New Titled Contest!

CLOSED FOR JUDGING! CLOSED FOR JUDGING!

Prizes:
1st place-7comments and votes.
2nd place-5 comments and votes
3rd place-2 comments

Closing date: 9th July 07

Have fun!
xxx

I know Him By Heart, please.

Hello lonliness, please.

A Sad Song Says So Much, please.

Silently waiting, my dearly beloved friend.
How long will you wait? You continue to ask..
As long as it takes for the earth to end.
That is way too long and quite a hard task!
Can you sit that long, or will you pretend?
Pretend to what? Must you continue to ask?
Well, you took it upon yourself to wish your
world won't end 'til you say, "hello loneliness."

Lonely? Never!
You'll see the day, my friend.
A godmother in question, that's all you have.
Soon she'll die, and you'll be alone.
No, I shall never be alone!
You will, you must admit it to yourself.
No! That's impossible.
It is not impossible, only scary.
Just say it, my friend; you'll feel better.

And, the last breath she breathed
she happened to let out;
" Hello loneliness, welcome to my life."

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A Ottava Rima is a poem written in 8-line octives. Each line is of a 10 or 11 syllable count in the following rhyme: abababcc
[The first half of the poem is a Ottava Rima, second half isn't anything, just off the top of my head.]

I edited my poem, I read it over the day after I wrote it, and it seemed unfinished. If that's a problem, just let me know. Eh..

A Sad Song says so much plz!
Charisma*

Sex, lies and betrayel please x

I Know Him By Heart
By: Twisted Heart

His every move, seen so clear
Inside my mind he lives and breathes
A simple touch upon my heart
Fills my soul with ecstasy.

His smile captures me in time
Releasing for the world to see
The thunder of his love relates
Upon the brink of sanity.

A touch inside my mind he makes
Each thought, each memory
A gesture to the heart that quakes
Steals away my energy.

His eyes have held me hostage
For so long, yet cannot see
That he now fills my every fate
To wield in me such fantasy.

But pain is all that's found these days
Each night tears fall from saddened eyes
A simple time, a soul betrayed
Wrapped up in the touch of lies.

Could love have dealt such bitter cold
Shattered love in broken parts
No kindness to a shaken soul
Because... I know him by heart.

EDIT

Can I have sex, lies, and betrayal please! Thanks! :)
~Midnight Sun

SEX, LIES, AND BETRAYAL:

A timid young girl
Never spoke much
So innocent she was
But yearned for a touch

He gave her the attention
And flattered her so
She was too naive
Wanting to take it slow

He promised her this
But soon crossed the line
He wanted one thing
And wouldn't waste time

She felt so dirty
She knew she'd been used
She was left so scared
Punched, kicked, and abused

Her innocence was stolen
Her naivety scarred
This cold memory
Would never be far

Yes this gross act
left her so frail
She'd always remember
The sex, lies, and betrayal

Hop you like it! :)
~Midnight Sun

Twisted heart-please edit your poem to comply with the rules, or I will have to disqaulify it, thank you.

Those lips, that hand

Please. =]

are any laterations to the titles allowed, like could I change mine to Those lips, Those hands?

And just to make sure - you never said profanity isnt allowed right?

I know him by heart please. if i may reserve

I hope this fits the guidelines, i hope you like it.

I know him by heart
by Nikki

In the morning,
when he wakes,
he always takes me,
to my special place,
he has this way,
to keep himself true,
he tells me everything,
and than says "love you",
we are so in love,
together we will stay,
he makes me feel so special,
and in every single way,
there is nothing we do not know,
about each other,
if there is a problem,
we will tell one another,
the way he says he loves me,
sounds so strong and pure,
shows me that together,
there is nothing we can not endure,
we live every second of everyday,
and share this life we have.
i know him by heart-because he is my fiance

A Sad Song Says So Much

Moving soft and slow
To a rhythm in my soul
Same as the melody
On an old radio

It haunts my deepest thoughts
Pervades into the mind
Slipping through crevices
Only pain could find

Pulling at my heart's edge
To unravel the tears
That were holding on fine
Until notes I could hear

When the music plays
My sanity's lost touch
There's no words to speak,
A sad song says so much.

By: Charisma*

Sociopathetic xLaurenx-Sure you can change the title to that, and yes profanity is allowed.

Deadline is coming up, so please get all your poems in as soon as.

I totally forgot about this. im sorry. ill do it asap. =]

Driving down the black top; your eyes on the road,
A sad song came on the radio; playing nice and slow,
My fingers were entwined in yours; a smile on my face,
Turning to say: "I love you" As my heart started to race.

Smiling, you gripped the wheel tight and then you said:
"Love you too," as your cheeks slowly turned red,
And you sang along to the song as you looked to me,
You shouted: "This is what our song can be!"

And out on our spot; overlooking the sleepy town,
You kissed me like you meant it; laying me down,
My voice was shaking; fear was running in my eyes,
My body quivered as you ran your hand up my thigh.

We didn't notice the time on the clock; it was late -
Around one AM; we had to be home at eight,
You took me home and kissed me good night,
And you sped away under the soft moonlight.

An hour later; the door opened to two men in blue,
With tears in their eyes, one said: "This is for you,"
Taking the the box; they turned and walked away,
Handing me your belongings from earlier that day.

Later; they sat me down and said: "He took a curb too fast,
Lost control of his car; when we found him, he was past."
Pulling at my hair; tears streamed through my eyes,
Yelling: "That didn't happen; it's all a bunch of lies!"

But on top of the wooden casket is a picture of you,
Flawless with your quirky smile and eyes of blue,
As tears flow from my eyes; yearning for one last touch,
But who ever knew that a sad song says so much.

-Jenna Elphick
June 17, 2007

Hahaha, forgot you could only use "I" once, so I edited all of the lines that had it in them. That's why it doesn't make as much sense now, lol.

Wanting is the hardest part plz

Wanting is the hardest part

it hurts to be alone,
for some it hurts too much,
yet punishment is needed,
so you ache for his touch.

the pain ready to consume you,
crunching over with the screams,
burning in the pit of your stomach,
erasing what you used to be.

you're running to the sink,
trying to let it out,
but the pain is never released,
none of this you ever shout.

it still hurts so badly,
starting at the slightest thing,
yet you continue on with your life,
never let it sing.

you know you have no right to pain,
there's nothing that's gone wrong,
you don't live in a starving country,
trying to be strong.

so why does it come to you?
that question has no answer,
maybe it's a sign you've done bad,
that you are not sure.

it starts scaring you at night,
when you look up to the moon,
longing for something to end,
dying can never come too soon.

yet you're scared to try yourself,
and too weak to stand up again,
because the last time you stood,
they left you nothing but your pen.

so you stare out to the distance,
wishing on a star,
and you realize it can never be,
flying is too hard.

because the longing is what destroys you,
hold the fragments of your heart,
it's wishing for what you don't have,
wanting is the hardest part.

Wanting Is The Hardest Part, please

Prepairing For pain please. I hope I did this right.

To The Hudson Sea:

To the Hudson sea, and back
I went. Counting all the time
Id spent, worried about
Retirement

Because, I know this time
Was lent; because, I know here
Comes the end. Prepare me for
Retirement

Unreserve me please

I'm going to extend this as I know Britt and Gem can't acess the computer very often at the moment.

When has this been extended to? Or is it going on for longer?

Eeee I've been so busy I forgot about this, thank you for reminding me!
I will be closing and judging on Monday.
xxx

Nevermind sorry

1st Place-Lush.Fcuk-*
2nd Place-Hellon
3rd Place-Twisted Heart

If you can PM me the poems you want doing, I will get to them asap.

Thanks to everyone who entered and I hope to see you all in future contests.
xxx