Alphabet contest! =]

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Okay. So as the title says, it is an alphabet contest. Meaning, each line of your poem has to begin with the next letter in the alphabet. So begin with A and end with Z. I will take in five.

If you need an example if I didn't explain it well enough...

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=689544

RESERVES:

` Making Memories With My Love -- [DONE]
` *Charisma* -- [DONE]
` gabriella -- [DONE]
` disturbed one -- [DONE]
` ashley -- [DONE]
` *Gem*
` Bob Shank -- [DONE]
` Memories of Kana and Hatori -- [DONE]
` Jean -- [DONE]

MEMEME!!!! Hold On, I will write it in a sec.

Man. Those aren't too easy, but if I can figure one out, I'll post it. How many contestants are you allowing.

Okay, I will reserve you both. And if you can't complete it, just edit your post saying so.

I was thinking five.

But depending on how well the reaction to this is, I may allow maybe ten.

My Love

A true love story is where
Becoming lovers is serious
Causing each to think differently about the world
Dancing hand in hand
Effective only when in love
For not all people have felt this feeling
Getting all pretty for your lover
Having fun trying to impress them
I feel this way
Just like my mother did before me
Keeping your faith is hard for others
Like trusting there isn't a 3rd wheel
My life is simple now
Now that I have some one I love
Opening up is no problem
Painting a picture as beautiful as ours
Quarreling happens only never because
Respect is our main key
Starting a love like this takes years
Tying a knot that can never break
Until love is present no more
Vital passion is involved
With one kiss waiting to come out
X-raying our relationship
You my love will always be mine so that I may be
Zealous to see you everyday

I will TRY this...
Charisma*

Always Be Courageous

Amidst everything going wrong
Be the one who will stand strong,
Courageous, bold, and understanding
Determined with all you're handling.
Everything isn't easy and quick.
Forge ahead and deal with it.
Give to those who need your strength.
Help the ones of weaker means.
Instead of saying it's too much work
Just dig your hands beneath the dirt.
Know that good deeds come around.
Lend yourself when the need is found.
Motivate others to do the same.
Neglect no one who calls your name.
Open your heart and let someone in.
Protect integrity until the end.
Quit denying the utmost truth
Realize what's inside of you.
So what if problems shall come?
Time to time, they'll visit some.
Use yourself to the best possible way.
Vigilence never fails to pay.
Will you always share what you have?
Xenodochial people don't turn their back.
You have what it takes to win.
Zealousness should now begin.

By: Charisma*

Okay here i go!!!

summer

apples gorgeous on the trees
birds flying so free
creamy clouds so high
dolls scattered on the ground.

everyone is smiling
friends are holding hands
girls walking into their lovers lands,
here is a paradise.

icecream melting on the sidewalk,
jumprope in the street,
keys opening the doors,
love is ruling.

money has no matter,
nothing can be sad,
oceans of the colors,
people laughing, glad.

queens dance barefoot,
running on white beaches,
sand is blown in to eyes,
tame as it can be.

umbrellas open rainbows,
veils are torn away,
waves wash away the darkness,
x is written on the sand.

yelling because they found the treasure,
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz they're all asleep.

sorry, that was hard, i don't think it will be good enough, but there it goes, thx for the fun writing it.

Can there be any more entries? if so i'll enter mine

Daddys Bad Habit

A child lays,
Broken and bruised,
Courtesy of,
Daddys bad habit,
Enamored by her elegant,
Foot work that so,
Graciously caught,
His pedofilish eyes,
Intoxicated like always,
Just enough to,
Kill his curiousity,
Leaving his daughter,
More scars than any,
Nine year,
Old should ever,
Place upon their,
Quite minds,
Reaching for the,
Stars in the sky,
That plague the,
Unity of Families,
Very much like,
What little,
Xena feels inside,
Yearning for the truth;
Zero

Can I reserve?

I changed my poem!!!

A depression sinks in,
Battling her strength and
Causing her to fight
Dreadfully and
Eagerly.
Fulfilling her nightmares,
Going into her darkest
Hours,
It turns and crawls,
Just another case of sadness.
Knowing there is nothing to cure,
Love will only extend the heartbreak.
My sympathy is
Not enough for her
Other
Pains and
Questions.
Realizing
She must fight
This
Ultimate evil force, she is blown into a
Vortex of
Worldy and earthly
X-rayed visions.
You have pushed her oved the edge, into the
Zoo-like void

Congratulations Bob. Can you read mine to see if it makes sense?

Weird. Didn't know you were the first one. That's awesome though, I love them. They're a challenge, but very fun! Lol.

Thankyou!

When does this end??
Do i have time?

Yes, I will put you on the reserve list. Than if Kitty decides she does or doesn't want to, I will either wait for hers to get in if she does want to, or close and judge if she doesn't want to.

Am I still able to reserve? I have a poem ready if so.

Yeah, send it in and than after the rest of the reserves are done, I will judge.

Here it is :D:

The Saddest Moment Of My Life

As you walked away,
Bearing no love for me,
Could it be,
Does life have no meaning for me?
Every time we were together,
For each moment of my life,
Good never befell you and I.
Hate is something I could never do,
I love you far too much.
Just please, I ask,
Keep loving me back!
Love is a confusing thing,
Many people fear it.
No matter the cost,
Or the horror I must pay,
Please don't walk away.
Quietly you turned to me,
Reading the meaning in my face,
Smiling that sincere smile of yours.
Taking a step forward, You touched my face,
Utter the sentences that crushed my life.
"Veer your heart away from me, and don't let your soul,
Wither away. I do not love you."
Xylophones played a sad tune as he left,
Yes, he walked away that sad, depressing night.
Zero is the amount of time I ever felt happiness again.

Thank-you! After the remaining two are in, I will judge! (:

Yay! Good luck everyone!

GL all. im going to write one later.

these seem so wicked cool. =]

Sorry this has taken a while. i'm still working on it. i want this to have a good chance of winning, and i want it to be something i can be proud of.

bleh. Half way. I need to go do other things. ttyl.

hopefully i'll finish soon!!! so sorry for the hold up.

Good luck with your poem!

Dark Side of Heartache

After the tears have dried from her eyes
Beneath the sad dreams that's come here to die

Completing the harness that holds her in pain
Devoid of release that she's hoping to gain.

Enveloping darkness that's come with the night
Forgotten by mirrors reflecting the light

Gone are the faith and the hope of a soul
Humbled by weakness, as aches take their toll.

Into the false comfort she tries to believe
Just simple destruction, that's come here to breed

Keeps beating against the breath of her heart
Leaving the shards of it broken apart.

Memories are like the hunger for bread
Neglected by love, when dark words are said

On pain comes the anger of what she was told
Put forth on the lies that were tarnished and cold

Quite soon comes the hurt, she feel it inside
Resisting the urges to take flight and hide

Stand tall, she keeps saying but the pain is so strong
She feels it take hold and it pulls her along.

Under the breath of the night she now falls
Venting her pain with the heartache recalled

Within the dark thunder that tears at her mind
X-pecting the doom, as she gives up the fight.

Yearnings have left her alone once again
Zapping her soul as she twists in life's wind.

Alrighty, I just need to know if Gem is going to get hers in and than I'll judge. =)

I think that you should begin judging now. This contest has been open for a long enough time :D. Good Luck Everyone!

Gem has notified me that she would submit hers, so I am waiting for her.

I'm sorry sweets, i wrote the poem in college like i told you i was doing and didn't put it on my memory stick and it's a bank holiday weekend so i won't be back in til Wednesday
I don't want to keep everyone waiting so go ahead and judge,
Sorry everyone =(

Alrighty, I was looking forward to reading it, I'll still comment it on your page when I see it. =]

I will close and judge this now, so the results will be in either later tonight or tomorrow sometime.

=]

O'ay, thanks! Good luck everyone, by the way! This was my first complete alphabet poem, *guilty* I never finish my poems anymore...

Okay, I didn't have much time to judge this so I couldn't do my full analyzing of the poems like I usually like to do, but here are the results...

First - Bob
Second - Charisma
Third - Disturbed one

First will get ten r/r/c
Second will get eight
&&
Third will get five

Everyone else gets 2.

Leave the titles or I will not do them.

Thx
plz do: "papercut" and "too far"
gabriella

Thanks! Could you please do:

Love or a lie?
Portrayal of my past

Congratulations everyone as well!

Thank you bunches! That's just awesome!
Charisma*

Comment my most recent ones please!

Oh wow thanks! i was very surprised i wrote that so fast...let alone...at all...thanks

can you please comment on

1. Daddys bad habit (obviously lol)
2. Teardrops on my guitar
3. Fading(Rictameter)
4. Bloody Broken and Bruised
5. Porcelain Tears

Thanks a bunch

Cya

Disturbed one,

If that is the Teardrops on My Guitar for my other contest, I can not do that one because I don't read them until I judge. So if you'd like, name another one and I'll do it..I'll start on Charisma's now and work my way down.