Any good?

Hey. Im new to this thing, and put some poems on. Most of the ones are things affecting me in life except one or 2.. but I want to know whether I should bother putting any more effort into them.

Alone, I cant sleep, and Ripped are more meaningul to me but ye.

Thanks for any comments.

hey i'll take a look n let you know, would you do me a favor n comment on a few on mine please
jemma xxx