Third Contest: Take My Titles Contest (Free-4-All)

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    17 years ago

    1) *Gem* - If I Was Born Beautiful

    2) Lush.Fcuk-*- Killed Me With A Fantasy & This Burning Bridge

    3) Mooie Ogen- So Many Questions... So Few Answers...

    4)SingingIntheRain- Inside My Head

    5) Lucy the Lucililly, Tori- Suicide Letter (there are five different parts, so five different people can use this title)

    6) Erika- What is Love?

    7) Lauren- I'll Never Let you Get to Me

    8)`&& lOve*- I Never Will Forget You

  • Lauren Waszkiewicz
    17 years ago

    Well i wrote a poem. and it ended up with the title Shredded. and i thought hey might as well kill to birds with one stone. so i looked through your poems.. and BooYah! lol. you used that title!
    so Heres my poem. =]

    Shredded(Alphabet Poem)by Sociopathetic xLaurenx

    Abused,
    Broken
    Child..
    Deceived,
    Exploited,
    Forgotten, and
    Gerstorted.

    Her perfect
    Image
    Jaded, and
    Killed.

    Lonesome and
    Mangled.
    Numb and
    Overused.
    Proclaimed as
    Queany, and
    Racy.

    She's been Shredded.

    True, and
    Unmeasurable,
    Vixen beauty
    Wasted as an
    X-rated and
    Young star in
    Zoos.

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    17 years ago

    Thank you Laura.

    C'MON People! I have 817 poems, A VARIETY Of titles!
    It should be SO easy to find one you like!!!!!

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    I forgot I reserved one sorry.
    I'll try and get it done asap.

  • RunningOnEmpty
    17 years ago

    OK. It doesn't close until mid-may so you have plenty of time!

  • The Angel of Secrets
    17 years ago

    Okey, this sounds cool so here it goes.

    I chose "Dying on the Ocean Floor"

    An endless scream, houls in the night,
    the waves of the ocean beats.
    Towards the deck, she runs in fright,
    Before his task completes.

    She is soaking in a small white dress,
    wrippet by a hungry knife.
    She can keep running, but without success,
    There is no chance of life.

    She can hear him come, coming near,
    his steps running fast.
    She can feel the sweat, tight and clear,
    This will no longer last.

    The boat is coming to an end,
    She has no where to go.
    She is tired and weak, she can't defend,
    What he does not know.

    She puts her hands around her waist,
    protects the unborn boy.
    He does not know what he chaesed,
    What he is about to destroy.

    He's coming closer, now he's here,
    she can feel his smelly breath.
    She can feel the unmistaken feeling of fear,
    This is their ending death.

    He takes her arms, and kiss her lips,
    whisper gently "Goodbye".
    He lifts her up, around her hips,
    and says "This is your time to die."

    She can't protest and fakes a smile,
    "It's not worth it anymore."
    She flies just for a little while,
    Before dying on the ocean floor.

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Xx If I Was Born Beautiful... xX

    If I was born beautiful...
    I'd wear all the stylish clothes
    That are designed with pretty girls in mind
    All the low-cut fitted tops
    I turn away from every time

    If I was born beautiful...
    I wouldn't need so much make-up
    To try and cover all my flaws
    I'd smile knowing it wasn't for me
    And bask in admiring applause

    If I was born beautiful...
    I'd be more confident in myself
    I wouldn't be so painfully shy
    I'd be popular with everyone
    And in the night I wouldn't cry

    If I was born beautiful...
    Life would be so much easier
    Beautiful people aren't left behind
    The boys would be lining up for me
    Love would be a cinch to find

    I was born beautiful...
    Everyone is born this way
    We have all been so naive
    We are all born beautiful
    It's not something we achieve

    *Gem*

    Copyright©GemmaStott2007

    (I have writers block!!! =/)

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    17 years ago

    Dear GEM,

    Omg, that happened to me for about two months. I know how you feel. If you wish to edit your poem later on, or resubmit it, you may. Anyone will be allowed to do the same. I have not read any of the poems yet, purposefully of course, and It is fine if you resubmit it.

    ~Stephen White

  • Ashley Ann
    17 years ago

    "Just someone invisible..." for me please!Thankiez! XOXOXOXO

  • Coeur Cassa Sage
    17 years ago

    I will take The Rose!

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    I'd like to do another if that's ok..

    "Side by side, heart to heart" please

    *Gem*

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    (Scroll down to understand the type of poem before you read, or you won't understand the structure. Very important!)

    Xx Side By Side, Heart To Heart - Sestina xX

    A beautiful maiden standing beneath the night
    sky. Smiling softly at her one true love.
    The one to which her heart belongs.
    Something precious and true is taking place
    as their eyes meet across the dew speckled foliage. It's time
    to seal forever and always with a kiss.

    So many things can be said with a mere delicate kiss.
    They are silhouetted by the shimmering stars of the night
    that twinkle in unison. Keeping in time
    with the melody of love.
    The enchanting requiem of such a magical place
    where these powerful, wondrous emotions belong.

    It's not difficult to tell these two souls belong
    together as one. You can see the sparks, the devotion, as they kiss,
    feel the passion in the soft breeze, as the exchange takes place.
    In the safe and peaceful haven that the night
    provides. It's the exchange of their love
    that will last until the end of time.

    The maiden smiled, a slow sweet smile, reminding him of the time
    he first saw her face, when he realised his heart belongs
    with hers. That he was made to love
    and cherish her and only her. It was proved to him when a kiss
    was placed on his lips, on the first night
    they spent together. In this same enchanting place.

    One year later, they returned hand in hand, side by side, heart to heart to this place
    where dreams come true. Where they kissed for the first time.
    They exchanged their vows under the deep blue and black night
    sky, stars twinkling above. Two hearts that belong
    together, two souls combined, made official with a sweet kiss,
    symbolising true love.

    Night comes to an end as dawn breaks blessing where love
    belongs, where it was born in such a majestic and beautiful place.
    Time holds no boundaries when a love like this is sealed with a kiss.

    *Gem*

    Copyright©GemmaStott2007

    Sestina - is a strict ordered form of poetry, dating back to twelfth century French troubadours. It
    consists of six six-line (sestets) stanzas followed by a three-line envoy. Rather than use a rhyme
    scheme, the six ending words of the first stanza are repeated as the ending words of the other five
    stanzas in a set pattern. The envoy uses two of the ending words per line, again in a set pattern.

    First stanza, ..1 ..2 ..3 ..4 ..5 ..6
    Second stanza, ..6 ..1 ..5 .. 2 ..4 ..3
    Third stanza, ..3 ..6 ..4 ..1 ..2 ..5
    Fourth stanza, ..5 ..3 ..2 ..6 ..1 ..4
    Fifth stanza, ..4 ..5 ..1 ..3 ..6 ..2
    Sixth stanza, ..2 ..4 ..6 ..5 ..3 ..1

    Concluding tercet:
    beginning of first line ..2, end of first line ..5
    beginning of second line ..4, end of second line..3
    beginning of third line ..6, end of third line ..1

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    I'm going to have to unreserve sorry.

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    17 years ago

    Actually, I'm going to judge this now.

  • Coeur Cassa Sage
    17 years ago

    Ok, cool. So....who are the winners?

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    17 years ago

    Look up my name, IdTakeABulletForYou and go to my newer contest, which is the same one as this =] Submit there. This version is closed.

  • nikki
    17 years ago

    I did but no one seems to go on there anymore.