A Walk Down Memory Lane

Hey guys,
I have a new Poem A Walk Down Memory Lane....its about my grandmother and how she died and all that...I would really like you to read it and comment on it...wether I need to make changes or what (I'll do the same for you!!).....Plz feel free to vote/comment on ANY of my poems...if you wanna keep in touch, I have aim, msn, and yahoo....send me as many e-mails as you want

MSN: Jbl_smile34_09@hotmail.com
AIM: Sexxcii@netscape.net
YAHOO: slipknot_fan43@yahoo.com

I also have messenger >> Msn, Yahoo and aim...feel free to add me also

THANK YOU!!

Its a good poem