My TiTlEs, Ur PoEmS!

  • Victoria Rainey
    17 years ago

    This is my second poem contest, what you basically do here is write poems using only my titles, so u'll have to look my poems to get the titles, and as well have fun doing it.

    Max 1 poem per person.. and only the first ten people who wants to participate gets a prize.. whether you lose or win... you all win.. and win a spot on my favorites...and more prizes which will be explained later...

    Rules
    1) minimum 8 lines
    2)any genre
    3)no profanity
    4)must reserve
    5)must complete it before the deadline
    5)have fun

    10 entires only---------------------------------

    1) The Bus Ride Home- Gem (done)
    2) Your Eyes Tells It All - Lush Fcuk (Done)
    3) My Little Man - Nikki (done)
    4) The Scar - Blissful Torture (done)
    5) The Real Me - Holy Hellcat (done)
    6) Today I am, Tommorow I won't - Espoir*failed (reserve)
    7) My Worst Fear - author: TheWorldFellNUWerentThere (reserve)
    8) If Im Not Alive Tommorrow - Anonymous Angel (done)
    9)
    10)

    if you have any question PM me and Ill get back to you..

    Deadline = June 20

  • Victoria Rainey
    17 years ago

    Come on i kno you want to

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Bus ride home please x

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Your Eyes Tell It All, please.

    =]

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Xx The Bus Ride xX

    Honey, I still get butterflies
    When I think of that dark night
    On that fateful bus ride
    When being with you felt right

    We were sharing the same headphones
    With me sat on your lap
    Inside I was ecstatic
    As we had a normal chat

    The flirting went up a level
    As I leaned against your chest
    Your hands stroked down my back
    Just what would happen next?

    I couldn't tear my eyes away
    Just focused on your face
    Shivers running down my spine
    As your hand curled round my waist

    We shut out the noise around us
    As we cuddled up so close
    I wanted to stay like that forever
    But I wanted a kiss the most

    And then you actually did it
    You gave me the sweetest kiss
    Once, twice, three times for luck
    I was in a state of bliss

    Ever since you kissed me
    I was straight head over heels
    Cause on that December bus ride
    My love for you was sealed

    *Gem*

    Copyright©GemmaStott2007

  • nikki
    17 years ago

    My little man please

  • nikki
    17 years ago

    I hope this is ok.

    My little man
    by Nikki

    At first I did not want you,
    it is hard to admit now,
    I thought you were a mistake,
    and just wondered how,
    how would I tell your father,
    I did not think he would stay,
    when I said I was pregnant,
    he said it was his happiest day,
    I could not believe it,
    he actually wanted you,
    I thought he would disappear,
    and leave you with me to,
    to my surprise he stayed with me,
    he never left my side,
    he was so excited to have you,
    the pregnancy I did not have to hide,
    when he first saw you,
    on the ultrasound,
    his eyes just lit up,
    his heart was tightly bound,
    he couldn't believe you were there,
    to be his first child,
    buying you everything you needed, he just went wild,
    the day you came out,
    was the best day of this lifetime,
    you were unexpected,
    but now you are mine,
    5 weeks premature,
    but now your here,
    you made it home,
    and all I had was tears,
    4 pounds 4 ounces,
    you were really small,
    in the himidicrib-I hated it,
    my heart just took a fall,
    it was all my fault,
    they had to take you out,
    the doctors say it was not my fault,
    but I still have doubts,
    you are home now,
    you made us a three,
    with your father and I forever,
    is where you'll always be.

  • I Seem to be the Heartless
    17 years ago

    I'd like to reserve please, but there are three that I want to chose between. Can I get back to you on which title I'd like? Please...

    Josie

  • AGirlWorthFightingFor
    17 years ago

    Reserve "The real me", please

  • I Seem to be the Heartless
    17 years ago

    The Scar

    Standing here,
    Wondering where you are,
    I look down at my heart
    And notice a scar

    I hadn't seen it before
    Or maybe I did,
    Chances are
    I was just trying to forget

    That you had left me
    And broken my heart
    You stabbed it, mutilated it
    Tore it apart

    So, now here I stand
    Staring up at the stars
    You're gone and the only memory I have left
    Is this disgusting scar

    Josie

    Copyright©JosieWentzel25May2007

  • Victoria Rainey
    17 years ago

    I NEED 5 FIVE MORE PEOPLE!!! PLSSSSSS\!!!

  • Victoria Rainey
    17 years ago

    Needddddd moooorrre people.. comeon i KNOW YOU WANT TO... PRETTY PLEASE!!

  • Espoirfailed
    17 years ago

    Hey i already have a poem called today i am tomorrow i won't (prob for the same contest) but was just wondering if i could submit that one or not?
    thanks xx

  • Victoria Rainey
    17 years ago

    Yeah sure no problem..

  • Victoria Rainey
    17 years ago

    Hey need more poepl pls!!

  • TheWorldFellNUWerentThere
    17 years ago

    I'll reserve

    My Worst Fear

    please&thankyou

    I have to get off right now but I'll try to write it during English next hour.
    Thanks. =]

  • AGirlWorthFightingFor
    17 years ago

    *this is NOT a cutting poem, the secret is SOMETHING ELSE, but it's purposefully vague because it's based on a concept that isn't technically mine, it could be anything

    "The real me"

    Lift your eyes above to notice
    mine glancing toward the exit
    After every sigh of exhaustion
    Praying for class to quickly end

    Hands tap against my palms
    sweaty, scratching at my sleeve
    Aware that suspicious eyes of others
    interupt my attention

    Paranoid that everyone can see
    the secret that I swore to hide
    Risking the lives of anyone that I
    have ever loved

    You never wanted me involved
    You know I never listen at all

    How long could I expect to keep this up?
    Pretending to be somebody I am not
    When there are people who depend on me
    to maintain their trust
    If you only knew who I've become
    these last few months

    After class, roll up my sleeve
    Reveal to you this ugly thing
    Tattooed upon my inner arm
    I know I went too far

    I knew you wouldn't judge or scold too harshly
    But could you please, couldn't you say something?

  • Victoria Rainey
    17 years ago

    Need a few more people... srry if my titles aint that great.. but come on people few more!! Eveyone wins something

  • Victoria Rainey
    17 years ago

    Pls

  • Jordan
    17 years ago

    Edit

    Nevermind. :)

  • Victoria Rainey
    17 years ago

    I need a few more people!!

  • Anonymous Angel
    17 years ago

    Can I do, if im not alive tomorrow?
    thanks

  • Anonymous Angel
    17 years ago

    If I'm not alive tomorrow

    If the time has come,
    for me to leave this place
    Then I hope to become,
    one with the space.

    If that day is tomorrow,
    please, don't hate me for it
    Do express your sorrow,
    but don't think its suicide I commit.

    I love my life dearly,
    live my life as if every day is the last
    I don't plan on leaving early,
    but life is going fast.

    So if I'm not there the next day,
    remember how I used to be
    How we used to play,
    and swim in the sea.

    Remember the good things,
    maybe we will meet again
    You never know what time brings,
    and when.

  • Victoria Rainey
    17 years ago

    Well u already finsihed it.. lol .. yeah you can.. I was just kidding

    TWO MORE PEOPLE COME ON!! PLEASEEEEEE

  • Anonymous Angel
    17 years ago

    Hehe sorry about that, but I just had an idea in my head =)

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    [VERSE 1]

    You came home late again, sneaking in the door,
    Laying down beside me smelling like the night before,
    And there was lipstick smeared across your face,
    When I looked at you in the morning, a beautiful disgrace,
    Your shirt was half tucked out and half tucked in,
    You were dreaming of your mistress that committed the sin,
    And I made a pot of coffee in the early morning sun,
    When you walked out to me, your shirt buttons undone,
    With your hands around my waist you kissed me,
    As my hand was shaking and I spilled your coffee -
    "What's wrong?" is all you mustered up to say,
    And I looked back over at you, with sudden delay;
    "Where were you last night?" I asked, looking at you,
    "At work," you mumbled back, I knew it wasn't true,
    And I said...

    [CHORUS]
    "Baby, you don't need to lie to me about your acts,
    The evidence you brought home tells all the facts,
    The cheap perfume and lipstick stains,
    Stop covering it up, I've figured out your games,
    I called the office and they said you weren't there,
    You were out with that office hussy, the one with blond hair,
    Don't you dare sleep next to me smelling like her,
    Your eyes tell it all, they tell me where you were."

    [VERSE 2]

    His hands were shaking as he looked me in the eyes,
    Stuttering over his words, trying to make another lie,
    And I could see the tears swelling behind his stories,
    When I told him to let go of all our memories,
    And he had his hand down on the counter when he said,
    "Honey, you know all of this is inside your little head,"
    I could feel the rage burning in my cheeks,
    When I turned to him with knees going weak,
    And I said..

    [CHORUS]
    "Baby, you don't need to lie to me about your acts,
    The evidence you brought home tells all the facts,
    The cheap perfume and lipstick stains,
    Stop covering it up, I've figured out your games,
    I called the office and they said you weren't there,
    You were out with that office hussy, the one with blond hair,
    Don't you dare sleep next to me smelling like her,
    Your eyes tell it all, they tell me where you were."

    [VERSE 3]

    And I grabbed a suitcase as I went to our tainted room,
    Ripping up his shirt smelling of her perfume,
    And I threw all of his clothes out in the yard,
    As he came runnin' to me, his heart scarred,
    I gave him my most sorrowful look as I sighed:
    "I hope she makes a wonderful little bride!"
    And I ran that knife through his favorite work suit,
    As the whole neighborhood stood watching our dispute,
    Grabbing his old boots, he walked away from me,
    With tears running down his face for the town to see,
    And now he'll know how embarrassed it was for me,
    When they all knew my husband wasn't where he should be -
    And as he walked across the yard, shaking his head,
    I put mine out the window and said:

    [CHORUS]

    "Baby, you don't need to lie to me about your acts,
    The evidence you brought home tells all the facts,
    The cheap perfume and lipstick stains,
    Stop covering it up, I've figured out your games,
    I called the office and they said you weren't there,
    You were out with that office hussy, the one with blond hair,
    Don't you dare sleep next to me smelling like her,
    Your eyes tell it all, they tell me where you were."

    ...What's inside my head is inside your scarred heart,
    But remember this - you were what tore us apart,
    For your eyes told it all, they told me where you were.

    -Jenna Elphick
    May 29, 2007

  • Victoria Rainey
    17 years ago

    Come on people

  • Espoirfailed
    17 years ago

    Today I am tomorrow I won't

    I've learnt not to count on the stars (but let's dance under them anyway)
    Try to seduce me, find out my address (but I'm not here to stay)
    I'm rooted to this spot, foundations run tunnels deep (but let's run away)
    Tomorrow I'll be different (but let's focus on today)

    So breathe in this cold evening air, (but don't you feel hot?)
    These feelings run so loose, (but let's tie them in knots)
    Remembering every face I encounter (but sorry, I still forgot)
    Today I'm here (but tomorrow I'm not.)

    Words are easy, to speak (so much harder to mean)
    I'm jumping over fences (because something tells me the grass is green)
    Surrounded by chaos (but ain't life serene?)
    Today I'm fixed, (tomorrow I'm in-between.)

    Hoping to leave (guessing I don't)
    Standing in crowds (but still so alone)
    Letting you go (because you're what I need most)
    Today I quite like you (tomorrow I won't)

  • IdTakeABulletForYou
    17 years ago

    Copycat! Lol...

  • Victoria Rainey
    17 years ago

    Lol

  • Victoria Rainey
    17 years ago

    Two more people please!

  • Midnight Sun
    17 years ago

    So this is why I don't have many reserves! You BOTH have the same contest as me! Lol! and my contest is TITLED copy cat! ironic eh? (*sigh*) oh well, they can't all be winners right? heehee. And who knows military time cause I don't know if "I'd take a bullet for you" posted before me. If you did I'm sorry, I didn't see your contest...I wouldn't have posted if you did...and I know Rainey posted after me. I guess great minds think alike! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • I Seem to be the Heartless
    17 years ago

    Is this closed yet?

    Josie

  • nikki
    17 years ago

    When is this going to be judged?

  • Anonymous Angel
    17 years ago

    I want to know that tooo,

  • Anonymous Angel
    17 years ago

    Hello???

  • nikki
    17 years ago

    Lol, still not over. pass the chocolate, while we wait.

  • Anonymous Angel
    17 years ago

    * gives some chocolate to nikki* ^_^

  • Anonymous Angel
    17 years ago

    Yea sure * hands hellon a pice of chocolate* ^_^6

  • nikki
    17 years ago

    Lol. thanks for the chocolate but it still ain't over so what can we pass around now?