3 Part Contest!!!

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

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    Okay the last linkin park contest i did went very well so...im gonna do another one...but this time all of their major cd's not just 1...

    Rules:
    1. If you entered a poem in my last contest you are not allowed to post that same poem.
    2. ^ It MUST be new
    3. Must contain the title somewhere
    4. not too short but not too long...Minimum 12 lines Maximum 40 lines
    5. Dont copy the songs...1 or 2 lines IF NECESSARY!
    6. MUST reserve!
    7. Ends when all poems are done
    8. 1 poem per person
    9. 1 person per poem

    This is the first round, so it will be from the album Hybrid Theory.

    Titles

    1. Papercut DONE by Gabriella
    2. One Step Closer DONE by Poetess
    3. With You DONE by Hell0 Beautiful
    4. Points of Authority DONE by Lush Fcuk
    5. Crawling DONE by Britt
    6. Runaway DONE by Teria
    7. By Myself DONE by Endlessly In The Dark
    8. In The End DONE by Brittany Schmelter
    9. A Place For My Head DONE by Wasted Fake Smiles
    10. Forgotten Reserved by Mountain Dew
    11. Cure For The Itch DONE by Espoir Failed
    DONE by Startle Me
    12. Pushing Me Away DONE by EcstacyofSuicide

  • Hey Brittknee
    17 years ago

    Forgotten, Please

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Points of Authority, please.

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    17 years ago

    Can i have place for my head. and can it be about anything?

  • Brittney Follett
    17 years ago

    In the End please

  • Brittney Follett
    17 years ago

    In the End

    Baby, I don't know what to do...
    I'm sorry that I broke your heart.
    Watching you bleed from inside,
    Is just ripping me apart.

    I tried to let you down easy.
    Hurting you; last thing in my mind.
    Baby, I don't think it will work.
    I can no longer put the pain behind.

    I'm sorry you still love me...
    But you just got to let go.
    I think I still have feelings,
    That you can never know.

    Baby, I'm tired of crying.
    You're the source of my tears.
    I'm crying right now darlin'
    Quietly so no one hears.

    I just wish you could understand
    We can't go out anymore.
    I'm sorry to tell you this...
    I feel like such a wh0re.

    Four months and seven days.
    That is how long we held on.
    It's the End and looking back
    I realized: I loved you Jon.

    ----------------------------------------
    Today is May 4th. This is all emotion, I poured my soul and tears into this one. My boyfriend and I .. ex-boyfriend and I .. broke up today.. but we are still kissing and hugging.. I think I love him.. but there's so much drama.. I know he loves me he's begging me to take him back.. I don't know what to do:

    March 24th: I wouldn't kiss him back, I was just being a tease. He told me I had three seconds to kiss him otherwise he would break up with me. I didnt' kiss him back.. still teasing.. he moved to the seat in front of my and threw my backpack in my face (which hurt) and after we got off the bus, I asked him why he broke up with me. He said, "You're a b*t*h, don't even talk to me." And he walks away. An hour later he calls and says, "Just Kidding."

    March 29th: We went to the movies he left in the middle of it 'cause his ear hurt. He said for me to call him the next day...

    March 30th: I call him and ask him what's up. He says he's probably not going to come outside today but if he does he will call me and let me know. Two hours later I call him and say we should hang out because I'm bored... He says, "Well I'm at Julien's (Boy) and we're about to skate." I said, "So when were you going to call me and let me know you're outside.. and if you wanted to hang out." He said that were about to go skating and he's not sure if they are going into town or around the parks.. but he will call and let me know... Well about an hour and a half later I call .. 'cause he still hasn't... and no one answers. Five minutes later my mom calls and says, "Why aren't you hear at the pool with Jon?"

    I don't know what to do...

    Copyright Brittney Schmelter

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    Can I have 'Runaway'?
    I won't have it in until next saturday or so, I'm leaving tomorrow to go to my dad's. And, he doesn't have computer access.
    Is that okay?

  • I Seem to be the Heartless
    17 years ago

    By Myself Please...

    Josie

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    Wasted- Yes it can be about anything

    Teria- That is fine

  • xoOrdinaryGirlox
    17 years ago

    Can i reserve Pushing Me Away please?

    Thanks =D

  • xoOrdinaryGirlox
    17 years ago

    Also does it have to have title name in it agen?

  • Espoirfailed
    17 years ago

    Can i have cure for the itch please, thanksxx

  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    Papercut plz

  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    Papercut

    too deep to hurt,
    yet too painful to ignore,
    i try to forget,
    but there's blood on my floor.

    screaming inside,
    but mouth swollen into a smile,
    i sing a song,
    cause i know i'll be here awhile.

    it stings and it burns,
    like fire among us,
    but don't worry at all,
    i won't make a fuss.

    if you see me lie here,
    just laugh and walk away,
    because some things are just too fast to see,
    and for a mistake you will pay.

    i'm shattering inside,
    a heart of broken glass,
    yet with each new strike,
    the pain starts to pass.

    as i've told you before,
    my mouth is swollen shut,
    so with my hands i write,
    my last papercut.

    the end!!! hope ya like it.

  • Startle Me
    17 years ago

    I would like to reserve
    Cure for the Itch
    Please =P

  • Startle Me
    17 years ago

    Cure For The Itch

    Communication learnt along the way
    Indication from eyes, they present
    Hot and bothered shows through actions
    Their bodies for tonight, they will lend

    Kisses overflowing from head to toe
    Who could guess lovers they are not?
    For now, they are seeking to get aroused
    The pledge of abstinence, they forgot

    A touch here and a touch there
    Turns the tomboy into mush
    The man knows what he is doing
    Clever enough to know not to rush

    The smell of flowers in the air
    Fragrance of beauty and the beast
    Lady is aroused by the sweet aroma
    As her prince conquers her feast

    The woman gets closer to the edge
    As the man only smirks in confidence
    For he knows how to tame the beast
    The lady could only wait in suspense

    For at last, the pleasure of all pleasures
    The man releases the animal within
    The woman is moaning with ecstasy
    For this is where the ending begins

    As they release all temptations
    In their system, they found a glitch
    For they understood their purpose
    Was to scratch an irritating itch

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    With You plz!

  • Espoirfailed
    17 years ago

    Cure for the itch

    You say I'm the epitome of elegance
    And the personification of flair
    But I'm seeking the quintessence
    A joy not to be shared.

    And so maybe I've been searching
    Since the summer of '89.
    But now I'm conjuring illusions
    Just to fill the time.

    And the winter took its toll,
    On the faces of the past.
    And the woodland path still shelters
    The danger that couldn't last.

    So the sorrow that lines my skin,
    Is so much more deep rooted,
    And for my exotic fabrications,
    I am worldly reputed.

    And the story behind my eyes
    Is as insincere as a sales pitch
    Craving indefinite answers,
    And my cathartics cure for the itch.

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    Awesome! everything has been taken

    but to Startle Me

    Cure for the Itch was already taken but because i forgot to put it in the rules....I will allow it just this once

    That rule has now been added to the list

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    Well there are some awesome titles...So, if the reserves don't come through, count me as a back up! =]

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • xoOrdinaryGirlox
    17 years ago

    Sorry I'm going to have to un-reserve. =(

    I cannot think of anything to write.

    EcstasyOfSuicide you can have my title if you want it. Pushing Me Away.

    Thanks and im Sorri.

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    Okay Ecstacy, Pushing Me Away is yours

  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    I've actually finished my poem now just ta tell you.
    buh bye.

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    Yep, i already marked it

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Down in the dark dirty streets lays a man,
    Afraid of himself with no one to lend a hand,
    And he's ashamed of who he is, won't admit -
    The mistakes he's made, but he'll never quit,
    To his last breath, he'll fight with all he's got,
    And down in the streets, he continues to rot,
    With a drug dealer on speed dial, he dies away,
    Killing himself from the inside out every day.

    She stands in front of an old cracked mirror,
    The look in her eyes coming in clearer,
    And she cakes on another foundation disguise,
    To hide all of her Dad's painful good-byes,
    Cracked and bruised, she holds a smile on,
    Packing a bag - she won't be here by dawn,
    And on an eastbound train, her blue eyes cry,
    As she prays upon the golden stars in the sky.

    Down on a white sandy beach, they collect water,
    Cursing and mumbling - the weather couldn't be hotter,
    And dehydration kicks in, there's nothing to eat,
    Doubling over, they drop to their knees in defeat,
    But a Mother's eyes are praying in the middle of the night,
    Tears rolling down, revealing her every fright,
    But she holds it together with every ounce of strength,
    Because for her village, she'd go to every length.

    Up on the stage, she dances around the silver pole,
    With make-up and a costume, she fits the role,
    And she'll kick off her stilettos in a strangers back seat,
    To make another dollar for food so her baby can eat,
    Her eyes are blood shot red and she drinks away her pain,
    And her nose is powdered with crystals of white cocaine -
    She cries for her baby boy at home alone on the floor,
    Screaming for his Mom, poor boy doesn't know she's a whore.

    And Mr.Bush, can't you open up your eyes to see,
    What's happening from your God forsaken points of authority?
    There's soldiers out on the battle field, risking their lives,
    And your rehearsing tattered words for another media hype?
    Poverty, violence, drugs, alcohol...what will it take,
    For you to look around and see all the lives at stake?
    So instead of rounding up your guys for another war,
    Think about their families and those in need of so much more.

    -Jenna Elphick
    May 7, 2007

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    I have two versions of this, since both turned ok. I liked this the best. =]
    `````````````````````````
    Push Me Away [2] {Terzanelle}

    Push me farther away; I don't need you,
    Just tell me I'm a worthless [roar],
    Push me farther away; I don't need you.

    You're nothing but a stupid w|h|o|r|e,
    Your high end insecurities will be your death,
    Just tell me I'm a worthless [roar].

    Step to the plate for your final breath,
    You're nothing to me any longer;
    Your high end insecurities will be your death.

    I'll hold the rope for you; I'm so much stronger,
    Just don't choke yourself too fast,
    You're nothing to me any longer.

    You've drug me down far in the past,
    I can live without you by my side;
    Just don't choke yourself too fast.

    I'll hold on tight to that broke tide,
    Push me farther away; I don't need you,
    I can live without you by my side,
    Push me farther away; I don't need you.
    ``````````````````````````
    1. A
    2. B
    3. A

    4. b
    5. C
    6. B

    7. c
    8. D
    9. C

    10. d
    11. E
    12. D

    13. e
    14. F
    15. E

    16. f
    17. A
    18. F
    19. A

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • I Seem to be the Heartless
    17 years ago

    By Myself

    Here I stand
    By myself
    All alone
    Just by myself

    It's lonely here
    By myself
    I don't like being
    By myself

    Won't you save me
    From myself
    So I am no longer
    Just by myself

    Josie
    Copyright©JosieWentzel11May2007

  • Espoirfailed
    17 years ago

    Is this contest closed yet? xx

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    No, im just waiting for others to finish there poems

    i will send everyone that isnt done a message right now to remind them

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    17 years ago

    Im sorry i forogot! i'll start now..be done soon:D

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    17 years ago

    A Place in my Head

    You still have got, that place in my mind,
    As I wonder, if you ever think of me over time.
    For I still think of you every moment of everyday,
    I wonder if you even care for me in any way.

    You have reserved a place in my head,
    The place that I go as I lay in bed.
    You’ll never know what you mean to me,
    But for now I’ll live on our memory.

    I don’t know what it is that I love about you,
    After all the pain and tears that you put me through.
    You just seem so perfect, you completed my life,
    You filled my heart up when you said to be your wife.

    But now I know that all you said wasn’t real,
    You never felt the way I still feel.
    But you still have a place in my head,
    And there you’ll remain until I am dead.

    ~*Who Cares?*~
    that's really bad. lol. i've been having writers block. oh well, i tried:D

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    I have this done but it's in mom's car.I'll have it tomorrow, promise.

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    I'm sorry, I've been away unexpectedly...
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    With You

    I read over the letter you sent;
    How shocking it was to see!
    The pictures and your beautiful face
    Smiling back at me.

    I never thought I'd have the chance
    To tell you, again, that I care.
    No matter what; always and forever;
    You know I'll always be there.

    I know we've had our differences
    But we're so much more the same.
    We've both been through so much
    It all brought us together again.

    With each letter, each word -
    My memories collide.
    The feelings that are in my heart,
    I can no longer hide.

    You are my life, my world -
    My reason for living.
    I couldn't imagine my life
    Without the love you're giving.

    I cry each time I hear songs
    That make me think of you.
    Each note and each melody
    Remind me of what we've been through.

    You made me a promise,
    And in it, I still believe.
    I know it's not your fault
    That you had to leave.

    I miss you more everyday
    You know what I say is true.
    No matter what comes our way
    I'll always be in love With You

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    Runaway.

    A beautiful figure flying above,
    higher than my highest dreams.
    A night of wonders, fears, and joy.
    With a heart much needed to employ.
    What do you bid? What's your pay?
    How long it took you to even say;
    "The beautiful figure flying above
    is a colorless butterfly thinking of,
    the things it's lost, the gifts received.
    The heart of a lover that once believed."
    A whisper in the wind slowly passes by,
    finishing the sentence that's causing him to cry.
    "Believed that life has a meaning,
    of which, together, we shall fulfill."
    For, a runaway lover with a heart too still..
    Has broken the ice before it's too late,
    and has finally created his own fate.

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    Okay, Teria, just get yours in, i'll close it after that, i havent received a reply yet from the other person, we gotta get round 2 started

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    That was timing...okay i'll give mountain dew a couple more hours then its closed

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    Okay im gonna start judging this now

  • Hey Brittknee
    17 years ago

    Ha i'm so sorry I totally forget which is weird cuz my poem was forgotten, I'm sorry =/

    MD

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    Its okay...did i not message you? if not im sorry...but dont worry about it...there will be other contests in the future

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    Everyone report to this topic who already hasnt

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=81489