MezmeRyz's 5 Title Contest-NEW-

Right, here goes:
i have not done a contest in ages, sooo i've decided to do something quite simple, well i think it's simple anyway!
i've thought of 5 titles and all you got to do is pick 1, 2 or 3 (upto you, because maximum entries per person is 3) and write a poem.
i'm looking for creativity, simple eh? :D
well, i prefer sad or depression poems but fantasy and love is cool too.

titles are:
1- You Don't Know Me
2- For Every Heartbeat
3- Fake Soul
4- Stolen Identity
5- Me And My Best Friend

Prizes:
1-5 r/r/c}
2-4 r/r/c}
3-3 r/r/c}-----All get a place in Favourites! :D
4-2 r/r/c}
5-1 r/r/c}

no need to reserve.
Closing Date--------FRIDAY 13TH APRIL 2007 :D

I wanna try "You Don't Know Me"

You Don't Know me

You don't know me on the inside.
Behind these sparkling eyes,
It's the real me hiding,
Behind a smile that tells lies.

A dead heart on the inside,
Broken by old love.
Lying, cheating boys,
Not much else to say of.

Hurting on the inside,
Crying every night.
Tears that put her to sleep,
Until the morning's light.

Darkened on the inside,
Watching as people stare,
They don't know what's going on,
It's more then she can bear.

Torn up on the inside,
On the outside there's still a smile.
This girl is gonna break,
But everyone's in denial

Dead on the inside,
Hiding it so no one can see.
You may know my outside smile,
But you don't know me.

~ Mountain Dew~ Brittany

I'll try
for every heart beat.
thanks.:]

For Every Heartbeat. [Acrostic]

Flaccid minds
Outlast fantasies,
Reality, and pain.

Endurance
Varies with the
Evitable
Reasoning of todays
Youth.

Heartbreaks signify the
End
At sometime in life.
Routines
Teach each us that
Boredom consists of
Every unspontanious
Action
That applies too much effort.

I am going to try .. me and my best friend since others are taken

I'll take For Every Heartbeat. I was going to do Stolen Idenity, but she was on the same track as I, and plus, it's good. =/ So yeah.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Victoria, you can do any of them, it dont matter if they're already done =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex you can do any you like, it don't matter if they're done, im looking for creativity! =]

Britt, teria, brittany and kristen, your poems are great! keep it up ppl! =]

nuff luv x

I know, but I have a very good idea for the title I chose . . . besides, who wants two poems of the same idea? =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Lol ok =]

Ahh
nvm on this post im writing another one

I'll get you don't know me,
Thanks *smiles*

You Don't Know Me
By: Twisted Heart

You think that you can see behind
The smile that hides the pain
To look into the eyes that hold
The depth of heartache's reign.

To see the face you think you know
That it reflects the truth
But do you ever wonder if
It hides the truth from you.

Some days you think that you can see
A passage to my soul
When you look into my eyes
The truth to you bestowed.

And so you live in ignorance
No claim to heartaches pain
You laugh and joke about my soul
And hurt me once again.

But you don't know the words you say
Can split my heart in two
And words that cut the soul of me
Are words that come from you.

No tears will find their way upon
The cheek that you will see
The face will never show the soul
That lives inside of me.

For it will give you comfort then
To wield your power there
Within the hopes and faith you'd see
Wrenched in my deep despair.

So I must hold you at arm's length
Not letting you know me
It will be my little secret
Wrapped up in your fantasy.

Awww wow... that poem is so much better then mine good job =]

Cool .. but im sticking wit me and my best friend..

Me and my best friend

Here I am,
weeping at your death
You were the one and only
You are not just my friend
Your are my best friend
We grew up together
We swore we would be friends forever
But ever since you have moved away
I ended up losing contact for about five years
Till I saw you at Sears
I wanted to jump and scream because we were back together
to become friends forever
I never stop calling you every night
Just catching up on the past
cause everything seemed right
Just laughing and crying
Just glad our friendship wasnt dying
Till you invited me to a party at a beach
You took my hand and went for a walk around the shore
You said,"We will always be best friend forevermore."
I smiled as tears went down my cheeks
We parted after a few weeks
I got a phone call
I couldnt believe
You died of DUI
you were the one and only
my best friend
who were suppose to be there when Im down
who is going to be around
who is going to be there to hold my hand
and remind me
we will always be best friend forever....
who
you're gone now
I dont hear the sound of your heart beat
I dont see your glistening eyes
I dont feel your body heat
against mine
I didnt realized
That you drink
and drive
Now I gotta say goodbye
I lay the roses on the coffin
as well as our best friend necklace
but Here I am,
weeping at your death
You were the one and only
You are not just my friend
You're are my best friend
We grew up together
We swore we would be friends forever
but now you're gone
gone...

I used the poem I made up before.. u didn't say anything that had to be "new" so Im guessing that is okay if not.. I can delete it...

For Every Heartbeat

For every heartbeat,
That has ripped through my chest,
The ones where it skipped a beat,
Had to be the best.

Moments in life,
That made time stand still,
Are the heartbeats we want to remember,
But probably never will.

For every single heartbeat,
Coming from a heart of stone,
Brings back the realization,
You're alive but yet, alone.

And for every single heartbeat,
That pours though my veins,
Trying to put back the pieces of my heart,
From the heartbreak I have gained.

Heartbeats like a drum,
Racing In my skull.
Took too many pain pills
Now my vision begins to dull.

Heartbeat that slows down,
Slower and slower each time.
What was this life I lived in?
Even Living was a crime.

For every heartbeat that isn't there,
To make me feel alive,
Is another one of a dead girl,
Who no one can revive.

Mountain Dew April 11th 2007

Nooo victoria, its awesome. aww its so sad! :'(
great poem mountain dew =]
nuff luv x

Thanks!! :) I feel better now!! :P

HEY PPL! just thought id holla!
thanks for the poems so far..they're all great!
nuff luv x

Hmmm i cant wait till judging i love everyone elses too =]

brittany (MD)

Im closing this contest tomorrow because i haven't had any posts for a day.
gd luk evry1
nuff luv x

You Don't Know Me

Hearing loud yells in my head
Waving at me,driving me mad
I wish i could be just a deaf
You all don't,don't know me at all

I'm screaming for help in this marsh
But you think it's a melody or a march
Maybe I fill your empty lonely heart
But you don't,don't know me at all

At concerts with me you sing along
You think with you I should belong
Learn to open your sealed eyes
You all don't,don't know me at all

Finally I got to my shelter to rest
Money for respect,so a little too best
My face again on TV,an interview with me
But you can't,you can't know me at all

On roof feeling freedom that I yearn
If you love me,come and save then
Leave myself falling all down,yelling
But you all didn't,didn't know me at all

Here goes another sad side
A misery that fame can't hide
That millions will cry behind
But you all won't know me at all

Sorry for the delay

JUDGING TIME YYYYYAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYY .... SRRY HIGH ON COFFEE!!!!! HEHE LOL IT'S LIKE 2:2 IN THE MORNING!! DARLING TIME TO WAKE UP ITS JUDGING TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good timing laura! yaay! lol judging time! so, im gonna start reading them now, and the results will be out in the evening!
cant wait!! =]
nuff luv x

So yay! *smiles*
good luck everyone

Good luck!!!!

=[ Ahh. I only had like two days to write this... sorry I didn't get it. If I can write one now, I'll do so, but I'm telling you that's a 1% chance.
Sorry for the incovience.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Ok ive been quite behind on this judging too, there was just so much going on today..if you can get it in then it'll be great xecstacyof suicidex.
i've read 3 poems so far ppl, and they're really good! this is getting really difficult! =] but i'll once again try my best to end this and reveal the results tomorrow. so sorry! =[
nuff luv x

I entered a slew of new contests tonight and when I'm obligated to do something, I try hard to do it. So, knowing that I have all these to write, I will get yours done first. =] I'll have it posted by tonight or tomorrow if I get anything.
Thanks for waiting.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Wooo! and look how long it is! Go me! XD
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Dedicated to the play "I'm Not Stupid." This play is about a mother who kills her "stupid" son [mentally disabled, really] because she thinks he is worth nothing more than a dog. Give me honest critic.
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For every heartbeat there is a stronger one,
Dancing in the moonlight of hope and prayer.
Even though you think you have no where to run,
God will show you a special kind of care.
And even though they all poked their fun,
God will shelter you and cover your share.
You may not be loved by arms of mother,
But here in Heaven we are all God's brother.

"Do you even love him as a true son?
"Do you even care his feelings hurt like yours?"
"He's like a dog; next, I'll get a real one."
"I can't believe you just said that; he's not a chore."
"He's nothing to me; he's not a true son!"
"He is mentally disabled, but he's yours."
"He is a human being, not a log."
"I don't love him . . . he's nothing but a dog."

"I can't believe you did it! You're crazy!"
"I'll have you committed for what you have done!"
"I didn't do it! A dog that was lazy!"
"He wasn't a dog! . . . to shoot him with a gun!"
"He was a dog! I swear I'm not crazy!"
"I swear I'll put you away . . . he was your son!"
"He was stupid; he was no son of mine."
"I'll have you committed for your crime."

For every heartbeat there is a stronger one,
Dancing in the moonlight of hope and prayer.
Even though you think you have no where to run,
God will show you a special kind of care.
And even though they have all poked their fun,
God will shelter you and cover your share.
You may not have been loved by arms of mother,
But here in Heaven we are all God's brother.

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This is a poem written in 8-line octives. Each line is of a 10 or 11 syllable count in the following rhyme:

One octive poem: abababacc

...so on and so on.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Thanks for the entry..so on time, i haven't finished reading these yet! but they are really good so far! =]
nuff luv x

And the winners are...*drum roll*...

1-You Don't Know Me By Twisted Heart
2-For Every Heartbeat By Ecstasy Of Suicide
3-For Every Heartbeat By Mountain Dew
4-For Every Heartbeat By Teria
5-Fake Soul By Kristen, }
Stolen Identity By Britt &}------3 winners [ I couldn't pick!]
Me And My Best Friend By Victoria Rainey}

Congratulations Everyone!!!!!!!
Prizes will be awarded soon!
nuff luv xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Congrats winners!! :)

Ciao~

All the awards have been awarded...congrats to all winners once again!
nuff luv xx