looked in these mirrors and all I saw was a rat
A person who would get picked on and laughed at

later I found sometihng that helped, its called music
an ability I fount I have, so I just used it
Some ppl have the same gift, but they abuse it
I put down some lyrics and then I just knew it
I had a gift wit these words, that I say to these herds
They say I have a voice, that can sing to the birds

Puberty struck and facial hair began to bloom
Starting getting girlfriends, i was looking good i assume
people came to me for advice, I became there guard
they just came to me, when things got hard

I never fell under pressure i became my own man
Many looked up to me, like i was this superman
for once in my life, i started getting fans
thats when all the good started and began

But i really cant say much Im only 15 years old
Im still in my child hood, theres still a.. story... untold...
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I dont usually rap like this all the time
just showing my diversity in style n everything
but i think its pretty good
cant wait the for the next judgin

good luck everyone

Ah. i wont be able to check back until wednesday. i have things to get done today, so i may not be on here...especially long enough. then, tomorrow i wont be here at all. and when i do return home, ill be dead tired from working all day.

ill get back to you then.

from these 5 ill pick my top three, and then youll rap/rhyme about another topic. which im still debating if it should be something serious or funny.

let me know your opinions. i want to make this fun for you all.

talk to you later.

These have to be in by tomorrow right?

cause i wont be able to do this by tonight.. and actually i dont know if i can get this by tommorow(unless its in the night)

nvm! lol

Yeah.. this is really bad. xD

I was forced to grow up,
so fast, it don't last.
so hold tight,
its a short ride

Me? i'm still a child,
but grown i am already
know the ins and outs,
my life full of doubts, so unsteady,
forget the 'best years of my life'
my childhood's chuck
full of pain and strife.

livin in the middle of nowhere,
where nobody does care
basicly on your own
without a home
forced to grow,
up as a prisoner,
locked away,
in a cage
of rage and hate
there's no room to
negotiate, plead,
for a key
on your knees
begging
for freedom.

growing up with
no privacy
in a life of tyranny
and piracy
lies and deciet
from the 'ones that care'
ha-ha-ha, thats a laugh,
its a known fact
they don't matter
there's no point
you grow up, alone
on your own
with no one beside you,
no one to hide you,
to comfort, help you,
to shelter you
it's hell for you
and you know its the truth
growing up in misery,
thats how it'll always be
just the same
as it was for me.

I need the other twos!

and ill read go comment now.

I'll judge this is 17ish hours. Cuz I understand the other two are in different time zones.

Hey
Can you please not be so rigid on the time.
I have my exams.
I might not be able to enter so quick.

Ok. But I have a few days then i want to finish this.

I'll wait for a bit. I understand the whole exam thing. ><

GOOD LUCK

These raps are great... hmm I have some competition!

Hey yall I wanna rap

I suck at rapping.. just doing poetry is my life but rapping.. i gotta try ....lol