Contest - {HIM - titles}

Circle of fear please

Circle Of Fear

Stand down to the God,
Bow for your saint,
Sip the goblet filled with wine,
Let your life be taint,

March to his forgiveness,
Hypnotic fearful song,
Trudge through the pews,
In hope that you belong,

Preists of infectious religion,
A text of God's pretend,
A fake financial haul,
No angel's there to send,

All in of eternal life,
A merchants fearful prayer,
Reciting all in memory,
But forgetting what is there.

Since Wings of Flames did "Circle of Fear", then I'll unreserve.

Sorry about that. Wings of Flames just jumped in a bit too soon...

One is oh so beautiful
while the other is so cold
but both we do experience
in this life as we grow old

One is precious in our lives
while the other shows the end
but after their both over
they leave broken hearts to mend

One is oh so friendly
while the other is alone
we won't ever know for real
both feelings are unknown

Love is like a fairytale
While death is reality
we don't even realize
our inevitable mortality

love is a cliche subject
but yet again so is death
love and death embrace again
in a lovers final breath

I didnt see that she reserved!
I'm so sorry!

I think it would be fair to let both of us enter the same title.
(For the mix up)
Unless she doesn't want to anymore...

Just a suggestion

Wicked Game [Acrostic]

Witchcraft and fairy tales
In this fantasy we live
Carrying us away from reality
Keeping our spirits up high
Engraving our names in trees
Dreaming of happy endings

Gripping on to the our loved ones
A star, we all wish upon
Millions of people live on hopes and dreams
Everyone is a player in this wicked game

©SarahElliott2007

Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same
words as in the title.

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I'm not sure if this poem makes sense.

There ARE two poems. I wrote it twice [on accident] and like them both. Will you judge both and pick the one you like better? If not, will SOMEONE in this contest tell which I should post? =/ Thanks.
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Salt In Our Wounds

Press deep, harder, yes that feels good;
Matter of fact, I'll do it myself,
Let me fall; who needs their health?

Put the salt in the way you should,
Do it exactly how you would;
Take the salt and create your wealth.
Press deep, harder, yes that feels good;

Matter of fact, I'll do it myself.
I onced dream, but now I've stood;
I'll let me fall by myself,
For, who needs their good bodied health?
Press deep, harder, yes that feels good.
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Salt In Our Wounds [2]

If you know the name of this form, please tell me. I wrote it, forgot to put it by the name, and now can't find it. Ha ha. Thanks. =]
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Fill our hearts with your sneaky lies,
Into our wounds press your filthy salt.
Shove it hard and deep so we will cry,
Fill our hearts with your sneaky lies.
Counter the lies with your alibis;
There's nothing to these cults.
Fill our hearts with your sneaky lies,
Into our wounds press your filthy salt.

Scream out in agony from the pain;
You cannot take this scandal.
Let your helpless tears fall like rain;
Scream out in agony from the pain.
A face so emotional it's hard to explain;
Hold the rope high for what you can't handle.
Scream out in agony from the pain,
You cannot take this scandal.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

I will check it out...

Omg, i'm almost done with my poem lol. Sorry i forgot but my poem will be in today so pleeeeease dont close yet.

Endlessly In The Dark,

I'm not able to write 'And Love Said No'.

I'm sorry I cannot enter the contest.

Sorry, I'll have to unreserve "Circle of Fear", studying for exams is taking up too much time. =\

Oh, forget it. I unreserve. Sorry.

If anyone unreserves...and you want all the titles down... I'd be glad to do any of them. They all are great titles...so great, I just may write a poem for it anyways.
So, if you want, just tell me and I'll do them. =]

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

This contest is closed for judging. I will have results to you by Monday 14 May the latest...

Good luck!!!

And thanks for entering.

Damn, you guys made this contest hard to judge! It was so close and you all wrote fantastic poems!!!

But never the less, here are the winners:

1st: Hidden Soul AKA SecludedSerendipity with Behind the Crimson Door

2nd:Lush.Fcuk-* with In Joy and Sorrow

3rd: Bryan with In the nightside of Eden

HM: Gem with Beautiful

Congratulations to our winners and to those who participated, thank you and good luck for all the other contests. I will be hosting another HIM one shortly. Please join...

Oh, and please let me know which poems you would like me to comment on if there are any specific ones you have in mind.

Poems to comment:

SecludedSerendipity
`Living Each Day Like You're Already Dead [DONE]
`My First Wish [DONE]
`Picture to Burn [DONE]
`Love and Negotiation [DONE]
`Once in a While [DONE]
`Meet Your Master [DONE]
`Pink Brush [DONE]
`Dark Blue [DONE]
`The Ruby Queen [DONE]
`Fallen Leaves [DONE]

Lush.Fcuk-*
'In Joy & Sorrow [DONE]
'The Path [DONE]
'Points of Authority [DONE]
'Little Miss Itty Bitty [DONE]
'The Brightest of Stars [DONE]
'Picture Perfect Smile [DONE]

Bryan
'Killing Me Softly (Kyrielle Sonnet) [DONE]
'In The Nightside Of Eden (Sonnet I) [DONE]
'A Picture Of Beauty (Collab) [DONE]
'The Way That You Hold Me [Collab] [DONE]

Gem
'First Song [DONE]
'Brightest of Stars [DONE]

Adam
Sacrifice [DONE]

Carrie
Sunrise to Sunset [DONE]

<3 So Sick Of Tears <3
'The Failed Escape [DONE]

x Full Of Illusions x AKA x Hello Beautiful x
'Hoochie and the Pool Table [DONE]

Teria
Stop Right There [DONE]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
'At Least I Know I'm A Sinner [DONE]

XxRomancing the Darker SidxX
' Wounds of the Knife [DONE]

Wings Of Flames
'Grim Goodbye [DONE]

Mountain Dew
'Eternity [DONE]

Broken
'Faithful Murder [DONE]

Infected With his Deadly Love
' Wicked Game [DONE]

Congrats all.
Please do Wicked Game, thank you.

W00t! Thank yoooou!

Could you comment "First Song" and "Brightest of Stars"?

Congrats everyone =)

*Gem*

Wow, thank you SO much! =D Woo!!

Congrats everyone else! Umm, please do:

`Living Each Day Like You're Already Dead
`My First Wish
`Picture to Burn
`Love and Negotiation
`Once in a While
`Meet Your Master
`Pink Brush
`Dark Blue
`The Ruby Queen
`Fallen Leaves

Thank you so much!

Hoochie and the Pool Table plz... if you can't do explicit, then feel free to comment on anything! :]

Thanx for the placing and congrats to everyone

Killing Me Softly (Kyrielle Sonnet)
In The Nightside Of Eden (Sonnet I)
A Picture Of Beauty (Collab)
The Way That You Hold Me [Collab]

Please just do:
`At Least I Know I'm A Sinner.

Thank you.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

As before I am good with any comment. Thanks and way to go everyone.

Thank-you.
=]

In Joy & Sorrow
The Path
Points of Authority
Little Miss Itty Bitty
The Brightest of Stars
Picture Perfect Smile

Hey guys

Sorry this is taking me so long. I will have all the comments donr by Sunday 20 May though.

Thanks for your patience.

P.s there are still a few people who have not given me poems to comment on. I will just choose which ever appeals to me if I don't get a response before Sunday. :)

Okay. All done! Looking forward to seeing you in my other contests...

Josie