you good enough?

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    I want to try...these poems look so fun but so hard...when is it due?

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    Im done. =) this was fun

    anyways heres mine...Enjoy if you can.

    Daddys bad habit

    A child lays,
    Broken and bruised,
    Courtesy of,
    Daddys bad habit,
    Enamored by her elegant,
    Foot work that so,
    Graciously caught,
    His pedofilish eyes,
    Intoxicated like always,
    Just enough to,
    Kill his curiousity,
    Leaving his daughter,
    More scars than any,
    Nine year,
    Old should ever,
    Place upon their,
    Quiet minds,
    Reaching for the,
    Stars in the sky,
    That plague the,
    Unity of Families,
    Very much like,
    What little,
    Xena feels inside,
    Yearning for the truth;
    Zero

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    psh am i good enough. :]
    no.
    lmao. BUT I'LL STILL DO IT!!!

    i'll have it in soon.
    thanks. :]

  • Just Lucy
    17 years ago

    haha i will give it a go too, i may find it interesting lol i will have it in soon

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    I'll give it a go =) Whens the due date?

  • Just Lucy
    17 years ago

    The Life Of Me

    At the end of my ropes
    Be there no future?
    Consider you past
    Degrading the present
    End of all time
    Fighting for courage
    Growing up strong
    Here is where it goes wrong
    If only I new it than but
    Jokes have twisted my soul
    Knowing not what I did
    Loathing my reflection
    Mourning the mirror
    Nothing can help me
    Open the door to freedom
    Persuing that courage again
    Query on what is yet to happen
    Resting now in peace
    Sits my once beloved heart
    Trusting you tore it apart
    Use this as advice
    Very frightening to do…
    Walking alone, cold night, pitch black
    Xenophobia is my fear tonight
    Yours forever but not in soul
    Zips up my body, my life has let go

    [{Lucy}]

    *haha this was so fun lol YAY*

  • Coeur Cassa Sage
    17 years ago

    MY LOVE

    A true love story is where
    Becoming lovers is serious
    Causing each to think diffrently about the world
    Dancing hand in hand
    Effective only when in love
    For not all people have felt this feeling
    Getting all pretty for your lover
    Having fun trying to imress them
    I feel this way
    Just like my mother did before me
    Keeping your faith is hard for others
    Like trusting there isn't a 3rd wheel
    My life is simple now
    Now that I have some one I love
    Opening up is no problem
    Painting a picture as beautiful as ours
    Quarriling happens only never because
    Respect is our main key
    Starting a love like this takes years
    Tieing a knot that can never break
    Until love is present no more
    Vital passion is involved
    With one kiss waiting to come out
    X-raying our relationship
    You my love will always be mine so that I may be
    Zealous to see you everyday

    I

  • Wings Of Flames
    17 years ago

    A to Z

    As the ocean awakes,
    Begging to be tamed,
    Calling with a hush,
    Drowning to be famed,

    Etching into time,
    For it sways in and out,
    Gagging in the sodium,
    Howling no one's doubt,

    Iced glass scratching cold,
    Jagged spirits drool,
    Killing all the naked,
    Laughing at the fool,

    Magestic ocean being,
    Naked to the eye,
    Oh, save me please,
    Pavement to the sky,

    Quarrels with the intimate,
    Risking all we had,
    Slinking into the dark,
    The timing truly bad,

    Ur cycle has been broken,
    Vertically unhinged lines,
    Where will we go?
    Xenon sees no sign,

    Yearling throws his head in shame,
    Zealious 'til struck with fame.

    This was fun, mine sorta makes sense >.

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    I'll give it a try.

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    Lmao cheater, Ur is not a word =)

    very well done though =)

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    A-Z
    By Sarah Elliott

    Alone
    Battered
    Crying
    Defeated
    Eliminated
    Fighting
    Gouging
    Hurting
    Inconsolable
    Jumbled
    Knifing
    Lost
    Melancholy
    Nightmares
    Oppressive
    Poor
    Questions
    Remorseful
    Scared
    Tortured
    Used
    Vanquished
    Woebegone
    Quiting
    Yearning
    Zip

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    Hope you like it

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    I'll miss you too. Have fun.

  • Twisted Heart
    17 years ago

    The Journey of A Broken Heart
    By: Twisted Heart

    A heart was cast upon the shore
    Broken by the oceans roar

    Cracked with pain it now lays
    Disassembled and decayed.

    Eternal home among the sands
    Fought for life but lost its stance

    Gripped by hurt and torn into
    Hope was tipped into the blue

    Inside the swell of pain it fell
    Just moments short of living hell

    Kept by the sea to run its course
    Love lingers dead, a shallow corpse

    Most tried to find a shelter there
    Nocturnal comfort's tending care

    Opaque in tune with haunted dreams
    Pure anger found with silent screams

    Quiet now upon death's sands
    Removed from life with hungry hands

    Surrendering the loss of time
    Tore from the soul and from the mind

    Until the tremble of the break
    Visceral to the heart it quaked

    Within the vessel lies the pain
    Xenophobic to a lover's reign

    Yearning for the soul's release
    Zounds now beneath the ocean deep.

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    What's Left.

    Advisement is necessary in a
    battle of love and hate.

    Counting every minute,
    distance and words.
    Every tear that falls
    fiercely hits the
    ground so cold.

    Hopelessness recovers my heart,
    immune to nuisance, now.

    Just as numerous fears
    keel over slowly,
    love intrudes to
    meditate a purpose
    noticeably for reasons.

    Only you can fix these
    problems now, somehow.

    Questions of you
    repeat in my mind
    slowly getting louder as
    time goes on and on,
    under the heavens above.

    Velocity is catching up,
    weaker and weaker I get.
    Xnty losing control
    yielding all hope as
    zealots ruin what's left.

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    What is xnty?

  • Brittney Follett
    17 years ago

    Infected with his deadly love.. you filled x with quiting :D

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    It means christianity.

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    Oh my bad, I forgot X.

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    Oh ok i get it now

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    Bump due to spam

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    DEFINATELY not my best. God save me for this has to be one of the worst things I've ever written. Lmao. I may replace it, or withdraw. Depends. Until then, here it is:
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    A-Z {Acrostic}

    Affection?
    Baby, you don't know that word.
    Care?
    Don't make me laugh -- [you're just absurd.]

    Egotistical, much?
    Flaunt it all you want. Trust me, [I hate it.]
    Genius?
    Hardly, you're as smart as a rock, [I admit.]

    Immature.
    Just what you need to describe you.
    *Knaving scoundrel.
    Liars go to Hell -- [a new debut?]

    Man.
    Now that's correct.
    Optional romantic.
    Perfect; [unless your erect.]

    Questionable motives.
    Run, Girls, Run!
    Secrets [that he'll keep.]
    Transexual.

    Unexpected surprises. [See: Secrets]
    Validate his words.
    Whore [he is. You may have to pay.]
    **Xanthippe [is what I prefer.]

    Your my bad habit
    ***Zephyr to my heart.

    *Knaving - Rogue; Dishonest
    **Xanthippe - An ill-tempered wife.
    ***Zephyr - A gentle, mild breeze.
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    Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same
    words as in the title.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex