contest! love poems!

this is my first one alright..
ok, here's what i want..

1st place 5 comments and favorites
2nd place 4 comments
3rd place 3 comments
4th place 2 comments
5th place 1 comment

a love poem.. (happy or sad)
it needs to be interesting to read lol..
old OR new..
at least 8 lines..
NO cussing..
NO sexuality..
show feeling..

enter now..
15 spots..
1.`&& lOve* (Ciao) ((DONE))
2.PrettyInPunk[LauRa] ((DONE))
3.Roddy Flores ((DONE))
4.SoSickOfTears ((DONE))
5. K.i.T.t.Y. ((DONE))
6.-Hatori Sohma- ((DONE))
7. Bri [x] ((DONE))
8. J. Lau ((DONE))
9. Mooie Ogen ((DONE))
10. debbylyn ((DONE))
11. Yuna ((DONE))
12. Jessi Ray ((DONE))
13. Romantic Lover ((DONE))
14. ~BRiDDY~ ((DONE))
15. ŘÅÇĦ♥ ((DONE))

it will end on my birthday, APRIL 13th.

Made For Each Other
by Ciao

A silent tear streams down her cheek
Fighting to be strong; accepting she's weak
Another one follows, until she can count no more
Her teary-eyed stare catches her drawer

A shudder, through her body, as she remembers what's inside
The pain she's holding close, she can no longer hide
She slowly gets up and opens the drawer
Hands shaking, she drops the notes on the floor

Collecting her wits as with all of the notes
She sits back down to look at what he wrote
All the memories come back and she's taken into the past
Back to a time when she thought they would last

As she reread the notes, the tears still dropped
She knew that the steam would never be stopped
After fighting the tears, she gave up, in vain
She knew there was no way to stop the pain

The folded notes, crease folded and torn
With letters and words, faded by worn
Each note, holding its own time frame
Each ending, showing the same exact name

''With Love'' or ''Yours''; endings meaning nothing now
Wishing things were different; wondering how
Wasted words, left nothing to be found
Wondering what life would be if he was around

Tears still flowing as she puts the notes back
Feeling in her heart, the place where she lacks
So as she sites back down, you can barely hear her mutter:
''But baby, I thought we were Made For Each Other.''

Still Waiting

Everyday reminding you
With ache and pain on my chest
I'm bruised for anything to do
Still aching,still waiting to nest

Still taking the time,you should have arrived here
'No I can't really believe yet I haven't seen
Maybe he was late to wear
Still counting,still here I've been

Still waiting with a bouquet of red roses
They're dried just like my soul
This is the second spring nature snoozes
Still broken,still sole

Still wearing that white dress you bought and hoping
To see you after that bunch of years
The heart of me into million pieces now sweeping
Still crying,still into fears

The visitors have already left this place
With a ruined dress and a sad smile
Looking over the past I need to face
But I'm still loving you,still your bride

A Thousand Words, Kisses And Smiles

Thousands of words spoken
Could never really describe
How I glow when thinking of you
Or this beautiful love I feel inside.

If I gave you a thousand kisses
They could never really convey
How I always want to be with you
Or how you brighten up my day.

A thousand smiles in your direction
Could never justify how I feel
Nor could they ever thank you enough
For how you made my broken heart heal.

Even if I was wrapped in your embrace
More than a thousand times
It wouldn't be possible to show you
How glad I am that you are mine.

More than a thousand laughs
Wouldn't show how happy you make me
For with you I'm just estatic
Feeling so carefree.

Together we commited
A beautiful crime
I stole away your heart
And you stole away mine.

I call the last spot. I'll get to it soon.

Can I submit 2 poems?? I can't choose which one to submit...

Don't Move On
by Bri [x]

We're crazy in love; like one of those forbidden romance movies.
So incapable of being indissoluble [strings attached].
Spend our days at the beach & nights by the moonlight.
Compatible; most people say [so perfectly matched].

..... (Don't move on) .....

Love; so deep nothing can stand in the way.
Conquering all mistakes, everything that goes wrong.
Happiness overwhelms our souls [like a cup over flowing].
Spinning in circles around each other to our favorite song.

..... (Don't move on) .....

Laughing endlessly, splashing around in the water.
Whispering adulating words in each others ears.
Cuddling by the warmth of sweet scenting candles.
Keeping one another safe from their fears.

..... (Don't move on) .....

Noticing; it's not only fairy tales or made up stories.
Wishes, fantasies, prayers, & dreams really do come true.
The man that has always accompanied me in my dreams,
I've come to find, that man was you.

..... (Don't move on) .....

-Hatori Sohma-, yess, but please no more than 2..

Sometimes I wonder...
by J. Lau

If everything happened for a reason,
What purpose did I serve,
When I entered into your life?

Am I just a stranger?
Who happened to be his best friend,
And knew all that happened between you and him?

Am I simply a friend?
Who you were comfortable with,
And had absolutely no feelings for?

Am I the comforter I once described?
Who was there by your side,
And comforts you when you cry?

Am I your guardian angel?
Who guards and help you,
When you needed most?

Am I the soul mate that you need?
Who shared all your joy and sorrows,
And a true friend you can count upon?

Am I the passing cloud?
That happened to be there,
And slowly disappears when the sky clears up?

Am I the rainbow in the sky?
That brings you joy for that brief moment,
And fades away when the sun shines again?

Am I the white Christmas?
That happens only on occasion,
And fulfills a part of your life when all else fails?

Or am I the destined one?
Who will love and cherish you,
For the rest of our lives?

Sometimes I wonder...
How I got myself tangled,
In this complicated situation.

But one thing for sure,
That makes all that I wondered,
Not at all important,
Is that I know... I love you so.

< - - - - - - - - - - - >

Wish That I Were

Wish that I were the moon
To softly kiss your sleep
To lie in love beside you
Caress your slumber deep

Wish that I were the stars
To light your darkest night
To hold your heart inside me
A beacon shining bright

Wish that I were the sun
To wash your every day
To color all your sunsets
Warmth that never goes away

Wish that I were the wind
To whisper breaths of love
To send a sigh of ecstasy
Enraptured from above

Wish that I were time
To give back what has passed
To ask for all and nothing
Just to be with you at last

I would like to enter into this contest! Can I? I have my poem done and everything!

Love for you only

It's the feeling
of being in love
it captures the soul
it flies like a dove.

Such a fantasy
cannot exist
but maybe it can
Just like this.

So many things,
I wish I could do,
but right at the top,
is to just be with you.

So may the waves crash
into the sands of time
and may I love you
will you always be mine?

I cry out for thee
hoping for a hand
for the sweet touch of an angel
of this bright and sacred land.

My love goes higher,
and my love goes deeper
for you...,
and only you.

~New Start~

You kiss me on the forehead
You kiss me on the cheek
You kiss me on the neck
And my heart begins to beat

You hold me as tight as you can
I never want you to let go,
I feel your heart beat faster
Because you know it’s time to go

I hold you tighter now
And beg you not to leave,
You wipe away my tears
As I lay my head on your sleeve

You tell me you’ll visit soon
But I’ve heard these words before,
And last time was the last time
I cannot be reassured

The time between our visits
Keeps getting longer you see,
And though my love for you is strong
I’m not sure of yours for me

I tell you all of this
And you tell me that I’m wrong,
You say we have a lasting love
And I ask you how long

You stumble at these words
And this was all it took,
I see it in your eyes
All summed up in just one look

And while you were my first love
And you’ll always have a place in my heart,
For now it’s time for me to move on
I need to make a new start

Poem number one. I hope you like it. As I mentioned above, I'm submiting two since I couldn't decide on one.

Alone

I was always alone,
Nobody cared,
About this poor soul,
Withering away,
On this sad, dark day.

A creature,
I seemed,
To all who saw me.
I was judged,
No matter the cause.

But now I remember,
That awkward smile,
When you looked down at me,
And held out your hand.
It took me a moment,
To realize the truth,
That you truly loved me,
And I was no longer alone.
You held me in your arms,
And I never forgot,
How it felt,
To finally be loved.

But now that memory,
Haunts me at night,
I can't stand this agony,
This agony of "alone".

And now poem number two. Thanks!!!!

My Unreachable Dream

Life is so complicated,
And all I feel is loss,
The loss of words,
Of dreams,
Of hope,
And of knowing.

I used to know myself,
From head to toe,
But now all I can do,
Is try to make sense,
Of this harsh, complicated world.

My mind is a mix,
As time slowly ticks,
I hide away,
Until I die,
Ever since,
That fateful day.

That day when I met you,
And knew that I couldn't,
That I couldn't love you,
Not even if I truly did.

You looked so handsome,
And you talked with such care,
That my heart started to warm,
Warming with every word,
Those words that you spoke,
That I loved so dearly.

But you had a life,
Filled with much joy,
That you didn't need someone,
Someone like me,
To help make the darkness,
Slowly fade away.

Instead I became this,
Lost and confused,
I want to die,
Rather than dread,
What I could have had.

His name,
You ask,
I cannot say,
For I slowly drift,
Drifting away,
Away from you,
From him,
And from love.

Time keeps on ticking,
Slowly but surely,
I cry ever day,
But at least I can say,
That I have felt love,
At least once in this lonely, dark life.

I'd like to reserve please.

Addicted to You

Why can't I stop
Stop thinking of you
I try to fill my day
With lots of things to do

But I continue to drift
Wondering where you are
Do you have any idea
That on my heart you've left a scar

You have priorities
Places you have to be
I'm just so very sad
There's no place for me

I fell in love with you
The keeper of my heart
It's just very hard for me
Since we've been apart

I think you're amazing
A very wonderful man
You pulled me in your web
I became your greatest fan

Just thinking of you
Makes my heart race
There's no one like you
Who brings a glow to my face

Did you ever stop to see
That each time we were together
I would melt within your eyes
A feeling I'll always treasure

When I stop to think
All that we've been through
I can't help but realize
I'm addicted to you.

reserve please!! thanks :)

this is kinda different, but it's a love poem. Hope you like :)

I Can't Get Enough of You
by ~BRiDDY~

It's like you're a drug that I get high off,
whenever you're by my side.
Like you're the alcohol that makes me drunk,
becoming addicted to this wild ride.

It's like I'm drowning in those eyes of oceans,
what would I do if you were to ever leave?
Because without you here with me,
it's like I just can't breathe.

It's like you are a mosquito,
sucking the life from me.
It's like I'm just not me at all,
I'm addicted, can't you see?

It's like you're a dose of tobacco,
with every intake of you I want more.
You're pulling me in, making my knees weaker,
and making my love-filled heart soar.

I'm a girl with an addiction,
I'm going crazy with obsession.
I'm stuck on you, you are my life.
I just can't get enough of you.

Fate
by ŘÅÇĦ♥

I don't know how to explain
this feeling I have for you
Some would call it love
but I call it fate.
It started so well
and ended in tragedy
It's just another story of a girl
who fell a little to hard
for the wrong guy.
And got caught up
for something she thought was real
just like everyone else he let her down
and their love slowly faded away.
until he didn't know her anymore.

if we get all poems in i might be able to get the contest done earlier than expected.. we are waiting on one more.. if poems are not turned in by the 13 then they can be replaced..

For hours I wait,
To see your beautiful smile
To hold you close,
And whisper softly,
"Hello, my love."

I wait to hear,
Three beautiful words,
From the lips,
Of a radiant angel.

I wait to feel,
The soft,
Warm touch,
Of your arms around me.

Then I gaze into,
The most breathtaking
Set of eyes,
I've ever seen,
And whisper,
One more thing.

Three words,
To show you,
How much I care.

"Darling,
I love you."

There we go. Now you may judge them!

wow that was fast! We are all done! =]

♥Ciao

yess, i have judges and they are thinking.. i will have last word. good luck.. and results will be in soon..

YAY!!! I'm so excited!!!

can't wait!! =]

Ciao~

YAY!

Good luck everyone.
You are all wonderful writings :]

Good luck with the judging, dear.

Yes! Good luck everyone! I am very excited! I have read the poems and am very impressed.

I just wanna say that i changed my name from -Hatori sohma- to what it is now. I just want to make that clear in case of confusion. Thanks!

I guess i was a bit confussed... but can i enter? just a thought

1.PrettyInPunk[LauRa]
2.SoSickOfTears
3. J. Lau
4. Romantic Lover
5. K.i.T.t.Y.

sorry it took so long i will comment your poems leave the ones you want commented..

this was a hard choice i like all of them so i had some other people help me chose.. they were all good! keep up the good work!

Am i?*blacks out*

What criteria was used to determine the winners of this contest?

Deepness i think

*hugs everyone*

Thanks alot skater girl...and it would be good if you do my newest ones...*smiles*

Wow... thanks for the placing. Please r/r/c "Fate. ... that was never meant to be...", "Wishing you well..." and "Nature's Painting". Thanks again!

Great job everyone!

J. Lau

Thanks a bunch. That was tough, everyone had great poems.

Take your pick on my poems. They are all true stories from the heart.

Wow the poems sounds really good