From the bottom of my heart......

  • DrowningDreams
    17 years ago

    Hey im newwww, and this is my first! =]]
    2 people per titles only, sorry =]

    The Titles are:

    The Truth Never Lies:
    1) Britt
    2) Heavy Hearts Bleed [DONE]

    Deep Within
    1) Adam
    2)

    The Faint Hearted People
    1) Heavy Hearts Bleed [DONE]
    2) Lush.Fcuk-*

    The EverLasting Cuddle!
    1)
    2)

    When We Were Growing Up Together!
    1) Alyson [DONE]
    2) Lush.Fcuk-*

    The rules Are:-
    1. Please keep them clean and no swearing.
    2. Must be new.
    3. 2 peoms per person, no more!
    4. More then 8 lines, please!
    5. Deadline is 1st June

    Have Fun
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    1st- 9 comments
    2nd- 6 comments
    3- 3 comments

    Love B xxx

  • DrowningDreams
    17 years ago

    Just 2 huni xxx

  • Allison
    17 years ago

    I would like...When We Were Growing Up Together

  • Allison
    17 years ago

    When We Were Growing Up Together
    By: Alyson

    Fantasy worlds with magic tales
    Pretending we were someone else
    Sitting in the summer heat
    When we were growing up together

    Swimming in the noon day sun
    Playing tag through grasses tall
    Being hide-and-seek champs
    When we were growing up together

    Hugs given and secrets shared
    Spending nights side by side
    Listening to each others voices
    When we were growing up together

    Many sun rises have now past
    Many sun sets closed the days
    Time has past, but we will remember
    When we were growing up together

    *I thought that I should clarify this poem. Its about the love between friends and how they will never forget each other.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    The Faint Hearted People
    &&
    When We Were Growing Up Together

    =]

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    The Faint Hearted People

    With tears in her eyes, she sits on her knees -
    Broken down by her peers, they spit and they tease,
    And she covers her ears as she tries to run away,
    Never yelling back the words that she longs to say.

    They call her fat, they call her ugly, they call her dumb;
    She stares to the masqueraded mess that she's become,
    And media promotes what she sits and dreams to be -
    Leggy models brainwashing her saying: "You can look like me!"

    And she's got her finger stuck down her throat tonight,
    Giving them what they want, she's filled with spite,
    But her Mother watches as she fades away to bones,
    Eighty pounds soaking wet - she's another barbie doll clone.

    The faint hearted people - they sit and they stare,
    But what they did to her, they do not care;
    Her bright eyes are filled with hatred, she won't stop,
    And you'll never hear them say: "Miss itty bitty went over the top."

    -Jenna Elphick
    May 21, 2007

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    That old blue sky saw everything that midsummer day,
    Even that look in his eyes when he looked her way,
    "Will you marry me Bonnie?" He asked, eyes lit;
    Red slowly filled her cheeks but she'd never admit -

    She was scared, he was only nine and she was seven,
    Their lips were locked under the golden stars of Heaven,
    And their feet were dangling loose on the river bank,
    Looking into her eyes, he laughed as she went blank.

    "Why would you want to marry me?" She asked out loud,
    "So I can make you my baby forever," He softly vowed,
    And her Mom always laughed and shook her head,
    Every time that she heard that story, but Bonnie said:

    "I don't care what this world thinks of us, love's on our side!"
    And hand in hand they walked the world, happy and wide-eyed,
    But one thing Bonnie can never forget is the day he held her,
    Softly brushing his hand on her face, he handed her an old picture -

    Her overalls were grass-stained with dirt along her freckled face,
    Standing with a fishing pole next to him near a familiar place,
    And he wiped the tears from her baby blue eyes when he said,
    He'd be leaving for war in a day or two, may wind up alive or dead.

    Thirty long years have passed since he left on that train,
    Waving goodbye from his window as she stood alone in the rain,
    And this old picture simply can't do him justice anymore,
    With the taste of tears, she mumbles over the words he swore -

    And she stands, tracing the life lines beside her bright blue eyes,
    Holding the blood red poppy in her hand as she solemnly sighs -
    "I'll be seeing you, and once again I'll look into those eyes of bright blue,
    Because when we were growing up together, I fell in love with you."

    -Jenna Elphick
    May 24, 2007