1 poem written by all poets.........

  • chavii
    20 years ago

    d idea is 2 create a poem written by all poets ,line by line n c if a beautiful poem can b made.
    rules r simple 1. we stick 2 1 theme
    2.contribute line randomly not continously
    3. write max 2 lines or just 1 line.
    i have choosen theme "MISSING YOU" it starts like dis.....

    "Thinking of u every passing day,
    missing u wid every breath i take,

  • miss scooby
    20 years ago

    "Cherishing every moment we embraced,
    always stopping to take a second look at your beautiful face,"

  • Red Tears Of The Soul
    20 years ago

    "the warmth of your heart I truly miss".
    "as I think back and reminisce"

  • SammiBABY
    20 years ago

    "I hate the numb feeling when we are apart,
    I'm sick of the emptiness in my broken heart"

  • *tanya*
    20 years ago

    "Everywhere I turn, memories remind me of you,
    The fun we used to have, the things we used to do"

  • chavii
    20 years ago

    "what spell have you cast on me ,
    that i see no one but only you beside me,"

  • Danny
    20 years ago

    To look upon you
    Is to feel complete

  • TC
    20 years ago

    "You were my life and I thought we would be together forever
    But now I miss you and you are gone forever and ever"

  • chavii
    20 years ago

    "please come back and give me my life back"

  • TC
    20 years ago

    "show me there is some white amongst this dream of black"

  • Jackie Bilson
    20 years ago

    "I need you to breathe, to see, to live
    I have nothing left, I gave all I could give."

  • TC
    20 years ago

    "Missing You"

    Thinking of you every passing day,
    Missing you with every breath I take,
    Cherishing every moment we embraced,
    Always stopping to take a second look at your beautiful face,
    You smiling at me, me smiling at you, thinking about the memories we held so true...
    The warmth of your heart I truly miss.
    As I think back and reminisce,
    I hate the numb feeling when we are apart,
    I'm sick of the emptiness in my broken heart,
    Everywhere I turn, memories remind me of you,
    The fun we used to have, the things we used to do
    What spell have you cast on me,
    That i see no one but only you beside me,
    To look upon you
    Is to feel complete
    Your warmth your embace next to me
    Without you I can't bare to see
    I need you here eternily.
    You were my life and I thought we would be together forever,
    But now I miss you and you are gone forever and ever
    Please come back and give me my life back,
    Show me there is some white, amongst this dream of black
    I need you to breathe, to see, to live
    I have nothing left, I gave all I could give.....

    [to be continued]

    By: chavii, Scooby101, EDDIE GARCIA, red tears of the soul, ♥ Sammi Morris♥, *tanya*, Danny, Michaela, TC, Jackie Bilson

    Thats what we got so far, now if anyone wants to organize that ;) cuz I know we were supposed to be posting randomly not continously

  • chavii
    20 years ago

    lol :)TC u sure did g8 job ,well dis poem belongs 2 all of us who participated so any of us can do organising part his or her way .........it sure looking a beautyful poem wen read 2gether.
    thanks.