SoSickOfTear's Contest Number 3!!

  • I Seem to be the Heartless
    17 years ago

    Lie To Me

    You say you no longer love me
    But I see the truth in your eyes
    You will always love me
    Until the day you die.

    You say you no longer want to hold me
    But you still remember my embrace
    Your arms long to be around me
    Your fingers tracing down my face.

    Lie to me
    You do it so well
    Lie to me
    I promise I won't tell.

    You say you no longer want to kiss me
    But you still taste me on your lips
    Youâ??re longing to kiss me
    I can see through your fibs.

    You say you no longer want to be with me
    But you refuse to walk away
    You still want to be with me
    Even if just for one more day.

    Lie to me
    You do it so well
    Lie to me
    I promise I won't tell.

    Lie to me
    But don't break my heart
    Lie to me
    Tell me today we part.

    Lie to me
    Forever more
    Lie to me
    Come in and close the door.

    Josie

    Copyright©JosieWentzel25April2007

  • Tricky Daze
    17 years ago

    I tried so hard hun but i couldn't write it..i'm sorry :(

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    CLOSED FOR JUDGING! CLOSED FOR JUDGING!
    (This may take a few days due to work, but I will have the winners as soon as I can!)

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    So, I'm not in work today which means I can judge sooner than I had expected =)

    Thank you to everyone who particpated and I hope you all will continue to enter my contests in the future.

    All the poems were wonderful, but obviously I can only choose three.

    After consideration, the winners I have chosen are:

    1-Lover's Walk-~Afraid_Of_The_Dark~
    2-I Was Made To Love You-x Full 0f Illusi0ns x
    3-Once More, With Feeling-Kyles Woman

    Congratulations to you all!

    If you leave the titles you would like commenting, I will get started asap.
    I am back in work tomorrow, but I should have all comments done by the end of the week.

    If no titles are left within a few days, I will choose ones that catch my attention.

    Once again, thank you to everyone and congratulations to the winners.
    xxx

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    OMG THANKS SOOO MUCH!!!! I loved the contest.

    if you could do
    Our Song
    Hoochie and the Pool Table
    For You
    Black and White Photograph
    If Everyone Cared

    Thanks a bunch!!! <33

    xxCiaoxx

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    I commented four of them, I have commented if everyone cared already, maybe you have another one you would like me to do?
    And you are very welcome!
    xxx

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    Ah I see... if you could do Remember the Memories plz instead. Thank a bunch and congrats winners, if I neglected it... :]