Prize: 10 comments

Im seriously bored outta my mind, and I realize I have two contests going.
But, this one will only consist of three poems and one winner, who will recieve 10 comments.

Rules:
01. title must be in poem.
02. must be new.
03. must be your own.
04. must be 10 lines or more.

titles:
no news
it's a love thing
dreams in the dark.

Dreams in the Dark!

I will write it right now. (L)

No news thanks.

"Behind the doors, a girl is waiting to shine,"
She whispers under her breath every night,
And she looks to the golden stars, so divine,
Clasping her hands together, she holds on tight.

And her chest lifts and falls, with every breath,
Beating to the tears streaking her porcelain face,
But her eyes, they tell stories of brutal deaths,
As she holds onto her last hope of saving her grace.

She can hear the fights through the thin white walls,
The slurred words break her apart at every seam,
And there's a crash as the next beer can falls,
But she stumbles on through her broken dreams.

The moon casts down on her, a miniature spotlight,
And she acts out lines in the middle of the night,
With bruises on her cheeks, and cracks in her heart,
The dreams in the dark keep her from falling apart.

-Jenna Elphick
May 2, 2007

It's a love thing

Thanks, Joe

No news

She sits by the phone
And waits for the call
She is trembling all over
If she stood, she would fall

He said he would call
So she knew he will be Okay
So she waits all night
By the phone, she will stay

As the morning sun rises
She starts to worry
For she has no news
About the boy, she wants to marry

She tries to call his phone
But he doesn't answer
She is having a panic attack
For she thinks he needs her

Her door bell rings
And she see's its the cops
She knows something has happened
They start to fall, her teardrops

They say there was an accident
And that he is dead
She would have to see his corpse
And this is she what she will dread

©Sarah Elliott

It's A Love Thing
by Italian Stallion

All because of love,
I can see the light.
The one and only,
That guides me at night.

My heart rises upon the stars,
As she holds me oh so close.
This feeling comes once in a lifetime,
Unlike any other that comes and goes.

I guess it's just a love thing,
That you'll have to experience yourself.
For it's a wonderful feeling,
That you'll never want to forget.

© Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion

The winner is Lush.Fcuk-*
Which poems do you want commented, hun?

All three of you did a great job, though. I enjoyed reading them. :D

Congrats.

Yep yep Congratulations Jenna.

Awe thanks!

Hmm..

This Week The Trend
Painted Leaves
That's What Hurts
Grandmother's Pearls
Prophecies In Kodak
Morningstar
A Silhouette In The Sailor's Sky
Heaven Is Her Suicide
Rustic Lullaby
&&
This Burning Bridge

=)

Bubbling cauldron; the air is dead,
The floors are black, the sky is red.

Preparing the spell to end all,
This curse will make most people fall.

A black cat, with red eyes strides across,
A little old lady sitting there clutching her cross.

Turning to the lord, what is their fate?
After its done, where shall she be placed?

Shes scared, shes worried, but it has to be done,
After all what has the world become?

Evil, walking zombies, unconsciously feeding wealth,
Its the right thing to do, she reassures herself.

She begins her chant singing her song
What happens after, where does she belong?

BOOM
BANG
CRASH................................................

Down goes everyone whose living slavery,
Along comes food for people in poverty.

Smiles are spread across the world,
No more aids in little boys and girls.

Out goes the prime minister, bye bye Tony Blaire,
In come the people who truly do care.

Out come the soldiers who are in Iraq,
The people who died over there all come back.

The little old man who lives alone,
Is helped by the lady who walks him home.

People speak freely and can finally see,
They can speak up with the curse of world peace.

This is my newest poem :D

xxx alex xxx

Dang didnt see the titles part never mind sorry lol, maybe put the curse in your titles :D lol jk