LINKIN PARK CONTEST!!!

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    CLOSEDCLOSEDCLOSEDLCLOSEDCLOSED

    RESULTS ARE IN!!! SEE BOTTOM OF PAGE!

    I know lots of you like Linkin Park...

    I have a tracklist of the songs on there new album coming out in may...

    You have to write a poem consisting of the title

    Rules:
    1.Id much prefer if it rhymed, i find non-rhymers hard to follow
    2. Must have the title in it somewhere
    3. Any style or form is acceptable
    4. 1 reserve per poem
    5. Must not be too long not too short either...how about...12-40 lines
    6.Can be a song
    7. Deadline is when all titles are finished

    Titles

    Wake----DONE by Wings of Flames
    Given Up---DONE by The Ghost Of Me
    Leave Out All The Rest----DONE by Charisma
    Bleed It Out----DONE by Poetess
    Shadow Of The Day
    What I've Done----DONE by Adam
    Hands Held High----DONE by Racheal
    No More Sorrow
    Valentine's Day---DONE by Infected with his deadly love
    In Between----DONE by SingingInTheRain
    In Pieces----DONE by Lush Fcuk
    The Little Things Give You Away

    Prizes have been undecided as of now but they will be good dont worry...

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    all great titles.. I can't decide!

    The Little Things You Give Away please

    Ciao

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    haha that's the one I was going to do... =P

    Ciao~

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    I'll take Valentines Day please.

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    Valentines Day
    By Sarah Elliott

    Here I am again
    Alone on this romantic day
    The day to share the love
    This Valentines day

    --------------------------------------------------
    Naani is one of Indian's most popular Telugu poems. Naani means an expression of one and all.
    It consists of 4 lines, the total lines consists of 20 to 25 syllables. The poem is not bounded to
    a particular subject. Generally it depends upon human relations and current statements.

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    Leave out all the rest...plz!
    Charisma*

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    Youve all been marked down =D

  • Sandra D
    17 years ago

    Id like to try ~No More Sorrow~

    thanx!

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Can I please reserve In Pieces?

    Thanks! (:

  • Avrii Monrielle
    17 years ago

    Plz reserve me, "In Between"

    Thanks!

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    Bump do to spam

    Ciao~

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    I just added a few rules...

    The poem should not be too long

    and

    It can be a song

  • Sandra D
    17 years ago

    Oh my gosh, thank god! i was just going to ask if it could be a song!
    thanks!

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Red and blue colored the empty street,
    As the men in blue entered apartment 403,
    The smell of whiskey tainting their nose,
    Hidden in a vase with one black rose --

    The desolate suite grew quiet and cold,
    As one man through a walkie-talkie was told,
    To look in the bedroom and he will find,
    The remainder of a love she left behind.

    Black and white pictures scattered along the floor,
    Smiling faces forced to watch such gore,
    A trail of blood leading out the window,
    Scattered between footprints encased in snow.

    Inside a deserted car, there lay a woman,
    Wondering where her boy has been,
    And in pieces, she fell with grace,
    With a handprint imprinted across her face.

    But on a card between the roses thorns,
    Was a tiny note from one wife terribly scorned,
    But between the lines, scribbled in blue;
    Were three little words -- 'I love you'.

    -Jenna Elphick
    April 9, 2007

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    I'm gonna have to back out. I can't think of a good poem for The Little things...

    Sorry...:(

    Ciao~

  • xoOrdinaryGirlox
    17 years ago

    ~Because our love is real,
    We can be open about how we feel.

    We have felt like we have Given Up but have pulled together.
    Never give up, giving up is what i say forever.~

    Is that good enough for Given Up?

    If so can i enter that please?

    Thankyou.

  • Lauren Waszkiewicz
    17 years ago

    Haha. i am listening to them right now! xD

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    Okay im going to add to the new rule that it cant be too long...im going to add that it cant be short...all the ones that have already been entered are fine...

    I just dont like one that are too short because it doesnt give enough story

    So ya, dont worry if you are already done

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    Wow very good racheal...i think i'll have to start reading ur poems...and im not surprised at Jennas amazing work

    Keep it up guys!

    Reserve the rest and get the outstanding ones in!

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    Leave Out All The Rest

    My heart blindly follows you
    Though your flaws stand out.
    I know the danger you impose
    But push aside all doubt.

    Like a moth to the flame
    I see the ruin up ahead.
    But still I go on the same
    Walking straight to my death.

    What about you keeps me
    Entranced and unaware?
    How can one person take away
    My cautiousness and care?

    I should be on tip toes
    Instead I walk the ledge.
    One step further to you
    Can drop me over the edge.

    My heart is painting pictures
    Of a perfect life with you.
    My mind is saying, "NO!"
    Oh, what am I to do?

    Why must this be a battle?
    Why do I only see your best?
    My heart looks for the good
    And says, "Leave out all the rest."

    I'm hoping I'll awaken
    From this nightmare, from this dream.
    If I wasn't so in love
    Things wouldn't be as they seem.

    By: Charisma*

  • Sandra D
    17 years ago

    Im sorry, i can't get anything on this one... im gonna have to like un-reserve... sorry

  • Wings Of Flames
    17 years ago

    Reserve
    wake

  • Wings Of Flames
    17 years ago

    Wake

    I pull the sheets from my head,
    I breathe in the fumes of today,
    A stench of blood and tears,
    And a sence that spirit's fray,

    I clamber into my shell,
    Hope someone hears my call,
    Tired yet I'm so awake,
    Of hearing those who fall,

    My courage lightens to break,
    The darkness lifts to light,
    I stand upon my own two feet,
    And strength helps me to fight,

    I take a step and feel quite pleased,
    A battle I have won,
    I take another and so fourth,
    And suddenly I run,

    I fear the bed's closeness,
    Again, I'll never tred,
    Passion drives me to my life,
    And to this I have fled,

    Happiness fills my soul,
    A blindness lifts my weight,
    My muscles pull me forward,
    As my head sets me straight.

    This is about a patient coming out of hospital after being unable to move their legs.

  • xoOrdinaryGirlox
    17 years ago

    Sorry, But can i change my poem to a slightly longer one which has more story to it?

    Here it is:

    ~*~

    Given Up

    As I stand there gazing into your eyes,
    I remember everything that happened.
    Now you have come to claim your prize,
    As you have suceeded in your game.

    Nights of terror and torture but you didnt mind,
    You were only thinking of claiming your prize.
    I couldnt believe i could have been so blind,
    As i layed there cold, washed in my own blood.

    You ripped me of my inocence,
    The only bit of hope and faith i had.
    I thought you had at least one bit of sense,
    But you carried on as if nothing had ever happened.

    Why did you do that to me?
    I thought you said that you loved me.
    Well that was too good to be true,
    I always knew that we could never be.

    Wishing you were behind bars,
    Where every inch of you deserves to be
    Instead your out their buying flash cars,
    With what was supposed to be our money.

    Everywhere you go, every step you take,
    I will be there, watching, haunting you.
    And as you sit there beside our lake,
    I will make sure your remaining life is hell.

    I well never stop this fight,
    To get you where you are supposed to be
    Your destination I have in sight,
    And in my eyes I havent Given Up.

    ~*~

    Its about a girl who loved this guy but then he raped and killed her and how she will always be there to haunt his life forever. Sorry to have such a morbid subject. It ISNT a true story either.

    ~*~

    I'm sorry if it is too long. It is only 28 lines though. But please let me change it? And if you have let me can you let me know please?

    Thankyou.

    ..X..TheGhostOfMe..X..

  • xoOrdinaryGirlox
    17 years ago

    Is this contest going to end? Because I do not think anyone else wants to enter.

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    Ya im just waiting for the people that havent finished to finish

  • xoOrdinaryGirlox
    17 years ago

    Oooh...Ok. Thankyou.

  • Avrii Monrielle
    17 years ago

    In Between

    Lost in the middle,
    Intense waters seeping,
    Betwixt in my head,
    Interfering sound sleeping.

    Pounding white knuckles,
    Entire system drained,
    Nights spent staying up,
    Eyes red and strained.

    Knees touch the ground,
    Feet hit the floor,
    Praying for miracles,
    Freely given before.

    Elbows are aching,
    Tears drop like water,
    Heart tricked, confused,
    As a sheep led to slaughter.

    Sweet sanity's breaking,
    Upon the black ice,
    Lost in between,
    To not pay the price.

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    WOW!!! I am very impressed!

    When i read the winners poem i knew it would be a challenge for anybody else to pull off something better...so i know who 1st and 2nd place are...but...im having a very tough time deciding a 3rd place...so...just because everyone did a great job...if you didnt place i will give you honorable mentions

    3rd-Given Up by TheGhostOfMe---I absolutely loved the topic you wrote it on...i liked where you said...this is not a true story cuz if its about a girl thats now dead...obviously thats not u...so Congrats

    2nd-In Pieces by Lush.Fcuk---You never stop impressing me, keep it up

    1st-Bleed it out by Poetess---Im absolutely speechless...that was AMAZING! keep it up for sure!

    Everyone else-Thank you for participating, like I said, because you all did so well i will give you prizes too

    1st-8 comments and place on favorites
    2nd-6 comments and no place on faves cuz ur already there =D
    3rd-5 comments and place on favorites
    HM-2 comments

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Aweh thanks Honey!

    Could you please do...

    This Week The Trend
    Pink Brush
    Grandmother's Pearls
    The Lovely Bones
    Cute Without The E
    The Pier By The Shore-line.

    Thanks! =)

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    Congrats everyone.

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    Yep, sorry for the delay.

  • xoOrdinaryGirlox
    17 years ago

    Wow! Thankyou for the 3rd place. I really enjoyed writing that poem. =D Congratulations to all the other winners and to all the others who wrote poems. They are all fantastic. Well Done. =D

    Xx..Jo..xX