KRISTEN's Sad Title Contest.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    I have one with the title Crash & Burn ^_^ Lol but I will write a new one, uhhh We Might As Well Be Strangers please.

    Heartchuu.

  • Afraid of the Dark
    17 years ago

    Can I reserve Crash and Burn please

    x

  • Victoria Rainey
    17 years ago

    Can I reserve.. my worst fear? thanks!!!

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    All the good titles are taken! [Pouts.]
    Awe, I'll do your next contest, Kristen. =]

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    All the good titles are taken! [Pouts.]
    Awe, I'll do your next contest, Kristen. =]

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    I need you thanks.

  • Victoria Rainey
    17 years ago

    My Worst Fear

    The way you hold me close
    The way you speak in my ear
    Everynight I get a love dose
    But this is my worst fear

    The way we connect
    Just you and I
    No regrets
    Let us shine

    The way your eyes glisten
    The way you tell me to listen
    To your heartbeat
    So deep it repeats

    This is my worst fear
    You shut the door behind me
    You let me be
    Your eyes
    They don't shine

    The passion
    That you had for me
    Begins to fade
    The promises you made

    Is put aside
    The way we connect
    Just you and I
    Is my regret

    This my worst fear
    The picture of you begins to fade
    Our love
    Will never be remade

    This is my worst fear
    Only you could whisper in my ear
    Only you could tell me to listen
    To you heart beat

    Your love for me is gone
    Just like the glisten in your eyes
    Your love for me that I have longed
    Just no one and I

    This is my worst fear
    Never again will I hear
    you say
    I love you
    This is my worst fear
    Never again
    Will I hear
    Your heartbeat
    Or feel your body heat
    Against mine
    Just no one and I
    My worst fear

    .. hope you guys like this..

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    I need you
    By Sarah Elliott

    I need you
    To wipe away my tears
    To hold me in your arms
    To get rid of my fears

    I need you
    To tell me everything will be ok
    That everything will work out fine
    To help me live another day

    I need you
    To catch me when I fall
    To pick me up when I am down
    To help me understand it all

    I need you
    To be in my life
    For always and forever
    For me to be your wife

    I need you
    But you don't need me
    Nor did you ever
    You're happy now, I see.

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    Hope thats sad enough, if not tell me. And I will try another one.

  • Twisted Heart
    17 years ago

    Will reserve Deep, please.

    Poem is forthcoming.

    Jeannie

  • Twisted Heart
    17 years ago

    Deep
    By: Twisted Heart

    Deep lies the hurt of nonexistence
    Of dreams that died in vain
    From chalice of the bitter wine
    We drink to ease the pain.

    Inside the mind, are hidden truths
    That we may one day face
    But with the bitterness of life
    We sadly fall from grace.

    Among the stars that glow above
    Comes distant to the mind
    A thought that perished with the sun
    And left the joy behind.

    Now deep within the darkness
    Is a soul that drifts away
    Among the pain of broken hearts
    It lies in love's decay.

    No longer does it shine with hope
    No faith can find it there
    Lost among the shattered dreams
    It festers in despair.

    So come the deep in shadows cast
    Take heed the dying light
    Tempt fate to hold you with regret
    And comfort you tonight.

  • Victoria Rainey
    17 years ago

    What exactly is the prize for this contest?

  • Victoria Rainey
    17 years ago

    Cool !!!

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    We Might As Well Be Strangers.

    There sits a man, alone and so afraid
    Watching memories of his life fade,
    And beside him there sits a ratty bag,
    His old clothes and a cigarettes last drag -
    I'll walk by late at night every now and then,
    Just to see his reassuring face once again,
    Asleep on the bench, shivering from the cold,
    A tear falls down as I remember the story he told.
    'My baby, when you grow up to be a woman,
    There will be no more falling and scraping your shin,
    All dressed up in big girls clothes; they'll say,
    'There she goes - she's the one to look out for today!''
    Your sweet embrace holding me close to you,
    As I wiped the tears from your eyes so blue,
    The day I fell off my bike flashing before my eyes,
    A movie in my head, scripted by all your lies.
    And looking down at you tonight, beside this garbage bin,
    I let the tears roll down off of my quivering chin,
    But when I lay down this note for you, sealed with a good-bye,
    I want you to read it and then you will see why,
    I can not acknowledge you with a title you do not deserve,
    You walked out on us and now we might as well be strangers,
    So for the last time, I will hold your hand in mine,
    Shrug my shoulders and leave Daddy's little girl behind.

    -Jenna Elphick
    April 13, 2007

  • Afraid of the Dark
    17 years ago

    Sorry sorry. . . doing it now lol

    Thnx for bearing with me

  • Afraid of the Dark
    17 years ago

    Sorry sorry. . . Again. . . Gunna have to drop out. . .Things are kinda hectic here and i have writers block. . . sorry again

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    I have an older one, but it's in the dark genre...I'll post it and tell me if it's not sad enough and I'll edit this and take it out.

    Crash And Burn.

    Angel's stood within the fog with secured hands,
    Scornfully chanting a tragic lullaby,
    Watching her body rust amongst the silver sands.

    Decaying stars fell down from the raven sky,
    Searing the burning Angel's wretched wings - -
    Scornfully chanting a tragic lullaby.

    Her scarlet tears plucked at the rotting harp strings,
    As the moon faded to ashes; falling from the burning sky,
    Searing the burning Angel's wretched wings.

    Her shattered heart let out a sorrowful cry,
    With tainted nails dragging along the shore line,
    As the moon faded to ashes; falling from the burning sky.

    Maniacal laughs cracked up and down her broken spine,
    Echoing from the Angel's crimson mouths - -
    With tainted nails dragging along the shore line.

    She drifted away as Ivory Angel's sang her to sleep - -
    Watching her body rust amongst the silver sands;
    Angel's stood within the fog with secured hands - -
    Praying to God; her tattered soul to keep.

    © Jenna Elphick
    October 17, 2006.

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