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  • StormyStar
    17 years ago

    {edit}nvm

  • StormyStar
    17 years ago

    wait wati.. nvm i want a different one in there..

    Cloudy mind
    by Skater girl

    When i look in the eyes of the love i find,
    i see how amazing and so Devinne,
    the look in your eyes says that your lost,
    I'll stand beside you till you find what you want,
    although i love you and your cloudy mind,
    the tears i hide way deep inside,
    won't be seen by a guy so fine,
    i can't help but to wander why you don't see,
    i love you so much, you should be with me,

    the look in your eyes have become so dark,
    it's like your hiding something from me I'm afraid to know what,
    there is no lightness, not even a spark.
    you know what is funny,
    that you still have my heart,
    i can't let you go it hurts so much,
    so you'll always have a little part of my heart.

    to see you with her talking and laughing,
    brings tears to my eyes that once were filled,
    with the love you gave me forever until,
    she came back to you and took you away,
    best friends forever you said we'd stay,
    you see what has happen since she came along,
    she took you form me and now we're done,
    not even close like we used to be,
    i still remember the days you loved me.

    your eyes are so dark, why can't i see through,
    just like how i used to do.
    it's just to hard to be like we we're,
    you just say that probably cause of her.
    well good bye my friend,
    i love you so much but this is the end.
    the clouds in your mind have caused you to pretend,
    we're not friends we never were,
    i mean nothing to you so good bye good friend.

  • Jessi Ray
    17 years ago

    What is this Feeling?

    I've never felt this feeling
    It's a feeling deep inside
    It's a feeling so confusing
    It's a feeling I can't hide.

    Could this be my first love
    how am I supposed to know,
    Ever since I've met you
    I've felt this feeling start to grow.

    Every time I'm with you
    I get these butterflies,
    I've given you all my trust
    trust that you won't tell me lies.

    When you hold me in your arms
    I feel so safe and small,
    and when you kiss me on my neck
    I have no cares at all.

    Even from across the room
    I can feel your stares,
    and when I look into those deep brown eyes
    I can see how much you care.

    Even when we're not together
    I feel we're not apart,
    and I just wanted you to know
    it's 'cause you've found your way into my heart.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Reserve Please.

    A Silhouette In The Sailor's Sky. [Villonnet]

    Our bodies were silhouetted against the sailor's sky,
    A touch of your hand to my cheek, your breath on my neck,
    "Take my hand and never let go, we will make it; I swear."
    You whispered softly and turned to look me in the eye -

    I caught a glimpse of fear in you, tilted my head to cry;
    "Entwine your fingers in mine, that's where they belong."
    My naive heart trembled to the sound of your words -
    Our bodies were silhouetted against the sailor's sky.

    Your breath danced in the air as you sang me a lullaby,
    And as a crystal tear shattered on the grass, you smiled -
    "I promise you baby, everything will be okay."
    You whispered softly and turned to look me in the eye.

    Our bodies were silhouetted against the sailor's sky,
    "You are mine and I am yours, forever" -
    You whispered softly and turned to look me in the eye.

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    A Villonnet is a hybrid of the Villanelle and the Sonnet. It has the Iambic Pentameter of both, but holsd the four stanza/line structure of the Sonnet, while utilizing the two-line rhyme nature of the Villanelle. The final stanza replaces the Sonnet couplet with a typical Villanelle tercet.

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  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    Don't Move On
    by Bri [x]

    We're crazy in love; like one of those forbidden romance movies.
    So incapable of being indissoluble [strings attached].
    Spend our days at the beach & nights by the moonlight.
    Compatible; most people say [so perfectly matched].

    ..... (Don't move on) .....

    Love; so deep nothing can stand in the way.
    Conquering all mistakes, everything that goes wrong.
    Happiness overwhelms our souls [like a cup over flowing].
    Spinning in circles around each other to our favorite song.

    ..... (Don't move on) .....

    Laughing endlessly, splashing around in the water.
    Whispering adulating words in each others ears.
    Cuddling by the warmth of sweet scenting candles.
    Keeping one another safe from their fears.

    ..... (Don't move on) .....

    Noticing; it's not only fairy tales or made up stories.
    Wishes, fantasies, prayers, & dreams really do come true.
    The man that has always accompanied me in my dreams,
    I've come to find, that man was you.

    ..... (Don't move on) .....

  • Romantic Lover
    17 years ago

    I'd like to reserve please.

  • Romantic Lover
    17 years ago

    The Keeper of My Heart

    There is this handsome, wonderful and an amazing man
    With an irresistible smile and for that I'd do whatever I can
    He has beautiful blue eyes which within I see my reflection
    I'm just not sure he really knows how deep is my affection

    He gives incredible tight hugs, I'm lost in his embrace
    But what is really cool to me is when I touch his face
    And I love his witty sense of humor, with him its fun to be
    He makes everyone laugh, but does so much more to me

    He became one of my greatest friends and I love him for that
    He is just wonderful to be with even if its just for simple chat
    A truly unique man who somehow became the keeper of my heart
    Who also felt the same for me and did from the very start

    He has a sensual form of touch simply by running his fingers through my hair
    But even without the physical form and when into my eyes he just glares
    He makes my heart race like no one has ever done before
    He is definitely one in a million and the one I most adore

    If I was granted three wishes, I'd have to give away two
    Because I only need one, my wish is to be with him and just say "I Love You."

  • Bridget
    17 years ago

    reserve please!

  • Bridget
    17 years ago

    this is a kinda different type of love poem, but it's a love poem. I hope it's ok :)

    I Can't Get Enough of You
    by ~BRiDDY~

    It's like you're a drug that I get high off,
    whenever you're by my side.
    Like you're the alcohol that makes me drunk,
    becoming addicted to this wild ride.

    It's like I'm drowning in those eyes of oceans,
    what would I do if you were to ever leave?
    Because without you here with me,
    it's like I just can't breathe.

    It's like you are a mosquito,
    sucking the life from me.
    It's like I'm just not me at all,
    I'm addicted, can't you see?

    It's like you're a dose of tobacco,
    with every intake of you I want more.
    You're pulling me in, making my knees weaker,
    and making my love-filled heart soar.

    I'm a girl with an addiction,
    I'm going crazy with obsession.
    I'm stuck on you, you are my life.
    I just can't get enough of you.

  • ŘÅÇĦ♥
    17 years ago

    Fate
    by ŘÅÇĦ♥

    I don't know how to explain-
    This feeling I have for you.
    Some would call it love,
    But I call it fate.
    It started so well,
    And ended in tragedy.
    It's just another story of a girl,
    Who fell a little to hard
    For the wrong guy.
    And got caught up,
    For something she thought was real.
    Just like everyone else he let her down,
    And their love slowly faded away.
    Until he didn't know her anymore.

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    Made For Each Other
    by Ciao

    A silent tear streams down her cheek
    Fighting to be strong; accepting she's weak
    Another one follows, until she can count no more
    Her teary-eyed stare catches her drawer

    A shudder, through her body, as she remembers what's inside
    The pain she's holding close, she can no longer hide
    She slowly gets up and opens the drawer
    Hands shaking, she drops the notes on the floor

    Collecting her wits as with all of the notes
    She sits back down to look at what he wrote
    All the memories come back and she's taken into the past
    Back to a time when she thought they would last

    As she reread the notes, the tears still dropped
    She knew that the steam would never be stopped
    After fighting the tears, she gave up, in vain
    She knew there was no way to stop the pain

    The folded notes, crease folded and torn
    With letters and words, faded by worn
    Each note, holding its own time frame
    Each ending, showing the same exact name

    ''With Love'' or ''Yours''; endings meaning nothing now
    Wishing things were different; wondering how
    Wasted words, left nothing to be found
    Wondering what life would be if he was around

    Tears still flowing as she puts the notes back
    Feeling in her heart, the place where she lacks
    So as she sites back down, you can barely hear her mutter:
    ''But baby, I thought we were Made For Each Other.''

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    ^^ mine makes 9 so that no one gets confused. =]

    Ciao

  • Liz
    17 years ago

    [# 11]

    Couldn't find my GOOD love poems. heh.

    Song Of Love [Acrostic]

    Sweet angels of heaven play a song so we can dance,
    On brightly-painted stars play the notes of our romance.
    Never let it end, this peacefulness that soothes our ears,
    Gentle sounding lullabies, reminding us love is near.

    Overwhelming sensations that make our hearts beat fast,
    Following the steps of clouds dancing overcast.

    Lyrics sung between two souls, in one beat, just one sound,
    Our bodies move as one; feet never meet the ground.
    Velvet skies watch over us, voices sing from high above,
    Enchanting music, dancing hearts. When I hear our song of love.

    © Poetess

    *
    Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title.

  • Poetess Lana
    17 years ago

    (#12)

    Loved to Hate

    I thought i was in love, yet
    Love loved to hate me...
    I loved who i thought would understand,
    who would be close enough to care

    I loved you from the depths of my soul
    and you played me like a cheap video game.

    Ah, the simile of life,
    you played my heart, my soul, my life,
    my mind, (not to mention running up my
    cell phone bill...)

    And I loved, yet love was a liar,
    And for making me love you,
    And for love hating me,
    I hate love.

    OMG must be the worst ive ever written, but i wasnt sure if we were allowed to enter old poems.

  • Coeur Cassa Sage
    17 years ago

    Happily Ever After (#13)

    I am the princess
    Stuck in the tower
    You sit on the ground
    So we can talk for an hour
    I am that princess
    That slept and slept
    You were the one
    Who's kiss revived me which I'll never forget
    Yes, I am that damsel
    Who bit into the apple
    And when I awoke to your loving face
    We wed in the chapel
    I am that princess
    Who was the fox under the lion's rule
    You were Robin
    Who made the king look like a fool
    I was that very same princess
    Who wished I had legs
    I went to the sea witch
    And begged and begged
    I met you on the shore
    With no voice
    But we still fell in love
    Though you had another choice
    Each story ends happily
    Just like mine
    I am the princess
    And you are the prince
    Who rescues me when I'm in distress
    And for that I give you a kiss
    Not all stories end happliy
    I'm lucky mine did
    I knew it would for when we met
    My heart did not forbid
    Just so we could live
    Happily Ever After

  • Avrii Monrielle
    17 years ago

    #14

    If I Could
    by SingingInTheRain

    If I could, I would
    Stare deep into your eyes
    If I could, I'd tell you
    I don't want to say goodbye

    If I could, I'd say
    Don't ever go away
    If I could, I'd say I love you
    Every single day

    If I could, I'd say I'm sorry
    For everything I've done
    I'll hug you and kiss you
    You'll be my number one

    If I could, I'd give you
    All the love in the world
    But right now, all I can offer
    Is a chance to be your girl

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    17 years ago

    15!

    It's 3 in the morning but you're still on my mind,
    The tears blur the darkness, making me blind.
    I can't pretend I don't miss you, because it'd be a lie,
    Even though it's over, I can't just say goodbye

    If there's one memory I don't want to lose,
    It's the feeling that I had when I was with you.
    Everything before you had no meaning,
    But now I realize it was you I was missing.

    Though no one can decide who it is we dream of,
    The person of whom I dream is the one I love.
    You mean so much to me, but you're fading away,
    I'll give up everything to just have you one more day.

    All I can do now is just lay around in bed,
    So many memories keep replaying in my head.
    I remember what it felt like to be in your arms,
    You took my heart with your kindness and charms.

    I just keep falling harder and harder each time,
    Though we're apart, can't get you outta my mind
    Life without you has just been a living hell,
    Baby, can't you see? You got me under your spell.

    My door is always open, if you don't want to move on,
    Sometimes you don't know what you got until it's gone.
    But I don't want to be without you, so I'll be waiting,
    If only I could go back in time, I could've saved this aching.

    Don't want no one else, but don't want to be alone,
    I'm falling apart at the seams, apart bone by bone.
    The only one I want to be with anymore is you,
    I try to move on, but you crawl into everything I do.

    I think of you for hours on end, as I lie in bed awake.
    I know why you ended us, I'm more then you could take.
    I know being with me wasn't easy, but I tried,
    I know I was wrong, shouldn't have kept it all inside.

    Though I can't feel a thing, you can find much then me,
    I'll always remember you, but it's time you be free.
    I guess that some things are just not meant to be.
    Because the truth is, you're so much better then me...

    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • swill
    17 years ago

    WINDS OF CHANGE

    I’ve started smelling you in roses,
    feeling you in the damp, dim evenings,
    and seeing you in its lilac dew.

    Meaning it was that I’d searched for,
    and meaning it was, that you gave me.
    This cold oil had never known
    that there would come a day, when
    your loving flame would kiss my lamp
    and thaw my miseries away…
    Now amidst your loving arms,
    I am draped in peace, and a warmth
    that I think my heart has grown addicted to…
    The light illuminates, yet warns me,
    and I can see the misty road just far enough
    to tell me that it’s wise to be scared,
    for reality is harsh, and the past tells me
    that there are no hands of fate or circumstance
    that do not believe in cruelty;
    none that do not like lashing sand-castles
    with their unrelenting waves of time.
    Even a semblance of a parting is piercing
    so if the winds of change ever cruelly blow,
    and our time together is set in stone,
    I know not what will remain of me…

    But I’ll never stop smelling you in roses,
    feeling you in the damp, dim evenings,
    and seeing you in its lilac dew.

    Because I can’t.

    -Dhaval

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    You're the one
    By Sarah Elliott.

    Deep in thought
    Your on my mind
    Your all I can think about
    Your one of a kind

    I love you now
    And always will
    I would do anything for you
    I would even kill

    Your the one who
    Keeps my heart beating fast
    The one who I can turn to
    When I look at my past

    The smile on my face
    Is there because of you
    If I wasn't with you
    I don't know what I'll do

    I just want to say that
    I love you with all my heart
    Your everything to me
    And nothing can break us apart

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    I'm pretty sure you're past your limit, but just in case:
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    The Love Of Fate

    Protest against a simple love,
    Sweet and charished from above,
    Dolled eyes through love of great,
    Finding that you mustn't wait.
    From above does greedy eyes steal,
    Something that does not seem quite real.
    Tragically wishing upon star stricken moons,
    For doves are touching you this noon.
    A simple love so touching, gracious, benign,
    Cannot, willnot, give up by cruel time.
    Feast your eyes upon something so great;
    The love of loves, the love of fate.

    Held in your arms, a thought is displayed,
    Is this truth, forever delayed?
    Gracious touch simple by shouting sound,
    Everywhere around you this love is found.
    High above the sky is a magestic creation,
    Where fate of love makes a splendid sensation.
    Falling grandiosely to gentle song,
    You must carssess it simply and strong.
    Just feast your eyes upon something so great;
    The love of loves, the love of fate.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • Mark
    17 years ago

    A lovers goodbye

    In the present i still see
    In my mind we would be
    All the struggles we have fought
    All the luck you had brought

    The future is now my fear
    Why did you leave my dear??
    You will never know, now that you are gone.
    That in my heart, you were the only one.

    The time we have had
    is now memories, and they makes me sad.
    And I ain't want to lie.
    That without you I want to die.

    Cause in the battle between heart and mind.
    There is the answer I will find.
    But my soul to my body seems to receive.
    A message that it wants to leave.

    Goodbye to you, the one I loved.
    The blades cutting my vanes seems so soft.
    Because they were the ones that gave.
    Freedom to my soul, in me it was only a slave.

    - Mark

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    ^^ number 19! I'm sure that it's closed now.

    Ciao

  • swill
    17 years ago

    please please please please please accept whichever ones are present till the next time you see it! it would be such a pity...oh oh oh...late by 9 minutes!

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    I'm not the contest holder, but I wonder too if she would accept them.

    Ciao

  • Coeur Cassa Sage
    17 years ago

    It looks like she hasn't been on this post for a while, either that or she has forgotten to update the list....

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    Thank you very much for placing me in the top 10! can't wait for round two! =] You picked some very good poets. Great competition!!

    Ciao~

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    Anna, Thanks for the comment.

    Third time lucky.

    :Sarah:

  • Bridget
    17 years ago

    oh yuss im into the next round! thank you heaps. When does the next poem have to be in by?