Im stuck

  • Kaila
    17 years ago

    I'm trying to write a poem about my little cousins about how there mom and dad are on drugs and everything but whatever I come up with ...doesnt sound like it's emotional or painfull enough...what do i do

  • Nick who Plays Pool
    17 years ago

    Hmm. well that's difficult... how much do you know about what you want to write?

  • Kaila
    17 years ago

    So many things just thinking about it tears me up but i'll write a poem and this sounds wierd but it doesnt sound horrible enough

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    ^^^
    Keep writing until you get it right.

    Think about everything you know and use it; think about it as you write, even if it makes [you] cry. The more you cry, the closer it will be to your emotion towards the parents.
    Open up to your writing . . . never hold back.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • mohamed
    17 years ago

    We can never judge over self..we may not feel it is not gud enough..so u better show it to someone else..may b they can tell better abt ur poem

  • Ashleigh Skye
    17 years ago

    Leave it and dont write it then.. just dont force it, but also keep in mind we are usually our worst critic, so just write it and see where it ends up but if you have no clue then leave it alone and come back to it later.

  • darah
    17 years ago

    Give it some time , when you feel like writing, do it. And when you just haven't got inspiration, leave it alone for a while. You will get there!