Haiku's.!

  • Hatori
    17 years ago

    Hatori and Kana

    Music of Sohma,
    Memories of importance,
    Never forget me.

    There is one of 'em, but wait. I'll get back to you with more :D !

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    Glistening [Haiku]

    Moonlight glistening
    Upon calm ocean waters --
    Wishing on the stars

    Brianna Carter
    March 3, 2007.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    I THINK you said we can post up to three. If not and I'm just retarded and can't read . . . tell me. =/
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    Ruby Red Rains {Haiku}

    Of ruby red rains --
    Oh, to arise such beauty!
    Peace falls among us.

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    So Misleading {Haiku}

    Rain's so misleading,
    An ebony of decay --
    Emeralds shine from dew.

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    Winter Tree {Haiku}

    Slim branches reaching
    Whispering many stories
    To the skies tonight.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    (This is all one poem)

    Xx Seasonal Haiku's xX

    Beautiful flowers
    Grow in such lovely colours
    For everyone's joy

    The bright blazing sun
    In shades of red and yellow
    Summer has commenced

    Leaves begin to fall
    As the weather starts to wane
    Leaving the tree's bare

    Soft delicate snow
    Falling gently to the ground
    Turning the world bright

    The different seasons
    They go round in a cycle
    The same yet different ©

    *Gem*

  • Lauren Waszkiewicz
    17 years ago

    River*Haiku*
    Sociopathetic [Lauren]

    A Peaceful River
    Flowing throughout the valley
    Gives New hope to Spring

    ~~

    Falling Star(Haiku)
    Sociopathetic [Lauren]

    Twinkling in the skies.
    One falls from its mighty throne
    Watch and make a wish.

    ~~
    Thunderstorm

    Cackle, Boom, Flash
    Illuminate the night skies.
    Drip, drop, drip, then silence

  • Daisy if you do
    17 years ago

    Cherry Blossom Tree

    Pink and radiant
    her ephemeral beauty
    blooms for all to see

  • Hatori
    17 years ago

    Anti-depression, I know that you have R/R/C on all of my poems, but still, I wanna know if my poems are worthy of winning a contest. I will give you my other Haiku's really soon :D .

  • Coeur Cassa Sage
    17 years ago

    I hope this is ok. The 2 hikus go together.

    Tears and Blood

    Crimson blood drips down
    A velvet rose full in bloom
    That I look over

    Hot tears roll down a
    Petal and fall to the floor
    Tears and blood mingle

  • Just Lucy
    17 years ago

    Victim In Destress

    Lonely and scared
    She has just hit rock bottom
    Who can help her now

    _____Lucy__(Lucililly)________________________

  • Hatori
    17 years ago

    Okay, so here's the deal. I was trying to come up with something new, so I made a poem with 15 haiku's included. Does that count? I'm just gonna put it here for now, and if you don't approve, I'll take it off. K?

    The 12 Junnishi, their lord, their saviour, and the forbidden

    Ayame Sohma,
    So affable and tender,
    Possessed by the snake.

    Hatori Sohma,
    Aloof due to his true love,
    Curse of the dragon.

    Kureno Sohma,
    Distant yet obedient,
    Year of the rooster.

    Funny but gentle,
    Vengeful spirit of the dog,
    The clever Shigure.

    Secretive Sohma,
    Zodiac of the sad horse,
    Unforgiving Rin.

    Hatsuharu-san,
    Cursed as the year of the cow,
    For eternity.

    Kagura Sohma,
    The spirit of the true boar,
    Her undying love.

    Demanding Hiro,
    The young and protective sheep,
    Cursed without escape.

    Year of the grey rat,
    Yuki suffers pain each day,
    As he was destined.

    The shiest Sohma,
    By the name of Kisa-san,
    Year of the tiger.

    Momiji Sohma,
    Optimistic by nature,
    Curse of the rabbit.

    Apologetic,
    Ritsu, year of the monkey,
    Forgives once again.

    Twelve junnishi ruled,
    By one man named Akito,
    Until judgment day.

    The one to save them,
    The ever optimistic,
    Tohru Honda-san.

    The forbidden one,
    Kyo Sohma is his name,
    The forgotten cat.

    ***The amount of syllable may vary depending on how you pronounce each name***

  • Hatori
    17 years ago

    You sure? O'ay! Thanks!

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    A Quick Fix

    A lonely broken heart,
    Wanting back her one true love,
    The poor sad soul crying.

    Why did he leave her,
    Breaking the promise of love,
    Causing her much chaos.

    She lost all she knew,
    When he walked away from her,
    Leaving her distressed.

    For the longest time,
    She was lost in confusion,
    Trying to find love.

    Love from someone true,
    To make a quick mend of heart,
    So her soul will heal.

    She needs to feel loved,
    Needs the feeling of comfort,
    A quick fix from you.

    ~~
    Let me know if this works. Love is nature. =]

  • Victoria Rainey
    17 years ago

    Here's mine... but I dont know how you work this contest thingy but... let's just say I tried...

    Teardrops

    Just like the teardrops
    Glistening raindrops falls down
    and wash our pain away

  • Romancing the Darker Side
    17 years ago

    Natural Haiku

    Water rushes on
    Taking any path it may
    Leaves us feeling cold

    Trees crash down again
    Their new job is almost done
    To destroy beauty

    Mountains stand quite tall
    Purple peaks and white snow caps
    They protect and guard

    Fire rages onward
    The destruction it causes
    Is quite horrible

    Wind seeps through the earth
    It reaches to wonderful
    And beautiful lands

  • Avrii Monrielle
    17 years ago

    He Is

    Silky, jet black hair
    Beautiful, brown, caring eyes,
    Snowy, pale, cream skin.

    He can make me laugh,
    Flirt with me all that he wants,
    Rest on my shoulder.

    My heart hurts when he
    Doesn't talk to me, but heals as
    Easy when he does.

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    I've noticed that a lot of these entered are senyru's. (about love and people)

    Did you only want haiku's? (nature?)

  • Lauren Waszkiewicz
    17 years ago

    Yea. i noticed that too!

    o.o

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Yeah.. well a senyru is the same line format. But you've asked for Haiku's which are strictly nature..So you might want to change the title and rules that you've made =)
    I'm picky about formats i know.

  • Jacob
    17 years ago

    Rain

    The blue sky darkens,
    As nature's tears start falling.
    Soaking mother earth.

  • Victoria Rainey
    17 years ago

    ....good haiku poems so far..but I noticed.. some of them are more of couple of haikus ..into a "big" poem when you asked for only three. Im not a poem expert but does that count.. if you understand what I mean...hopefully lol

  • Hatori
    17 years ago

    I changed a couple of the lines, so they should be right now. Thanks!

  • Jessica
    17 years ago

    Scarlet Petals [Haiku]
    by J.E.S.S.Y

    Thrilling scents flutter
    Scarlet petals confirm pain
    Thorns prepare for war

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    A Haiku is a poem about nature with the syllable count 5/7/5 and originates in Japan

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    Spotted Fur [Haiku]
    by J.E.S.S.Y

    Spotted fur shimmers
    Olive eyes hold sharp gazes
    Elegant deceit..

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    A Haiku is an unrhymed poem with the syllable count of 5/7/5

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    Shining Golden Rays [Haiku]
    by J.E.S.S.Y

    Slowly peaking out
    Golden rays of sunlight shine
    Dazzling us with hope
    _____________________________

    Haiku:
    Japanese style short poem of 3 lines, about nature or with a seasonal theme. Syllable count of 5-7-5.

  • Bryan
    17 years ago

    Seasons (Quadrople Haiku)
    by Bryan

    Summer's gone as fast
    as Winter's fall, we dream of
    Spring, now Autumn calls.

    The tides change but the seasons
    stay the same, and now
    they're gone as fast as they came.

    So we're left with this
    season, destiny calls and
    their is no reason.

    For the weather will change our
    hearts, then the seasons
    will come and tear it apart.

    i was bored and figured it cant hurt.

    Haiku is a Japanese style that consists of 3 lines with a syllable count of either 5,7,5 or 7,5,7.

    Bryan Hunt © 2006

  • Bryan
    17 years ago

    Winter's Deceit (Haiku)
    by Bryan

    Beauty from Winter's
    mysterious deceit, from
    Fall's lonely defeat.

    Haiku is a Japanese style that consists of 3 lines with a syllable count of either 5,7,5 or 7,5,7

    Bryan Hunt © 2006

  • Kim
    17 years ago

    Mysterious Eyes (Haiku)

    Softly stars shimmer
    Through the old willow branch groves
    With deep green secrets

  • Hatori
    17 years ago

    Would you prefer to have haiku's about nature?

  • Hatori
    17 years ago

    Heh, sorry. Mine are all about Fruits Basket...

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    Peaceful
    By Sarah Elliott

    Leaves rustle in the
    Wind. Birds singing in the trees
    Red flowers blossom

  • amoxi
    17 years ago

    Nature

    The sky is lighted
    Thunder comes alive at night
    A car creeps along

    ~~~~~~

    Ocean

    Waves hit the shore rocks
    Sand flows along the white beach
    A rock tips and falls

    ~~~~~~

    Weather

    Sun shines in the sky
    Outside a red flower blooms
    Rain begins to fall

  • Lauren Waszkiewicz
    17 years ago

    Sarah elliott-

    those arent haikus though....

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    The first stanza is a Haiku.
    I can take the rest off if you want.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    Awesome!
    Thank you so much for the win. I'm so glad you liked it that much. =] Thank you, again.

    Please do:
    01. Oh, Bright Morning Star {Septuplet Tanka}
    02. The Sharpest Lives
    03. Better Life - Eden {Quadruple Triolet}
    04. Master, I Obey {CinqTriosDecala}
    05. She's A Mess Of Insecurites {Trijan Refrain}
    06. Broken Stars {La'Tuin}
    07. Me, I'm Not {Trijan Refrain}

    xTheEcstasyOFSuicidex

  • Hatori
    17 years ago

    Congratulations everyone!! Uh, poems... Hmmm...
    Could you please rrc:
    1. The saddest moment of my life
    2. The 12 Junnishi, their lord, their saviour, and the forbidden
    3. Spring -- Memories and Loss

    Thanks!!