could someone read my poems and tell me how to make them better

  • Ashley
    19 years ago

    a lot of people say my poems are good but a part of me isnt happy with them...i want to make them more intense ..when people read them i want to make them feel it yanno?? i have trouble just going with the flow when i write a poem ..i worry about leaving out something or repeating myself? how can i improve this?? please help thanks!