Linkin Park... yay!

  • Sandra D
    17 years ago

    *~RESULTS AT BOTTOM~*

    I <3 linkin park and i wanted to see what you guys could come up with from some of my favorite songs...

    ~MUST reserve
    ~Title doesn't have to be in the poem
    ~Ends when all the titles are in... unless there'a a couple people who clearly aren't gonna do it...

    ~TITLES
    What I've Done ~DONE~ TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    Easier To Run ~DONE~ xTheEcstasyofSuicidex
    Breaking The Habit ~DONE~ Espoir*failed
    Hit The Floor ~DONE~ Lush.Fcuk-*
    Runaway ~DONE~ 20sMiLe07
    One Step Closer ~DONE~ Endlessly in the Dark
    In The End ~DONE~ Wings Of Flames
    Nobody's Listening ~DONE~ Tricky Daze
    Somewhere I Belong ~DONE~ Carrie
    From The Inside

    *ill add more if there's not enough

    1st place~3 r/r/c
    2nd place~2 r/r/c
    3rd place~1 r/r/c

    good luck!

  • Tricky Daze
    17 years ago

    When will it end?
    If it's not too close i want to reserve nobody's listening

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    17 years ago

    Can i reserve runaway?

  • Sandra D
    17 years ago

    I got u guys...

    Tricky Daze,
    just tell me when you'd be able to get it in by... not an exact date or anything, but... yea... idk how to explain what i was just trying to say...

  • Tricky Daze
    17 years ago

    If you do it till 20th
    I can get my poem in
    Of course if i don't get into writers block
    Thanks alot for your care hun

  • Beautiful Chaos
    17 years ago

    "Somewhere I Belong" please

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    "It's Easier To Run," Please. =]

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Hit the Floor, please.

    =]

  • Espoirfailed
    17 years ago

    Breaking the habbit please,
    thanks xxx

  • Sandra D
    17 years ago

    Cool, i got u guys...

    if anyone wants to do a title that i don't have here, just tell me... because there aren't that many left...

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    17 years ago

    What I've Done

    plz!!

  • Wings Of Flames
    17 years ago

    In The End thanks!

  • Beautiful Chaos
    17 years ago

    Somewhere I belong

    I'm watching strangers passing by,
    They can't see me stare,
    Trapped inside my shaded world,
    Hoping one does care.

    Step on, step up and get ahead,
    That's what's wrong today,
    Why no one feels like they belong,
    Why nothing seems okay.

    Not all are so exclusive,
    The truth is seen by some,
    Just where it is we came from,
    And what we have become.

    Nations pointing fingers,
    People placing blame,
    Eventhough we're slowly dying,
    We feel no hint of shame.

    Each one stands as right,
    Judging all they see,
    I feel like I must disappear,
    To truly live and be.

    Somewhere out there, I belong,
    Or why would I be here,
    Inside this twisted web of truth,
    Within this plane of fear.

  • AlaSkA
    17 years ago

    ...

  • I Seem to be the Heartless
    17 years ago

    One Step Closer please.

    Thanks

    Josie

  • xoOrdinaryGirlox
    17 years ago

    Can i do From The Inside off Meteora? It isnt on your list but can i?

    Thanks.

  • Sandra D
    17 years ago

    I got u guys!

    ok, all of the titles that i put on here are reserved, so... TELL me if you would like to do another title.

  • Sandra D
    17 years ago

    I got u guys!

    ok, all of the titles that i put on here are reserved, so... TELL me if you would like to do another title.

  • Espoirfailed
    17 years ago

    Breaking the habit

    As he moves onwards,
    You lift up your dress,
    You close your eyes
    And pretend you're not a mess.

    The make up that runs
    Down those injected cheeks,
    Is the only symbol,
    Symbol that you're weak.

    Paint yourself a masterpiece,
    Paint it onto your face,
    Oh we're a nation of actors,
    Acting as the human race.

    You can hear that he's breathing,
    You just choose to ignore,
    But that doesn't matter,
    He's still wanting more.

    And you snap out the influence,
    Snap out the cure
    You're breaking the habit,
    But you're not sure who for.

    ---------------------
    not the best ive wrote, but i couldn't find anything to fit better, bit of a block.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    You pushed her around, bruised and broke her,
    She hits the ground, looks up with tears in her eyes,
    And her past, she drinks it away, it's a blur,
    Overloaded with your fake apologies and pathetic lies.

    "Do you feel like a man?" She asks, face in the dirt,
    Shaking and torn from all that you have done,
    But she'll never admit to you that it actually hurts,
    When you beat her in front of her little son.

    And he hides under the table, watches from covered eyes -
    His parents scream and fight, blood splatters on the ground,
    And she hits the floor, screaming about your lies,
    She knows where you've been from the evidence she's found.

    But standing tall, shaking the dirt to the floor,
    She swears you off, she won't take anymore,
    And face down in the dirt, she turned and said:
    "Hit the floor, and you'll see what it is I dread."

    -Jenna Elphick
    May 7, 2007

  • Wings Of Flames
    17 years ago

    In The End

    Stars crawl on black skin,
    The desert's life unknown,
    Clouds start to form,
    In this hate I have grown,

    Rain starts to fall,
    Each hiding my own storm,
    My knees hit the ground,
    And madness starts to form,

    Strength pulls me to my feet,
    But only takes me so far,
    The rain now like needles,
    And this pain I know will scar,

    I push through the years,
    After each I start to crawl,
    My mentality at stake,
    But it doesn't matter at all,

    You push me to the ground,
    Your hands cold as heart,
    Blood flys escaping free,
    And my rage will finally start,

    I punish you for all of this,
    The life you stole from me,
    Drenching me in all regret,
    But now I am to see,

    For all the times I was scared,
    For every stupid mistake,
    Thirsting for my every tear,
    But this time you will break.

  • Sandra D
    17 years ago

    Wow, you guys are good! great job! so... yea, i just broke my arm on tuesday... so that could mean i'll either stop going on here for a while, or i won't be able to get off... just letting you guys know... because there MIGHT be a little more time to get your poems in... k?

    (that took me like 15 minutes to write, lol)

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    ^^^
    I've gotten mine written, but I don't have it with me. I should be able to post it later tonight, if I get bored, or tomorrow. =]

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • I Seem to be the Heartless
    17 years ago

    One Step Closer

    I woke up this morning
    And crawled out of bed
    I just had a feeling
    That this was going to be
    One long day

    "Breathe," I commanded myself
    Sitting in bumper-to-bumper traffic
    "This is just one step closer
    To the end of the day"

    I got to work late
    And my boss was in a bad mood
    Needless to say
    I got the lecture
    Of a lifetime

    "Breathe," I commanded myself
    Sitting with piles of work
    "This is just one step closer
    To the end of the day"

    Finally it was time
    To shut off my computer
    And get ready
    For the long, traffic-congested
    Drive home

    "Smile," my co-worker said
    "This is just one step closer
    To the end of the day"

    Josie
    Copyright©JosieWentzel11May2007

  • Tricky Daze
    17 years ago

    Nobody's Listening

    Hearing the horrible sound of raindrops,
    Hitting to the window,breaking the silence.
    Being quiet will be my biggest violence;
    Because nobody is listening to me.

    In a room that is usually called a class,
    A woman acts like we're just an idiot.
    My words would absolutely be my riot;
    Because nobody's listened to me.

    Memories are still itching my mentally broken soul,
    My superstition mind told me bad things would happen.
    But nobody thought that things would be that sudden;
    Because nobody had listened to me.

    Still reminding that moment like it was only yesterday,
    People yells 'Earthquake' like it's a goodbye to all the losers.
    Didn't help people from burying to ground with structures;
    Because they didn't even listen to me.

  • xoOrdinaryGirlox
    17 years ago

    Sorry I am going to have to unreserve.

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    17 years ago

    Runaway.

    Ugly, stupid, afraid of face,
    Terrified; her life is the race.
    Shes coming first, this is her day,
    Death will catch her in her runaway.

    A young beautiful girl, far away,
    Golden blond hair, cries all day.
    But she has the soul of an angel,
    Her body's spirit however is nothing but fragile.

    Sits on her own at school nibbling food,
    Smiles at the teachers as not t be rude,
    Strolls past them nervously; The girls room,
    Pencil down her throat, full of gloom.

    Why does she do it? she runs away,
    From reality, truth she cant face.
    The most beautiful smile, all girl envy,
    Not having the first idea of what she does privately.

    Relating to this girl, no matter how.
    Means you have felt this in the past or now.
    Why don't you see, your extremely amazing,
    We all are beautiful is the point that I'm raising.

    Brown, blond, red, or black hair.
    It shows the real you so please do not care.
    Anorexic, bulimic, tall r small,
    Thank god he made you who you are.

    Get up and dance, feel the beat...
    Music and heart, make your ends meet.
    Punk, Gothic, prep or Emo,
    Be who you want ignoring the feeble.

    Don't ever runaway, from those who are weak,
    Stand up and smile for the words that you speak.

    hopes you like xxx alex xxx

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    Easier To Run {CinqTriosDecaLa Rhyme}

    I actually really dislike this, but we all have our off poems, eh? =]
    ```````````````````````````````````
    It's easier to run into the nightmares of tomorrow.
    The wrong seems right in this messed up, f'd up world of sorrow.
    You're beautiful when you cry, and on those nights I'll hold you tight;
    I want to make you even more gorgeous, I want to make it right.
    Take your time and cry on my shoulder and let it all out;
    You're more perfect than you think and I'm here to stop that doubt.
    We'll teach you to stand on your own and on life's road make a new route;
    You're my angel and if need be, my heart I'll let you borrow.
    It's getting colder, but hold on tight, the nightmares stop tonight,
    In my arms you will stay though it's easier to run, no doubt.
    ```````````````````````````````````
    The CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme, a form created by Laura Lamarca, consisting of one 10-lined stanza.
    The rhyme scheme

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • Sandra D
    17 years ago

    I got u guys...

    *~ From The Inside ~*
    is now open if anyone cares to take it

    and if you don't see a title you like, just tell me what you want to do and I'll add it, easy as that!

  • Sandra D
    17 years ago

    *i'm gonna have this end on the 26th*

    that's...

    *~ MAY 26 ~*

    (one week... from today)

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    17 years ago

    Omgosh I forgot that I entered in this one BUT I got a poem done for this one!!

    Here it is.

    I erase your name,
    And those thousands of little hearts,
    From my notebook.
    But it's so many pages,
    So many memories to keep erasing.
    Your face keeps appearing,
    And your name aches in my heart.
    Every slow beat in a slow song,
    Beats back ever second that I felt safe.
    Every honk of a car,
    Makes me remember back when,
    You just didn't want to say good-bye.
    I envy every couple I see,
    Because they're feeling what,
    I always wanted the most.
    And I hate her the most,
    Because she's hugging away,
    The days of what I enjoyed the most.
    They say to forget you,
    But how can I,
    When what made me most happy,
    Is who I sacrificed almost everything too,
    And how can I when,
    You're still all I think about,
    And all I'm living for.
    Just watching you,
    Rocking on the edge of my life,
    With nothing left to pull you back.
    What I've done was nothing,
    But let you walk away.

  • Sandra D
    17 years ago

    Ok, since everyone is done, im going to start judging either today or tomorrow... good luck to everyone, this is going to be tough to judge!

  • Sandra D
    17 years ago

    Results-->

    1st--> The World Fell NUWerentThere

    2nd--> Wings Of Flames

    3rd--> Lush.Fcuk-*

    congrats u guys, ill comment you tomorrow, im a little busy... grrrr...

    Great job to everyone!

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    17 years ago

    OMGosh I actually won 1st place?!?! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!

    Please do

    - Waiting

    - What I've Done

    &

    - Remember

    And CONGRATULATIONS for everyone else who won&entered.

  • Sandra D
    17 years ago

    Ok, great, i finished those three...

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    17 years ago

    Well done all xx