Anything you like (free for all), but hurry, be quick little chi

  • Espoirfailed
    17 years ago

    Ok so the title was slightly random :S

    however this is a free for all,
    you have until sunday to post any poem on any subject of NO MORE THAN 45 lines.

    the prizes will be judged according to the quality of the work...

    do not miss the chance to post any poem into a contest. i have no preconceptions or prejudice of the winner i just thought i'd make an open contest.

    have fun (it wud be nice if you made a new poem- but not at all necessary) good luck.xxx

    CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED

  • Tricky Daze
    17 years ago

    Still Waiting

    Everyday reminding you
    With ache and pain on my chest
    I'm bruised for anything to do
    Still aching,still waiting to nest

    Still taking the time,you should have arrived here
    'No I can't really believe yet I haven't seen
    Maybe he was late to wear
    Still counting,still here I've been

    Still waiting with a bouquet of red roses
    They're dried just like my soul
    This is the second spring nature snoozes
    Still broken,still sole

    Still wearing that white dress you bought and hoping
    To see you after that bunch of years
    The heart of me into million pieces now sweeping
    Still crying,still into fears

    The visitors have already left this place
    With a ruined dress and a sad smile
    Looking over the past I need to face
    But I'm still loving you,still your bride

    I dunno if this qualified enough,but i hope that way

  • xoOrdinaryGirlox
    17 years ago

    As I stand there gazing into your eyes,
    I remember everything that happened.
    Now you have come to claim your prize,
    As you have succeeded in your game.

    Nights of terror and torture but you did not mind,
    You were only thinking of claiming your prize.
    I could not believe i could have been so blind,
    As i layed there cold, washed in my own blood.

    You ripped me of my innocence,
    The only bit of hope and faith i had.
    I thought you had at least one bit of sense,
    But you carried on as if nothing had ever happened.

    Why did you do that to me?
    I thought you said that you loved me.
    Well that was too good to be true,
    I always knew that we could never be.

    Wishing you were behind bars,
    Where every inch of you deserves to be
    Instead your out their buying flash cars,
    With what was supposed to be our money.

    Everywhere you go, every step you take,
    I will be there, watching, haunting you.
    And as you sit there beside our lake,
    I will make sure your remaining life is hell.

    I well never stop this fight,
    To get you where you are supposed to be
    Your destination I have in sight,
    And in my eyes there is no Giving Up.

    _____Not True story_____

    I dont know if im allowed to enter this but i will anyway. Its the best poem i have.

    Xx..Jo..xX

  • Espoirfailed
    17 years ago

    Of course you are allowed to enter, anyone is welcome :D

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    17 years ago

    Deadly Photographs

    by Bri [x]

    Deadly photographs spread across the floor
    Crimson tears have fallen upon them
    Reminiscing or regretting? I don't know anymore
    Took life for granted; now it's gone in a flash

    Living within the shadows of my haunted past
    Pushing away the ones that loved me most
    I never knew that my time could come so fast
    Took life for granted; now it's gone in a flash

    Clenching onto the pillow, crying myself to sleep
    Blade ridding away all sadness, for just that moment
    Flashbacks; rocking back and forth as I weep
    Took life for granted; now it's gone in a flash

    Deadly photographs spread across the floor
    Took life for granted; now it's gone in a flash

  • xoOrdinaryGirlox
    17 years ago

    Thankyou. =D Well i hope you enjoy reading it.

    Xx..Jo..xX

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Xx Orange xX

    What word rhymes with Orange?
    It's starting to puzzle me
    With all the words we use each day
    To find one should be easy

    It's like trying to rhyme 'purple'
    Nothing's ever really right
    It's like 'silver' or even 'month'
    Finding a match is such a fight!

    There has to be a word out there
    Start to run through the alphabet
    'Lorenge?' 'Torenge?' Those aren't even words
    Why's this rhyme so hard to get

    I can't find a single match
    I've now wasted so much time
    This is getting so impossible
    I can't find anything that rhymes!

    So what word rhymes with Orange?
    This quest is getting really tough
    I can't find a single word...
    Syringe! That's close enough!

    *Gem*

    Copyright©GemmaStott2007

  • Marcus
    17 years ago

    This still needs a lot of work..

    'I'll See Your Heart And Raise You Mine'

    Here she comes, the Epitome of Grace
    This nervousness, it will not leave
    "And lead us not into temptation"
    I feel like Adam, on his first glance of Eve

    The vacuum of space, constricts my chest
    The crowd parts for a clearer view
    "And lead us not into temptation"
    On Noah's Ark, I hope i'm sat next to you

    One year on, I'm still the same
    We meet in the mornings and then go to college
    "And lead us not into temptation"
    I ate your apple from the tree of knowledge

    This game we play
    We're doing fine
    I'll see your heart
    And raise you mind

    Marcus ©

  • debbylyn
    17 years ago

    A Flower Paperweight

    Behold!
    My crystal crypt
    Lavender blooms rejoice
    In eternal beauty
    Yet
    Within this cold embrace
    I live not
    This vision of perfection
    Holds not my soul
    Nor my quickening heart
    In fragrant Spring's rebirth
    Death bathes my petals

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    This hasn't been exposed much, but I hope you like it.
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    Oh, Bright Morning Star

    Oh bright morning star
    How golden white is your name --
    Shine for a praise.
    Swirl in the Milky Way,
    And masquerade with gods.

    Let not the moon
    Tell where to press your toes;
    You are much brighter --
    Strike up against his name
    And show how much you're worth.

    Smile a smile,
    With your eyes shining brightly;
    Support your head high;
    You are the god of nature,
    To tower over the earth.

    Softly sing a song,
    To gentle crying children;
    Make your image
    To those who do not believe
    In what stars can do at night.

    Soar over Earth
    With your peace making music.
    You can quell Gods
    With your peaceful image
    And your time-shaping lives.

    Let not the moon
    Tell you where to sing your song.
    The Gods will listen
    And storms will bow to you
    In all simple glory.

    Oh, bright morning star
    How golden white is your name --
    Shine for praise.
    Swirl in the Milky Way,
    And masquerade with gods.

    ----------------------------------
    Thanks is a classic form of Japanese poetry related to the haiku with five unrhymed lives of five, seven, five, seven, and seven syllables.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    Black and White Photograph

    A black and white photograph, laying in the drawer-
    Splattered with memories; too sad to just ignore.
    Four faded edges, with the folded creases torn;
    The picture held the spots where it was plainly worn.

    The black and white smiles, holding so much joy,
    A picture perfect romance, between a girl and boy.
    The shades of black contrasting the light tints of white-
    Showing how sometimes things aren't always alright.

    He left you one day and you couldn't even stop him;
    It just wasn't your fault; it was his silly little whim.
    Gone, he left, like the bullet out of his gun-
    Brought on by the thought of promised fun.

    Well, times were more different than he ever expected-
    He never could've realized all the things, so unexpected.
    People were dying, shot right in front of his eyes
    This isn't what he had ever wanted, he realized.

    He couldn't come home and it broke your heart in two.
    "What," you ask, "did he get himself into?"
    The hatred spread by all the bullets, flying-
    Each day, the body count slowly rising.

    Then one day, a sealed letter came in the mail.
    The writing was simple, written kind of pale.
    "Sweetie, I Love You. I'm coming home soon.
    No need to worry, I'll be home around June."

    June came and went, without a soldier's return-
    The news would come then; she would have to learn.
    "He died fighting." the letter had read-
    Crying, she took in what he had already said.

    He never came home that cold night in June-
    She realized just what happened, all too soon.
    He was gone and there would be no more laughs.
    Dust began to cover the Black and White Photograph.

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    Spilled perfume
    By Sarah Elliott

    Your voice echoes through my head
    Again and again, like a broken record
    The last words that you said to me
    In my memory, they are stored

    You left me standing here alone
    Shocked and confused, in the bedroom
    With bruises, cuts, heartache and
    Broken glasses and spilled perfume

    Tears streaming down my face
    As I realise you are not coming back
    Its over now and always will be
    Its your love, that I lack.

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    Stranded with Hades

    Crippled tears run,
    Sharply down her cheeks;
    The pain has returned.

    Every emotion,
    Every scene,
    Floods her mind.

    His breath
    Lingers in the air,
    Suffocating her.

    Wild and rash,
    He raises his arm;
    Heâ??s ready.

    Words as sour
    As his breath,
    Strike her.

    The bruising begins,
    The drops stream;
    Battered and broken.

    She is everything,
    Everything but ready,
    To suffer such hurt.

    Deeper he ventures,
    Beneath her skin;
    A worm crawls.

    Despite all screams,
    All cries for help,
    She is stranded.

    No one hears her pleas,
    He shoves them all aside,
    Lust is his life.

    Another victim
    Torn that night;
    Words hard to tell.

    To mumble them aches,
    To explain them twinges,
    To remember them...

    Is Hades and below...

    The purity,
    Of a delicate angel,
    Vanished in minutes.

  • Romantic Lover
    17 years ago

    Oh, What A Day!

    Oh, what a long day
    Meetings one after another
    Will this day ever end
    It seems like never

    Nothing was accomplished
    Information was amiss
    If only you were here
    I'd be in heavenly bliss

    Relentless bickering amongst all
    Yet my thoughts drift to you
    Why don't they understand
    There's nothing more we can do

    As I close my eyes
    I can smell the essence of you
    Your cool refreshing color
    And some dark highlights too

    Your aroma quite invigorating
    Completely possessing me
    If I could get my lips on you
    I'd take you in so ever tastefully

    As I'm lost in your thoughts
    Dreaming of your concoction
    Hoping no one reads my thoughts
    They'd think this was pure seduction

    Never mind the others
    Enchanted I am with you
    Your definitely my desire
    Most certainly that's true

    This meeting is now over
    Alas I am free
    By the time I get home
    I hope you're waiting for me

    Traffic at this hour
    Is crazy and bizarre
    Everyone seems to be out
    I don't even live that far

    It's about time I made it
    After a hectic day for me
    I can finally relax and enjoy
    My white chocolate martini.

  • Romancing the Darker Side
    17 years ago

    It's not new, but it's my fave.

    Sin-Shine
    Sunshine turns to sin
    Sinshine falls upon my head
    I am graced with the beauty of pain
    As once again I must face this dread

    Clouds turn to darkness
    Mounds sit over me
    Their contents spill before my soul
    As I try to be free

    Trees turn to sadness
    Dreams once more shade you
    A single leaf comes crashing down
    Reconciles the pictures you once drew

    Breezes turn too hollow
    Freezing days are to come
    I try to end this cruel world
    But my pain is not yet done

    Rain turns to emptyness
    Pain flies in my hair
    Multicolored rainbows
    Cascade with great despair

    Days fade to winters
    Dazes are of my mind
    You'll always be my understanding
    Nature calls it's time

  • Sarah Ann
    17 years ago

    She's Everything

    by Sarah Ann

    I wanted to keep you with me forever,
    Laugh...We had good times together
    But when I saw the break of day
    I wished that I could fly away
    Instead of kneeling in the sand
    Catching teardrops in my hand.

    I wanted to be your fantasy,
    And guide you through life happily
    But then you turned and my flame died,
    And now I know I barely tried.
    She's everything and I am pained
    To hear her whisper your sweet name.

    I wanted to visit our special place
    And fall in love inside your grace,
    But when I saw she stole your heart
    My world trembled and fell apart.
    And from my sorrows I descry
    Deserts of hurt eternity.

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    Looking Through The Eyes Of Love
    by Italian Stallion

    "Absence is to love
    As wind is to fire,
    It extinguishes the small
    And kindles the great."

    Easy to love,
    But hard to hold.
    Life comes and goes,
    But love lives on.

    Love is a journey,
    Through littered roads
    With broken hearts,
    Not a destination.

    Follow your heart,
    But let your mind
    Be the guide
    To an everlasting love.

    © Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion

  • Jordan
    17 years ago

    Two Drowning Lover's Hearts

    A cool autumn mist
    Lightly caresses my shoulders
    As we walk
    Along the leaf-ridden path

    I lightly peck your cheek
    You smile (A picture of true beauty)

    The forest sighs
    For she is jealous of what we have.

    As we walk
    Along the colour coded path
    The rain is no longer soft
    But fierce

    We talk...
    The way that stars meant for lovers to talk

    We can only hear a slight
    Pitter-patter
    Far in the distance

    You laugh (Angel's laughter)
    I take your hand
    As we walk
    Toward destiny's core

    You smile
    (A picture of true beauty)
    The forest laughs
    (Remembering the happiness of true love)
    The rain softens once more
    (Sensing that we are already drowning without his help)

    For your smile is enough
    To flood the world with
    Euphoria
    And drown any man's sorrows

    The rain stops...

    And you turn to me and ask:

    "Did you hear something?"

  • Espoirfailed
    17 years ago

    Italian stallion, i have read the first stanza of that poem before, did u copy it or did i just read it on your poems??
    thanks
    xx

  • ---AL---
    17 years ago

    Tis' a true poem written for my beautiful girlfriend --- Please enjoy!

    Wings Of A Dove...

    Broken battered and undone,
    His jaded shards fell in her hand,
    To cut her skin but never run,
    Chose to stay and love this man.

    Mended, tended and complete,
    Her heart was bled to make the glue,
    To make it whole and give a beat,
    To his heart which broke right through.

    Lost, alone and bitter cold,
    She trapped herself within a room,
    With only hope that she'd be told,
    That she's alright and not alone.

    Guided, loved and sweetly warm,
    His heart took beat to hold her tight
    That same heart that she made norm
    Had swept her up and made things right

    Banded, strengthened and in love,
    They both looked in the others eye,
    Lost in feelings like two white doves,
    They spread their wings and stole the sky...

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    Italian stallion, i have read the first stanza of that poem before, did u copy it or did i just read it on your poems?? thanks xx

    ^^ It is a quote by: Roger de Bussy-Rabutin, Hence the reason why it is in Quotes.

  • Espoirfailed
    17 years ago

    Mais oui italian stallion i did not notice the quotation marks before hand, one apologises

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    17 years ago

    I Don't Love You Anymore

    I try and try to love you,
    But my heart keeps saying no,
    No matter how hard I try,
    To keep it out of my head; it finds a way in,
    " I don't love you anymore."

    I can't keep pretending to be "your girl",
    And it's killing me watching you,
    Lose yourself in this love,
    That was never to be,
    It's just, I don't love you anymore.

    I tried loving you,
    I truly did,
    But the flame burned out,
    And the task became harder,
    I'm sorry, I just don't love you anymore.

    I just don't love you anymore,
    I can't see letting you live,
    A love that isn't even true,
    I'm sorry but,
    I just don't love you anymore.

  • Mezmeryz
    17 years ago

    Didn't Even Look Back [its a jumble of words from my heart, sorry if it doesn't make sense =[
    by MezmeRyz

    I've had bad results in my many tests,
    I've always failed, though I've tried my best.
    It's like it was all a waste, loving you such,
    To call you my best friend; why do I care so much?

    Why is it that no matter, how much you seem to hurt me?
    I always seem to come back. Why do I force myself to be?
    What you want me to be? Why do I care? I'm so confused.
    But more than that, I'm hurt, but I don't feel used.

    Friends have hurt me. I've been betrayed; but why you?
    Why does it never work? Just when I'm thinking too,
    Everything will be fine. You leave without looking behind.
    Not thinking what will become of me, where will I look to find?

    I thought I'd always have your back, you always had mine.
    Your friendship was enough for me. But you left without a sign.
    I'm not complaining. I didn't want anything in return.
    But you left me, walked away; left me in this mess to burn.

    I can't help but cry and lie to you; I don't know what to do,
    I wasn't waiting for no-other, I was only waiting for you.
    I should be used to the torture, but it still hurts so much,
    You've made my heart sink and know it needs a crutch.

    I try to let you go, let you know my pain,
    But I cannot do it, because my heart's so vain.
    I want to forget you; I want you to hurt,
    But I cannot do it, I feel like dirt.

    When I know you're upset, I want to know why,
    I want to keep you happy till the day that I die.
    I care for you so much, so the pain I cannot hack,
    To think; you left me; and you didn't even look back.

  • Avrii Monrielle
    17 years ago

    What It Takes
    by SingingInTheRain

    Tell me what it takes to have you in my arms tonight
    How long must I wait to make sure everything's alright?
    How can we stop ourselves from getting in another fight?
    Tell me what it takes to have you in my arms tonight

    Tell me what it takes to have you in my arms tonight
    I feel so afraid when you're right here by my side
    I cannot act like me; my true self seems to hide
    Tell me what it takes to have you in my arms tonight

    Tell me what it takes to have you in my arms tonight
    What should I do when everything about you makes me sigh?
    What must I do to when in the dark, you are my light?
    Tell me what it takes to have you in my arms tonight

    Tell me what it takes to have you in my arms tonight
    I want to shake away the numbness that I feel inside
    I wish for once this wasn't such a big surprise
    Tell me what it takes to have you in my arms tonight

  • J Lau
    17 years ago

    Desires
    by J Lau

    Dreams and reality collide,
    Hope and faith survives.
    Desires and fate entangle,
    Lust and love entwines.
    Vision and goals coincide,
    Life and destiny defined.

    < - - - - - - - - - - - >

    There are so many things in life that are out of our control. So many things we desire, yet will not pocess.

  • Espoirfailed
    17 years ago

    END END END

    results in by sunday.

  • Espoirfailed
    17 years ago

    Right i have sorted through tthe poems and i am in the process of judging them.
    i must say they are all of excellent quality and it is very hard.
    there will be three winners
    one, two or three hc, depending.
    1st place is 5comments
    2nd place is 4
    3rd place is 3
    hc is 2

    everyone else will receive a comment, probably on the poem they submitted unless otherwise asked.

    thanks for entering
    xx

  • Espoirfailed
    17 years ago

    Round up, round up, i hold the results in my hands...

    gosh i'm weird!

    so well done everyone and you will all get at least one comment, there was not a bad poem in here (well maybe one.... i joke!!)

    okay so

    1st= Marcus
    2nd = Sarah ann
    3rd= Jordan the messenger

    Highly commended
    Vanilla
    Mooie Ogen
    Romancing the darker side

    you were all great, and i must thank you for your time.
    your comments will appear in due course.

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Congratulations Marcus!! I'm so proud of you!!
    xxxx

  • Espoirfailed
    17 years ago

    If you want me to do certain ones then tell me, if not i will pick randoms, it's completely your choice everybody :D
    xxx

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    Congratulations to all the winners.

  • Sarah Ann
    17 years ago

    Awww thank you so much! Congrats to all other winners!!! =)

  • Jordan
    17 years ago

    Aww, wow! I never win these....thanks!!

    Hmm...I dunno which poems to pick, so you can do a random selection if you wish. Thanks again!