The tree house

  • lil angel wings
    17 years ago

    Hey all i once read this poem. i think it is called the tree house

    " I finally agreed when he turned ? to build his castle in the sky."

    its a really great poem and i cant seem to find it

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    ^^ That's the one I looked at too.

    I don't think it's called the treehouse, because there was only that one and one about Mickey Mouse..either that, or it's off this site now.

  • starsnsmiles
    17 years ago

    The Treehouse

    I finally agreed when he turned eight
    To build his castle-in-the-sky
    With wooden steps nailed up the side
    Just so he could climb that high.
    Four walls each six feet tall
    Although, not exactly square
    And little windows all around
    So he could look out everywhere.
    But for the roof he said, Please dad,
    Let's not cover it all the way
    So I can see the stars at night
    And feel the sun each day.
    Up an down that tree he'd go
    For just one board at a time
    All that week I watch him grow
    And felt so proud that he was mine.
    Six short days after we began
    That treehouse was complete
    I said it was a work of art
    He just kept saying, neat
    He asked to have an open-house
    So all his friends could see
    We planned it for that next weekend
    But it never came to be.
    Early Friday morning the telephone rang
    A large truck hit the bus they said
    Many children injured, some were fatal
    And mine was amongst the dead.
    Now when I'm feeling terribly alone
    I'll climb up that old tree
    And sit for hours at a time
    Pretending he's still there with me
    The other day I fell alsleep there
    And had the strangest, wonderful dream
    About this castle-in-the-sky
    And my boy calling down to me.
    Saying, Daddy, just climb the steps
    That I've already nailed down for you
    I've got the highest treehouse of all
    And I'm having open-house, for you...

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Awehh that was cute.

    Sad, but cute..was it on this site?

  • Fang of the Wild
    17 years ago

    I have a really nice poem, i'm new

  • Fang of the Wild
    17 years ago

    OMg, i read the poem. its sooooo nice!!

  • starsnsmiles
    17 years ago

    Lush Fcuk - Erm, I'm not sure if it was ever on this site; I didn't get it from here. If it was, then it's likely that it's plagarised, coz it was on a lot of other sites too [I googled it]

  • lil angel wings
    17 years ago

    Starsnsmiles thank you heaps. thats the one i wantesd. i tried to google it bu i couldnt find it

  • starsnsmiles
    17 years ago

    Hey np, glad i could help :)

  • Black Princess
    17 years ago

    Wow thats a really sad poem :(