POETIC VS SOCIOPATHIC [LAUREN]--RAP.OFF.

For Lauren and Poetic.

Ok. Since mods have bumping issues, i believe the orinial plan won't work because they'd probably classify it as "bumping". don't want to irritate anyone, no do we.

So. It's a free for all. One go. You guys can PM over the topic if you'd like. Anything goes, as long as it is rap. or close enough. =]

I'll expect it in a few days. <3

Have fun!

Illl do it on this,
as long as its about the contest its fine
not just wasteless text...

so here i go..

Ill start this lyrical battle, slow and soft
wouldnt want to come out early n finish you off
had a very messed up day, today
so ima bring the heat to u, let u burn in the astray
never really battle'd a girl, so this is something new
but the outcomes the same, the one losing is you
my rhymes will put you ina body bag make u quit
get you all emo, and make you slit your wrist
Ima end this one short and small, give u lee-way
so maybe you might come with somethn better to say

later

Vanilla- its just for me and poetic(if im right) and my name is SOCIOPATHETIC not sociopathic.. =[

ill do mine in a sec.

You start, and ill finish this game
they'll be sayin my name
cause you're losing,
they're already
booing you,
they're cueing, to leave
they're gonna
start to heave
the rhyme books,
that you took,
from the 'gangsta store'
down the street.
get it through your head
your gonna be lame dead.
you suck, get outta here
you aint winning this game,
you're too lame
and im too insane
to let you gain, any credit.
just forget it.

i may be emo.
but atleast im not a wigga
and you may be the man,
but my cat's 3 times bigga.

so goodnight, to you,
my wangsta competitor
cry yourself to sleep
cause a girl is so much better

Vanilla-its just poetic and lauren

lauren-sorry about that. i was in a hurry to put something up and get back to work. not to mention my typing is horrendous 90% of the time.

poetic and lauren- this was rather amusing. keep it going.

poetic- try adding more rhythm to it. i was able to feel the rhythm easier in laurens. however, i like it.

Your rhymes too quick, and im too slick
In the worlds of ali
Im so great, i make medicine sick....

I took books from a "gangster store" cuz i thought it'd be a good gift for you
Obviously its true, cause what you just said was so lame, Now ima beat you by 2 (raps)
so your Sociopathetic, take out socio your just pathetic thats it
after acouple more of these lines, your gonna hear the medic thats it
you try too say so much so quick and ima make you run out of lyrics and quit
you say you may be emo, but you got it wrong i aint a wigger, im me
Ima label you a loser isntead of emo, just so you can see
that I, Me, aint a wigger a wangsta, The N word or a Gangsta, I am me
Just for that ima hit you with some lyrics, and cause a Fatality

you say your insane, ha! I agree with you, your are insane
for trying to challenge me, all shackles off, its time to cause some pain
My words will beat you to the ground left on the flooor wit nothing to gain
and then Ill just leave you there, let you cry, "Ima make it rain"

so while you think you finished it.....your wrong
cause ima keep bashin your head, ima play it like a gong...

dnt judge me and jump to conclusions I aint a wigga
i should take your cat and stomp it, just to show whos bigga

Wow. now thats nice.

hah i love these.

i just wanted to inform you all this is until saturday, if i didn't already tell you. (just in case)

<3

You.. can't.. rap
get it though your skull~
your rhymes are just dull
you spit like yo mouth's full
your rhythm's choppy
and your flow is sloppy
you cant even copy
jock, plaga, or steal
this battle aint real
its a nightmare im in
up against a sucka
whos neva gonna win

Poetic- thats a laugh
you're just a no class,
loserfreak
peice of dog crap

sorry if i made ya cry
by callin you names
but im not gonna lie
and this isn't just a game
Sure, im pathetic
for thinking
maybe you'd be ok
but you'll soon regret it
coming online that day

Hey kitty- dont cha know
that you're the cat's meow
so when this rhyme is over
you be the one to take a bow
you put me in the finals, but that just aint enough
ive proven my worth and how im tough
but in order to be fair, you gotta
pick the chick with the red hair
or you can take the other's prayer
and maybe give a care
but dont you even dare
to begin to compare
that son of a pauper
to this millionaire.

-double Post*

-mods delete?

Wow...I swere your just so lame
you think the same rhymes gonna work, U aint in fame
keep telling me about how this rap aint a game
ima show you why red heads cant rap, put to shame..

your so wack, ima even crack your style..

So you try and come and post
and boast
about your style
and how you good
but your misunderstood
red headed white piece of trash
wanna call me names
and ima burn you in ash
dont you even know
this battle wont last
Cause ima hurt you so bad
you'll need more then a cast

put you on a breathe machine
for being so histerically mean
Get all psycho and cause a scene
Ima Crazy Puertorican im so obscene

telling kitty she shld choose you, she'd be blind
that would be a huge mistake, this rap is mine
see now your gonna make me crazy n go out of line
but your raps so poor, you cldnt even afford a rhyme

use some metaphors new rhymes something you bore me kid
Now ima just gonna have to rap my way out, make you look stupid
and right now you do, with your style thats so weak
Just shut your mouth, and please dont speak

ull just embaress yourself even more then you should
your name shouldnt be sociopathetic it shld be a girl whos no good

this battle is set for saturday, i dont plan to make it last this long
Cause everyone reading this should know, I was gonna win all along

Hold up, hold up
Why you all playin games like that
Tryin to rap, attemptin a lyrical battle
Actin like cattle, talkin all bullsh*t in here?
It begins anew, Ima bring on the fear
the thunder I bring'll shatter your ear,
you think that I joke?
I'll blind you with fire and smoke
and dust in your trail while all you can do is
fail to bust up my ego,
while Axel Rose is singin
"Where do we go?"
Oh sweet children, your times are up
And like a puff of smoke, you're gone up,
you're brought up
in the grill of a truck,
you're stuck in the mud while
I continue to destroy you with my....

Awful rhymes.

Hahahaha, now THAT was fun!

Sorry for entering this when I wasn't supposed to....I jus wanted to see how big of a jackass I could turn out to be.

Carry on.

J.R.S.P.

Haha. These have been soo amusing. Nice job.

The winner is...........................

Lauren!!!!!

The rhythm in hers was easier to follow.

Poetic you did a nice job as well. I'll give you one more comment.

Lauren you'll get however many up to 5.

But- tell me what you want commented, ot I won't do it.

Kitty

Congrats

Great job. i really didnt mean anything mean i said, truly. this was wicked fun.

actually if you will give 2 of the comments to poetic- he was amazing too.

if you would do the following:
untitled sonnet
blood's sweet toxicity
& untitled

Thanks and this was wicked fun!

Its fine if kitty says u win
u deserve all the comments,
good job
and it was fun

Haha. no problem.

poetic give me two that you want commented.

Just my way Part I and II

The end.

[mods can delete this now]

I think david should of won =)

Haha Hey now mel
if kitty said She Won,
then obv. she is the winner
though id like to have a re-match

Hey the rhymes were good. i just had to get extra picky on everything. go ahead say my judging sucks. i dont care. and ive been fair the whole time. they both of have gotten a good hand ful of comments from me. have you seen the other contest. maybe not. idk, not care.

that is all.

p.s. a rematch would be fun. however, you may want someone else to judge it, unless you still want me to judge. i had fun reading these.

just let me know what you want...i really don't care.

edit--sorry if that sounded rude or anything. not in the cheeriest of moods.

Well, thanks. now i know where to send my friends when they disagree that im stupid.

whatever. i'm done with this.

im sorry. maybe i cant do anything, but i really dont care. if he wants he can get more comments from me, i really don't mind.

later.

I do have quite a few people sayin
i should of won
but Kittys Vote Counts more then anything
Its what she says goes
if she felt that sociopathetic Won
then gosh darnet! she won!

but i would like to have a re-match