Princesses. =)

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

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  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    I'll try Cinderella please.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Whoops, thank-you for pointing out my mistake. =)

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    I hope this is ok.
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    Cinderella

    Her two older step-sisters
    Bossing her around
    Washing the clothes
    Scrubbing the ground

    Her step-mum
    Doesn't care for her
    Nor does her step-sisters
    They make her cater

    She sits on her bed
    At night she cries
    Wishing someone will save her
    Before she dies

    He prince will come
    She just doesn't know
    For she doesn't believe
    That he will show

    She is left alone
    While they go to the ball
    Her fairy god-mother
    Will save her, once and for all

    She gives her a beautiful dress
    A cart for her to get there
    She has to be back by midnight
    This is her night, not to care

    She dances with her prince
    But now its time to go
    As she rushes out the door
    She leaves her glass slipper below

    The prince picks it up
    And keeps if so he can find her once more
    Because he knew she was the one
    When she first walked through the door

    He searches and searches
    Night after night, day after day
    He will not give up looking for her
    He will find her and get his way

    He finally finds her after awhile
    Her knight in shining armor
    He rescued her from her horrid step-mum
    As she walked down the altar

  • Avrii Monrielle
    17 years ago

    Plz reserve me, "Jasmine"

    thnx

  • Espoirfailed
    17 years ago

    Can i have sleeping beauty please, thanks xx

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    Dang someone took me! lmao I'm Cinderella! lol =]

    Snow White plz jenna dear!!

  • Mommy And Me
    17 years ago

    Haha some one took me to deary.. lol

    uhh ... i am trying to write poems on macbeth right now :'( ... i am over booked. but i love you :) i will write a princess poem later. but not for the contsets.. *HUGS*

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Ariel please, but i warn you, it's going to be veeeery long...

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    (Warning, this is written from the fairytale books, not the disney film)

    Xx The Little Mermaid xX

    Down below the waves where the sea folk live
    Where the plants grow on the ocean floor
    Where the fish play instead of the birds
    And there's no such thing as fighting or war

    In the deepest spot of the ocean
    Is the grand palace of the sea king
    He had six and lovely daughters
    Who would so enchantingly sing

    The six princesses were beautiful girls
    But the youngest was the loveliest sight
    Eyes such a deep blue and hair so red
    And a smile so gorgeous and bright

    But like her sisters she had no feet
    But a shimmering aqua fish tail
    As beautiful as the angel fish
    And as strong as the great blue whale

    Outside the palace were stunning gardens
    Where all the flowers grew with pure love
    And when the sea was calm and quiet
    You could see the sun shining up above

    Each princess had a small charming plot
    Where she could grow flowers, plants and trees
    Plant vines, place statues, a coral reef
    She could decorate how she pleased

    The youngest had an unusual plot
    And she spend all of her free time there
    With a statue of a handsome prince
    Who received all of her love and care

    The grandmother told the little mermaid
    "The day that you reach the age fifteen
    You'll be able to rise up from the ocean
    And see great things that you've never seen"

    The youngest had to wait five long years
    For her turn to see the sun drenched land
    Feeling so wistful when her sisters spoke
    Of the wonders they'd seen and found

    The eldest spoke of the cities and towns
    Where all of the lights twinkled like stars
    She spoke of the music and ringing bells
    And the commotion from the motorcars

    The second spoke of the pretty sunset
    Painting the clouds red and pink in the sky
    She watched the swans fly toward the sunset
    With a contented and happy sigh

    The third sister was the boldest one
    She swam up a river to a quiet creek
    Where she saw some children splashing about
    Who saw her and ran, too scared to speak

    The fourth one was not so venturesome
    And she stayed far away from the shore
    She played with the dolphins and porpoises
    Until she was too tired to play anymore

    The fifth sister was the next one to go
    In the winter time with the snow and ice
    She saw countless, luminous ice bergs
    And she rode atop the biggest one twice

    The sisters took great delight in swimming
    Up to the surface and feeling so free
    But they always became nostalgic for home
    And longed to be back beneath the sea

    On evenings when they rose up together
    The youngest sister had to stay behind
    But a mermaid has no tears to cry with
    So it just looked like she did not mind

    But at long last she reached the age
    Where she could climb up to the surface
    The sun had set and the air was fresh
    It was such a calm and peaceful place

    The little mermaid saw a ship sail by
    Where there was cheerful music and more
    And fireworks bursting up in the sky
    Each one as bright as the one before

    On the deck was a very handsome prince
    Whose birthday it was on that lively night
    But suddenly a storm blew over the sea
    And all of the crew on board gave fright

    Waves rose high and the dark clouds gathered
    Forks of lightning flashed in the distance
    The ship couldn't handle the angry sea
    And the main mast snapped in an instance

    The little mermaid saw the peril
    Each time the lightning cracked and flashed
    She tried to help out the best she could
    But the whole entire ship was smashed

    The princes eyes remained tightly shut
    As the little mermaid kissed his brow
    When she heard voices coming toward her
    She swam away, what would happen now?

    She watched as the prince regained consciousness
    And smiled at everyone gathered around
    But he never smiled across at her
    So she sank down sadly without a sound

    She'd always been melancholy and quiet
    But now she would not even smile or sing
    When her sisters asked what she saw above
    She wouldn't tell them a single thing

    Many times she visited the palace
    Where she had left her beloved prince
    But she always returned feeling upset
    Because she never caught a single glimpse

    Finally she told her eldest sister
    Who told her what she needed to know
    Hand in hand, they swam to the surface
    And her sister showed where she should go...

    A palace with stairs leading to the sea
    Made of a pale and shimmering stone
    It was the most magnificent place
    A glorious and spectacular home

    Now she knew where her beloved lived
    She spent many days and evenings there
    Watching her prince with love in her heart
    Wishing she could touch his shining hair

    There was so much that she wanted to know
    About the world and the people above
    She sought advice from her wise grandmother
    Who asked what she wanted to know of

    "I want to know that if men aren't drowned
    Do they live on forever or die"
    "Yes they die" her grandmother answered
    "Except they have souls that travel high"

    "We can live until three hundred years old
    But then we perish into mere foam
    While humans have an immortal soul
    And rise up to a heavenly home"

    "Can I not win an immortal soul?"
    The little mermaid sadly inquired
    "I want to share in that heavenly realm
    Of the sea I'm getting ever so tired"

    "The only way to secure your own soul
    Is to win a human mortal heart
    He must love you more than anyone
    And desire never to be apart"

    "But alas my child," the grandmother said
    "Human men have such meager taste
    They recoil at the thought of our tails
    Which gives us all our beauty and grace"

    The little mermaid felt her heart sink
    As she sat down in her garden alone
    What could she do to be with her prince?
    How could she win an immortal soul?

    Then an idea struck her so suddenly
    A way to leave the sea behind her
    She would seek help from the great sea witch
    But first of all she had to find her

    She swam through whirlpools as best she could
    And then across the sea witched marsh
    Straight toward a terrifying abode
    Where lived a witch so dismal and harsh

    She finally reached her, feeling so scared
    And she opened her mouth to confess
    But the sea witch stopped her with a grin
    "I know what you want my dear princess"

    "It's foolish of you for it will bring grief
    But I'll make a drought for you to drink down
    But it's irreversible I must stress
    It is the strongest potion I've found"

    "Before sunrise you must drink it on land
    As your tail will divide in two and shrink
    It will be painful like a stinging knife
    Now do you still want to take this drink?"

    "You will still keep your elegant form
    No dancer will ever compare to you
    But each step will feel like treading on blades
    It's your decision, what will you do?"

    "But remember once you take human form
    You can never be a mermaid again
    You must win his heart or become the sea
    Are you keen to risk the heartbreak and pain?"

    "You'll have to pay me," the sea witch said
    "What I want is your melodic voice
    You'll win his heart with your looks and grace
    Now do you agree? It's all your choice"

    "I agree," the little mermaid replied
    But her face had turned so very pale
    "I will take this risk and drink this drought
    Anything for liberty from this tail"

    The witch threw ingredients into a pot
    And steam swirled up in a thick gray mist
    It started to boil, hot and spitting
    And the little mermaid clenched her fists

    When the drought was ready, it shone so bright
    And it glittered in the mermaid's hand
    She grasped the bottle and swam up above
    Coming to rest on a gold stretch of sand

    When the first sun ray burst on the land
    The little mermaid swallowed the drought
    She felt a sharp unbearable pain
    But then she looked down and tried to laugh

    Her tail had gone and there in it's place
    The loveliest legs seen on any maid
    And there in front of her was her prince
    But she felt her voice begin to fade

    The prince asked who she was and where she lived
    But the little mermaid could not speak
    So he led her up into the palace
    She stumbled, as her new legs were weak

    Servants dressed her in rich silky clothes
    She was the most fine-looking girl there
    The beautiful slaves stepped forward to sing
    Bur our mermaid couldn't, it wasn't fair

    As the graceful slaves began to dance
    The little mermaid smiled and rose
    Each move showed off her beauty and poise
    As she floated on the tips of her toes

    She amazed everyone with her style
    The prince said he'd keep her forever more
    He took her with him wherever he went
    And she slept on a pillow outside his door

    But while everyone in the palace slept
    She would creep out into the cool night
    She would see her sister's arm in arm
    Silhouetted so forlorn in the moonlight...

    "You're most dear to me," the prince declared
    "You look so much like a girl I once saw
    Such a beautiful girl who saved my life
    After I was shipwrecked and washed ashore"

    "She's the only girl I could ever love
    But you're so like her, its kind to my heart
    She belongs to temple and not to me
    It's my good luck you're here, we'll never part"

    "Alas he doesn't know, I saved his life"
    The little mermaid thought in despair
    "I saw the maid he loves more than me
    But she didn't save him, it isn't fair"

    "But she's owned by the temple, not by him
    So they'll never see each other again
    It is I he will be with most every day
    It is I who'll love him until the end"

    Soon rumors arose, the prince was to marry
    The daughter of a neighboring king
    The rumors told that the prince was glad
    But the little mermaid knew the real thing

    "I am forced to make this journey," he said
    "But I will never marry against my will
    So does not resemble my love like you
    If I married you, I would be fulfilled"

    He kissed her on the mouth so tenderly
    And she dreamed of bliss and immortal souls
    She laid her head upon his broad chest
    And for the first time her heart felt whole

    "I trust you aren't afraid of the sea"
    He said as they boarded the striking vessel
    He kept her close and told her stories
    The little mermaid felt loved and special

    In the clear moonlight when all was quiet
    She sat on the rails and looked out to sea
    Her sisters appeared looking so grim
    She smiled to show that she was happy

    The next day when the ship came to dock
    The little mermaid strained to see the princess
    She couldn't help but feel ill at ease
    Would her beloved prince still love her best?

    At last the princess boarded the ship
    And the mermaid saw the rumors were true
    The princess's skin was clear and fair
    Dark lashes framed her eyes of deep blue

    "It was you!" the prince cried. "Who saved my life
    The maid who saved me from the angry sea"
    He smiled with joy at his blushing bride
    "I'm as happy as any man could be!"

    He told the mermaid, "You'll share my joy?
    For you loved me when I was so alone"
    But the little mermaid felt her heart break
    For the next morn would see her turn to foam

    The chapel bells rang out through the streets
    And the little mermaid held the brides train
    But her thoughts stayed on her last night alive
    And she felt her heart constrict with pain

    The ship set sail after the couple wed
    Brightly colored lanterns lit up the night
    The wedding party was loud and merry
    The little mermaid danced with all her might

    After midnight, the party calmed down
    And our little mermaid watched for daybreak
    Her sisters suddenly rose form the waves
    And her body began to shiver and shake

    For there was no sign of their long rich hair
    Instead they held a glinting sharp knife
    "Before sunrise, strike it in the prince's heart
    The sea witch said it would save your life!"

    "She took our hair in a way of price
    So you can come back to us under the sea
    Make haste, one of you will die before morn
    It's your decision, which one will it be?"

    The mermaid crept to the prince's room
    And heard him murmur the name of his bride
    The knife trembled in her small pale hand
    She knew what she had to do deep inside

    She flung herself up and over the rails
    As the first sun ray dissolved her to foam
    But she did not feel the hand of death
    She felt a warm sense of coming home

    In the light she saw ethereal spirits
    They floated as wingless as the air
    The mermaid realized she was like them
    And she ascended with a graceful flair

    "We strive to gain an immortal soul
    By doing good deeds," one softly sighed
    "Who are you?" the little mermaid asked
    "We're the daughters of the air," they replied

    "For three hundred years, we've done what we can
    To win a soul and share eternal bliss
    We have to put others before ourselves
    Which is what you did, despite what you'd miss"

    For the first time the mermaid felt tears fall
    As she vowed to do all the deeds she could
    She looked to where the prince and bride slept
    And wished their lives to be happy and good

    Unseen by them she kissed them on the heads
    And rose with the daughters above at last
    "This is the way to the kingdom of God
    Where we'll rest after the years have passed"

    And so ends the story of the little mermaid
    A story of bravery, magic and love
    But at last our mermaid has found her peace
    A she begins her flight to heaven above

    Copyright©GS2007

    (Have a cookie if you read it all!)

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Lol Thank-you Gem, I will be sure to be comfortable when I read it haha :p . And are you still doing the alphabet contest? I just need to know so I can close and judge it. =) Thanks Darling! (L)

  • Just Lucy
    17 years ago

    Haha Gem thats massive!!! and can i please have Mulan.

  • Just Lucy
    17 years ago

    Mulan

    She may not be the prettiest of all
    and she may not be as balanced
    maybe she is too skinny
    but thats how she was taught to be

    so the tea was a disaster
    but that wasn't all her fault
    it was the cricket that jumped right in
    to use it as a hot tub

    embarrassed infront of the town
    told she would never bring honour
    well, there goes her self esteem
    lets not kick her while she's down

    than a distant beating of drums
    rung through the town peoples ears
    it was the drum of war
    her dad would have to fight again

    trying to redeem herself
    and to save her father too
    she cut off her hair that night
    took her dads armor and left

    on the back of the black stallion
    she rode off to join the army
    if she was caught a female,
    the penalty was death

    so the ansestors sent a guardian
    who they thought was the great stone dragon
    but a little lizard dragon broke stoney
    so he snuk off instead

    so Mushu 'helped' Mulan
    to be the best guy she could be
    but soon enough it crumbled down
    when she was forced to leave

    she battled a brave journey
    stared death in the eyes
    she saved the entire of China
    but when wounded she was found out

    as her and Mushu picked up to leave
    they saw the Huns come back
    so they raced off to tell the town
    but noone would believe Mulan,
    it was Ping that had the trust

    so again she came face to face with death
    as the Huns crashed their celebration
    Mulan managed to fight them off
    and save the emporer from death

    The emperor bowed before her
    and told her she has brought great honour
    and satisfied with that Mulan went to see her father
    who was sitting in their back yard, under a blossom tree

    he couldn't believe she was alive
    he didn't care about the honour
    or the sword of the huns she was given
    as he held her in a tight embrace

    so she may not be the prettiest
    and she may not be too balanced
    but she has fought a war
    and walked away with honour.

  • Just Lucy
    17 years ago

    (edited out)

  • Espoirfailed
    17 years ago

    I am so sorry but i must withdraw my entry, i have tried to no avail, and i feel it would be more productive to let someone have my place who will write a good piece.

    sorry for the trouble
    espoir
    xx

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    I'm changing! I want Sleeping Beauty... that used to be a nickname of mine! =]

  • Nessa
    17 years ago

    I'll Try Princess Maddy please!

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    Sleeping Beauty

    In a dark room, lit by the pale moon light,
    Sleeping Beauty lays in bed, thinking about what's right.
    Fighting the indecision floating around her head -
    As with every word he had ever said.

    He told her he loved her and that he would forever -
    But now he's gone; coming back next to never.
    All the promises he broke, the lies that sting;
    "Impossible!" she thought, the pain he still brings.

    The tears flow down her pale white cheeks -
    Only at night will she accept she is weak;
    When shadows dance around her white walls,
    And no one is there to catch her when she falls.

    But he was always there, he was her prince.
    She hasn't loved another, there's been no one since.
    No one dares to intrude upon this fragile mess;
    Laying there, still in her soft pink dress.

    She dares not take it off, for fear the memory is fake;
    She couldn't live with it if it was a mistake.
    The dream that she holds on to, she believes is true:
    The last day you were there, the last day she held you.

    Of all the memories she holds, it's the one that hurts the most:
    How mush she really loves you; how you were so close.
    The ending seemed so sudden; she knew that it was wrong,
    But how could she fight when she wasn't that strong?

    She still loves him, even with her heart broken -
    She doesn't regret any words she had ever spoken.
    No matter what she does and no matter what you do,
    Sleeping Beauty will always be in love with you.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Deadline now set

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    This is now closed, thank you for the patience. Judging will be taking place tomorrow night, results will be posted then or Saturday morning.

    =]

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    First - Gem
    Second - Ciao
    Third - Racheal
    HM - Lucy
    HM - Infected...

    Leave titles you would like to be done.
    Both HM's will get the 2 r/r/c.

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Oh my god... wow!
    I never thought to check this far back..

    How about my ten latest? Is that ok!
    Thanks so much =)

    *Gem*

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    17 years ago

    Thanks. And congrats everyone.

    Just my lastest two please.