Double Edge Me-The girl who lives next door.

These are two poems that I wrote which I was working with some new ideas. I think that they are really different from what I usually write and I would like to get a lot of feed back from. Idecided to start a tread for them. Plz read these to and comment on them. If you like them enough feel free to come here and have a deeper discussion about them. I am also looking to meet people here and read some interseting poems. I like to read poems that are working with new ideas.