Happy Love Contest

CLOSED! CLOSED! CLOSED! CLOSED!

~Titles~

- Bus Ride Home - Victoria Rainey [done]

- Got A Little Girl On The Way - Britt [ reserved ]

- You Make The Pain Go Away - ItEndsWithUAndMe
[done]

- Lovin' You -

- Glad To Be Your Girl - Wings Of Flames [ done ]

- Everything Came True - l o v e x 3 [done]

- One Wish Was You - Infected With his Deadly Love [reserved]

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DEADLINE: APRIL 14TH. A DAY AFTER MY 1 MONTH MARK WITH TY!

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If you could please check out my newest poem -
Hope He's Afraid Of The Dark Now - [child abuse]
Thanks!

Can i have Lovin' You?
Thanks alot

I'll take One wish was you. Thanks

You two have your poems you reserved!

Can i please reserve you make the pain go away? thanks alot ~mel

Can I reserve You make the pain go away please?
xxx

~You Make The Pain Go Away~

When i look into your beautiful brown eyes,
I forget the world, as my pain suddenly dies,
I glance away, Because my heart misses a beat,
As we walk hand in hand this feeling so sweet.

The butterfly's get stronger the closer you come,
My smile widens as my heart begins to gently hum,
Those three words said that mean so much,
From every amazing feeling i get whenever we touch.

Every time i hear the phone ring I'm hoping its you,
Whenever Ive had a bad day, your the one i run to,
When your laying next to me, love just captures all,
I can just walk straight through life, No need to crawl.

In my life I've made a million hurtful mistakes,
They made my heart shiver like a terrible quake,
I felt like my life came crashing to the ground,
But your the one perfect thing in life i have found.

I use to think in life i had nothing to live for,
And now cupid has opened loves beautiful door,
Because of you this is what i have to say,
I thank you because You take the pain away.

Everything came true please!!

Ciao~

SoSickOfTears -

Can you please pick another title. "You Make The Pain Go Away" has already been taken.

CAN I HAVE THE BUS RIDE HOME.. WHY DID YOU MAKE UP THE TITLE??? JA..

Victoria,

You have the poem

- The Bus Ride Home

Yeah I made up these titles.

I don't know how i did it but i made this up.. pls uuh h with your honesty.,. pls tell me what you think about it.. thanks mel...

~The Bus Ride Home~

Looking out into the sky
Just thinking about your deep brown eyes
They way you hold me close
You are who I have choose
You are the music to my soul
Just so you know
Our love for one another
Will always remain forever
You are my luck to my charm
Because I know you will always protect me
From any harm
You are the beat to my heart
End? Our love is at a start
The way you hold my hand
As we take a walk by the shore
Our love will remain forevermore
Your laughter echoes down a path
Our moments I don't regret
Or want to go back
The way we kiss and connect
I wont forget
Your body heat against mine
and your brown eyes,
makes everything alright
Now closing my eyes
Dreaming
About you and I
Of how our love has grown
On the bus ride home

So when will this contest end cause i go to a "boarding" school and I go back next sunday .. hopefully it will end by then.. ???

Nvm.. srry I didn't read the ending on ur first comment.. so nvm

Lol It's okay.

Victoria.

That is great!

Thanks

Your welcome.

Hmm... Bus ride home is taken right? Is it onle one pre title?

Yes Gem.

Only one person per title.

Anymore takers?

I know you guys want to do it!

Hey I finally loaded up my picture. You like it? IT'S ME!! lol

Anymore takers?

If you change your mind about one per poem, let me know. I'll enter then.

Everything Came True
by: Ciao~
One wish, wished on worn down candles;
As the flame slowly burns down and dies.
One wish, all the energy focused on:
Desiring a boy who won't make her cry.

One wish, centered around the thought
That maybe there's someone for her.
Hoping and praying that she's right;
That is all she wished for.

After months of uselessly waiting,
She finally just gave up the thought.
Tiredly putting to rest her wish;
Her weak hands, no longer wrought.

No longer does she walk around,
With her head held up high.
She's no longer sneaking looks;
Trying to catch hollow eyes.

Then one day, just an ordinary day,
Someone passed her by that was different from most.
Suddenly, a longing popped into her head-
All she wanted to do was hold him close.

She watched him so closely-
Her eyes, never leaving.
She couldn't ever imagine,
Believe what she was feeling.

Her looked in her direction-
She felt this strange sensations.
Their eyes, they locked,
They filler her with fascination.

He came over;
How red her face grew!
That's when she finally realized
That her wish, Everything Came True.

Gem,

Because there is only a few titles left ( 1 or 2) i dont remember right now. You can do another one if you want!

I'm sorry but i have to unreserve my title..i tried on it..but i couldn't go further
Thanks

Glad to be your girl

The breeze kisses my cheeks,
As the ocean hushes my heart,
The trees swing rhythmiclly,
And the clouds come to part,

The rain washes all my wounds,
Each pain comes to rest,
I see a figure in the distance,
And then I know I'm blessed,

Inside my head I'm not alone,
For your love is always there,
My eyes filled with blue seas,
And your here to always care,

Your brown locks of hair swing,
As you walk to my side,
My hair blown past my face,
And I know we won't subside,

You're hands clutch my cheeks,
And your lips lean into mine,
Love is driven by passion,
And we're forever feelin' fine.

"If you change your mind about one per poem, let me know. I'll enter then."

Thanks anyway, but there was only one i wanted to do, good luck judging x

^^ u wrote that. I didn't.

Anyone that want's to do another poem you may~!

Britt,

The deadline is tomorrow. I might extend it to the 15th if anyone reserves another poem by tonight. If not then you must turn it in by tomorrow, the 14th.

Sorry I forgot I reserved one.
I'll get it done tonight. Well this morning.

Ill do "lOVIN YOU" cause I really hope the judging wil happen today because I wont be here tmw...

Victoria,

I think I might have to suspend it til th 15th. I might not get on tonight and I'm leaving at 9:30 in the morning to go to my bf's Tennis tournament and won't get back til Sunday if I spend the night at my aunts house afterwards.

Alright.. well I IF I do win anything.. or whatsoever.. pick any.. thanks! :)

Okay

Sorry about before, i meant to quote this..

"Gem,

Because there is only a few titles left ( 1 or 2) i dont remember right now. You can do another one if you want!"

Srry yal lIll have to unreserve lovin you.. due to me being very busy!! gl yall

Okay.

I'll begin judging soon.

PLACES:

[[ I will post them in here. ]]

1st Place: Everything Came True - l o v e x 3
5 comments

2nd Place: Bus Ride Home - Victoria Rainey
4 comments

3rd Place: You Make The Pain Go Away - ItEndsWithUAndMe

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Glad To Be Your Girl - Wings Of Flames
3 comments

Omigosh! Thank you so much for first place!! =] I really appreciate it!
Here are the five I would like:
*`Black and White Photograph
*`A Phone Call
*`Everything Came True
*`Sweet Little Nothings
*`If Everyone Cared

Thanks again and Congrats winners!!!

xxCiaoxx