-Sorrowful Souls Here-

ClOsEd!

It's a sad contest by me..if you feel like sad and sorrowful..take a chance and try one of these titles..hope you like them and enjoy!

Rules:
-One Poem per person
-Should reserve
-Must be new
-No cursing or swearing allowed
-Should be deep
-Enjoy

Titles
-Completely Bruised-Done-Charisma-
-Last Tears-Done-Sandra D-
-Can't Hold On-Done-Endlessly In The Dark-
-Up To You-Done-Gem-
-Miserable-Done-Synh-
-Nobody To Take My Hand-Done-Espoir*failed-
-Drowned Sun-Done-Lush.Fcuk-
-The Truths-Done-Wings Of Flames-

Prizes:
First Place-5 comments & Rates
Second Place-3 Comments & Rates
Third Place-2 Comments & Rates

Ending Date:
Was May 4th..but there are some people who didn't finish their work..so i give 3 more days..May 7th

Luv Ya All
Take care
Laura

Great titles Miss Laura! I will try Nobody To Take My Hand please!

xxCiaoxx

Okay madame....thank u for entering hun
*waves*

Up to you please

Okay hun...thank you for entering *smiles*

May I please have Can't Hold On?

Thanks

I'd like last tears plz... i may have to unreserve if i can't do it, but i think i can...

Can I please reserve drowned sun? I really like that title. =)

Completely Bruised please
Charisma*

Completely Bruised

Pushing me down wasn't enough
Scars had to be proof you beat me up
I wish I had a black eye to show
Or was completely bruised from head to toe
But I've only got a heart tattered to shreds
No cuts or blood though I know I've bled
My open wounds are deep inside
Filled with salt from oceans I've cried
Stinging my soul, burning what's left
Like a fire consuming my last breath.
You've taken all but my very skin
Let me go, I've lost. You win.

By: Charisma*

Reserve me The Truths

-Edited out-

Can't Hold On

I can't hold on
I can't take the pain
I'm hanging from a ledge
Completely engulfed by flames

I'm burning, sizzling
Won't somebody help?
My skin is beginning to blister
Soon it's going to melt

I can't hold on
The pain grows more intense
My fingers are slowly slipping
I grab for your hand - my last defence

But as I reach out
My other hand slips
I keep grabbing
But I've lost my grip

I couldn't hold on
Now here I lie
Burning in flames -
It's such a horrible way to die.

Josie
Copyright Josie Wentzel 23 April 2007

Hey just one title left all you talented poets and poetesses..
-Miserable-
Anyone to take this?

And thanks for all that entered..Cheers!

I had really bad writers block doing this and i did an acrostic but forgot the title was just "Up to you" and added an 'It's' at the beginning, is that ok?

^^ Haha, I haev the same question...I wrote it and than came back to check the title before I entered it, and instead of Drowned Sun, could I change it to Drowning Sun...either one will work really, Ijust named it Drowning Sun.

Drowned in the sorrows of yesterday and the misery of today
The golden sun hangs by a thread in the shattered sky,
Sighing, he swears under his breath that he'll be something one day
And in his flawless ambiguity, a porcelain tear falls down on me
But from the shards of his crystal heart, I make myself a dress,
And with my shaking hand, I reach up to the burning cinders of Heaven,
My heart clouded in my eyes, beating for the timeless anguish within,
And in my desolate palm, I hold a heart close to me,
Beating to the song inside my head, as I pray for just one night,
To dance above the tainted city lights, tap my toes along the skyline,
And as this fainted smile burns it's misery into my face
I laugh in the remembrance of the drowning sun and his stars,
Holding me up without a care in the world, his arms around my waist,
And as my blue eyes shine with discontent, the wind holds me weightless,
Strewn across the horizon with the golden stars in my eyes,
And the sand is crystallized between my toes, holding me back.

Xx It's Up To You - Acrostic xX

It's up to you if we stay together
This time it's down to now or never
See if your heart wants this forever

Understand the feelings coming through
Pay attention to what your hearts telling you

This love we have, we could have it all
Only if you catch me when in love I fall

You need to begin making up your mind
Over whether you want this love to unwind
Use your feelings inside, what do you find?

*Gem*

Copyright©GemmaStott2007

(Arrrrgh!)

Don't worry about this you two
The important thing is the topic and deepness
It doesn't matter if the title has changed a lil

Guys..keep them coming.
And one title left
-Miserable-
*smiles*

Miss Laura, I'm going to have to unresere my title, I just cant come up with anything... ='[ sorry

xxCiaoxx

Don't mind hun

Oh forget it. lol was gonna reserve something...

*~Last Tears~*

These are the last tears
I'll ever cry for you.
No matter how you treat me,
No matter what you do.

There'll be none left
After tonight.
None to hold back,
No more to fight.

They'll all fall down,
One by one.
Just this last time,
Til there's none.

This is it,
The last of my sorrow.
Only one thing's for sure,
I won't cry tomorrow.

done!

I'll do 'Miserable'

Can i have nobody to take my hand please.

Nobody to take my hand

Surround my world
And cloud me.
I want a vision that is blurry.

I need to wake up far from home,
And realise that I'm not alone.
So I'm searching for a place,
But still looking for the map.
I need a familiar face.

Not just that old chap
that sits in his car.
Not going very far,
I'm not sure if he's asleep,
But his world is dull and bleak.

I don't want my tomorrows
to run into my sorrows. Like his.
So breathe in that deadly kiss.
And I'd run for miles,
If I thought someone would miss
me.

But I know how to fake smile,
And I can make it worth your while.
I've become a persona,
And I'm kipping on mate's sofas.
Unless they're rich,
Then I'll end up in their bed,
Their grunts stay in my head.

Emblaze that love, for a second.
Yeah I know it's lust, for a minute.
But I charge by the hour.
So you might as well make it worth your time,
Because it's never worth mine.

Oh yeah this job is fine...

With no one to hold my hand
I know I'm alone in this land.
I stare out the window and fields seem bland,
But who am I to understand.
I take money for your demands,
And wake up
With no one to hold my hand.

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i'm sure you can see the hint at the profession of the persona of this poem..

thanks xx

You guys are really welcome *smiles*
And i gave 3 more days not to get anxious the people who aren't done with their work

Sincerely,
Laura

Miserable

I barely remember the love of sol
How warm it was against my back
Greater taste than fresh fruit in a bowl
An exquisite thing in a pale shack

So...when did everything suddenly go black?
Clouded by grey, bleak skies
How did I get so far off track?
Engulfed by a world created by lies

Look deep into these brown eyes
Please, say that you can find me
Before my soul collapses and dies
Don't leave me to drown at sea

Like you, I want to be free
To escape from being insane
Help me to let go of this misery
Take away my indescribable pain

I know you have nothing to gain
You have already left me behind
But lie about just one more thing
Lie and promise me that you tried

And before you leave and finally move on
Tell me, please, where has my heart gone?

*My use of the word 'sol' is not the Roman god. It's the Latin word for 'sun'. I am NOT talking about the god.

Yay! only 1 poem left :)

Im sorry guys but i must unreserve.

I reserve The Truths
since he unreserved.

The Truths

Upon the floor I lay,
Contemplating what to do,
Then an icy image crawls,
And fear clutches me to you,

The night I wouldn't forget,
And the days I cried between,
Then man who robbed me,
Of a beauty yet obscene,

Away from the love,
Of a home I wished to stay,
Silenced for many weeks,
As my spirits start to fray,

When I strayed back from this,
I was wilted way too long,
A flower inside me,
Had fallen from the strong,

I finally spoke the truth,
And some pushed me away,
Broken up and tainted,
Still upon the floor I lay,

Okay everyone..this one is closed now..results will be on friday
Thanks all the people that entered
Take care

WINGS OF FLAMES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol
People get my name wrong :(
:)

Lol sorry hun really
didn't mean to do it :)

Its all gooood
;)

Okay guys..here are the winners

1st: Lush.Fcuk
2nd:Charisma
3rd:Espoir Failed

Ps:I will give the prizes asap
Because i'm a little busy nowadays

Congrats To winners
Cheers!

Ok thanks a lot and no problem how ever long they take, xx

Sweet! Thanks a bunch!
Could you just comment on ....

1. Should've Said No
2. It Isn't Fate

and whatever u want the third one to be!
Thanks!
Charisma*