Cute with out the E

  • Sandra D
    17 years ago

    All I want is a poem for that song

    plz!

    it doesn't have to rhyme

    you don't have to reserve

    ill pick *~one~* winner, that gets 5 r/r/c

    thanx in advance!

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    I love that song!!!

    I can try, but I don't know how well I will be able to do it. =)

  • Sandra D
    17 years ago

    For anyone who wants to enter... i would like to have them in by the end of this month!

  • Romancing the Darker Side
    17 years ago

    Cute without the E

    Cute was the young girl
    Blonde pigtails were her hair
    Her eyes were bluer than the sea
    And her skin was oh-so fair

    She began to feel the pain
    Sometime around highschool
    Her dresses were old and skirts worn
    New clothing was a rule

    She read in a magazine
    Something about cuts
    A razor could make you feel better
    No ifs, ands, or buts

    She went home and locked the door
    Before her mom came in
    She grabbed a tiny razor
    And commited the ultimate sin

    Suicide in depression form
    Teasing made her set herself free
    Now she's buried in the ground
    Because she was cute without the E

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Standing behind closed doors in an antique wedding dress,
    Debris from broken stars fall into her eyes of distress,
    But as she wipes cinders of her porcelain tears from her eyes,
    She looks down the aisle at you, smiling through all your lies.

    And as she walks she hears them whisper: 'Look at her!'
    But even from there, through your eyes she knows it's a blur,
    Your breath is coated in the whiskey and cigarette smoke,
    For the sake of the happy crowd, on her words she chokes.

    And to the back of her mind, she pushes all the clues,
    Forgetting the look on her face when she heard the news,
    The lipstick stains that she was forced to look away from,
    And how she'd sleep on the couch, despising what you've become.

    But as she reaches you on the altar, she mutters under her breath:
    'This wedding, it might be the life of me, or it might be the death,
    But for Gods sake, could you have just a little more class than this,
    To bring your mistress and estranged child to watch our wedding kiss?'

    And as the Preacher talks to Jesus, A tear falls down from her eye,
    As she lifts her veil and finally gains the courage to say good-bye,
    But when she throws her wedding band down, she smiles and turns,
    Walking away from you for the last time, her lesson learned.

    -Jenna Elphick
    April 18, 2007

  • Sandra D
    17 years ago

    Winner-- XxRomancing the Darker SideXx

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Congrats!!! =)