Whatever We Wanna -- Part One

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There will be three parts to this contest, all of Leanne Rimes titles, starting with her 2006 album entitled "Whatever We Wanna" .

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01. Satisfied
02. And It Feels Like -- Hellon -- [DONE]
03. For The First Time
04. Save Myself
05. Little More Time -- Jean -- [DONE]
06. Rumour 'Bout A Revolution -- Sheena -- [DONE]
07. Destructive -- Teria -- [DONE]
08. Strong -- nikki -- [DONE]
09. Whatever We Wanna
10. Everybody's Someone
11. Headphones -- Synh -- [RESERVED]
12. Long Night -- SweeT14PPC -- [DONE]
13. This Life
14. Break Me Down -- Wings of Flames -- [DONE]
15. Some People

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01. RESERVE and COMPLETE by deadline.
02. More than 4 lines, less than 32.
03. Preferrably rhyming.
04. Take your time editing it, I'm very picky.
05. One per title, two per person - if both qualify you will than take two in the next round.
06. If a style, explain it after the poem.
07. NO cutting/suicide poems!
08. Deadline: June 2 - 4, depending.
09. If you want to change the title, ask me first.
10. New, but if you have an older one with the same title - reserve first and than submit.
11. Sometimes I'll miss something or I won't update for awhile, so make sure to check what other people are reserving as well; it only takes a few seconds.
12. Have fun! =]

May i please reserve strong, if i may

I hope this is ok, it has exactly 32 lines. if it's not ok just let me know i can make the last stanza go into 2 lines if i have to. i hope it fits all the guidelines. tks bye :)

Strong
by Nikki

Together our love is strong,
nothing can go wrong,
it is with you that I belong,
just living my lifes happy song,

my life with you,
I will always love,
your always there for me,
my angel from above,

with your words,
nothing can hurt me,
I feel like I can live now,
and not have to flee,

my past life,
I lived to hate,
but since I met you,
there has been no debate,

I can never forget the pain I had,
but now you make my life seem so perfect,
the past is behind me,
and that does affect,

affect just how strong,
I truly can be,
a strength I never knew I had,
a strength I could never see,

but now I have it,
together we fight,
and I have my strength,
every day and night,

it is because of him,
I realize I am strong,
it is with him,
I will always belong.

I'm thinking about "Rumour about the Revolution".
So.
Reserve me...and if I can't get it, I'm really sorry.
But, I'm pretty sure I have an idea.
Thanks!

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

I'll try, "Destructive"
Thanks <3

Destructive.

A heart that twirls a thousand twirls becomes slower than the world,
the moment it's lovers beat disappears into the arms of another heart.
It could've worked out in another time in place, just not here and now.
For, the lover of a lover is a destructive kind that slowly tears apart.

The memories of what could have been awake at night in dreams,
causing the soul of a broken life to slowly fall into another world.
As hope disappears overcoming with frustration in the mind,
the moment a lovers lover becomes a destructive kind of heart.

One beat stop, as the other goes on and on.
One life freezes, the other indulges in happiness.
Just one, not two; Oh how I wish it were you.

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I'll go ahead and try Save Myself as well, please.
This one didn't turn out too well. :/

Little More Time, Please.

Thanks

Little More Time

It's going to take a little more time
For this soul inside to feel
My hearts been broke
By words you spoke
No chance for it to heal

It's going to take a little more time
Before I get back on my feet
The nights are long
The pain so strong
Tears dried upon my sheets

It's going to take a little more time
Your touch I still recall
A gentle kiss
From your sweet lips
Now nothing is there at all

It's going to take a little more time
Your memory inside me quakes
From times that's past
They're gone so fast
Shards left here from the break

It's going to take a little more time
Before I'm finally over you
You cast a spell
Now I'm in hell
For the pain you put me through

It's going to take a little more time
But I know that come the day
I'll be much more
Than I was before
I'll wonder why I stayed

I'm pretty sure I've had this written for days, but thought I posted it. =/. Ups. Sorry.
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Rumor About a Revolution

You don't have a choice if it is so familiar it seems right,
There has to be something wrong with that if you can't even fight.
You can put up your fists but do you really want do go through this again?
You know as soon as you have put them down you might actually win.

There's a rumor about a revolution that will shakes your guns and ammunition,
You might as well put them away; you are stuck against your ambitions.
You can try as much as you like, but we both know you can't fight,
You've got a little revenge in your heart, but that just isn't right.
Either stick to your guns, or run away just like your mother did,
You've got the Yankees on your tail and you've got nothing left to bid.

It's amazing how we all fall so quickly, in a game that's not our own,
We can cry and we can scream, but the battle will still go on and drone.
In war and revolution the best you can do is just not take the bloodshed,
Just stay at home, cover up with the covers, and rest in your bed.
For when a fight is rolling through, the smartest thing to do,
Is to make peace, yet still stand up for what you believe is true.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Break Me Down plz

Break Me Down

Lost in my mind,
A race in the mist,
Forgotten all I am,
Entangled in my fist,

I write, work and love,
But it spills into stone,
Cold worthless nothings,
And in the end I am alone,

Society takes my clothes,
Ill-fashion on my back,
Personality won't get you,
Unless you ahve the rack,

Beaten with words,
Taken from my love,
What is the point in anything?
Without the fitted glove,

She takes me to the cellar,
Where reality lies hot,
Spits what I truly am,
And the ignorance I'm not,

A purpose is all I ask,
A point in the trail,
Rest from my weary head,
But it's lies among the tails,

I drift breathless through crowds,
As they bussel in my pain,
Mother overlooks me,
As tears fall in the rain.

-This is about society's influence, my mother and how i dont know what to do with my life anymore.-

'Headphones' please :)

No, it hasn't been forgotten about. Things have been happening and I've been a bit busy with personal life and starting twp jpbs. I will get it done as soon as I can; just be patient please.

No, it hasn`t been forgotten. I`ve been waiting for the reserves to finish them. I will PM them after work today I suppose and see where their poems are. A lot has been going on and I`m slowly working on getting my contests judged. Sorry for my delays in any of my contests, and I appreciate the patience.

I don`t have the time to do the usual judging that I do, so I just read them over twice or three times and go from there.

First - Sheena [8]
Second - Jean [6]
Third - Wings of Flames [4]
HM - Teria [2]
Others [1]

PM me your titles, I am working on all my catch up stuff on P&Q tonight because I`ll be busy until Sunday. I will get whatever is PM`ed to me done.

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