Final Fantasy and Kingdom hearts contest!

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Hey everyone, I am pretty sure that this has been done before, but I wanted to see what other ideas there are out there.

Rules (READ CAREFULLY!):

a) Poem MUST be about Final Fantasy, Kindom hearts, or both ( If possible). If you don't know what either of these are, please ask or look it up on the internet!

b) Must be new. I know the poems put on the other contest so don't try to trick me!

c) You must reserve a place to enter a poem. There are 15 spots open!

d) Poem can be as long as desired but must be over one stanza long.

e) If any rules are broken, then the participant will be disqualified by me.

f) Contest closes July 1st (Canada Day for me!), and judging will begin on July 2nd- 9th

g) Prizes include:

1st Place: 5 comments and added to favorites!
2nd Place: 4 comments and added to favorites!
3rd place: 3 comments
4th place: 2 comments
All the other other entrants get 1 comment because all poems are great!

(For the prizes, I will comment on your entrant poem as well as the amount stated by your prize)

g) Have fun and give it your all!

1. Rocky- Kingdom Hearts ~Done~

2. Just Jordan- Final Fantasy (Sephiroth) ~Done~

3. Memories of Kana and Hatori

4. XxRomancing the Darker SidexX
- Final Fantasy XII ~Done~

5. Vanilla - FFVII ~Done~
6. Oscar- Kingdom hearts ~Done~
7. shatteredsoul - Final Fantasy
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Yay!

Mother
By Jordan

Searching forever
Beyond a shroud of doubt
Child reaches out
Toward the unknown

Science
Broke her
Plastered a number up
And awarded a title:
Ancient

Fire
Comsumption of evil
Misinterpreted as psychosis
Morality swooned
By hatred

Pathway
Into nothing
Tripping over stones
On a trail untrodden

Child
Wimpering under moonbaked clouds
Locked away in a mansion
A mind-prison

Savage broken bonds
Administer sorrow
Drain life
Molest innocence

Life
Light
Purity
Intense
How could this happen...
Doesn't make sense

A child
Falling into the abyss
Mother
Resting peacefully
In his arms

This poem is about Sephiroth and his tormenting quest to find GENOVA, his "mother."

Can I reserve?

I would like to reserve... I'll do Final Fantasy XII.

Taken back by the life
He's lived on the street
Dreams of being a pirate
So strangers he may greet

His brother's life taken
By one his friends call an ally
The only one whom he could trust
Never got a proper good-bye

Meeting up to discover
Wonders in his land
Traveling through swamplands
And deserts filled with sand

His best friend captured
Was thankfully rescued again
His dreams of something more
Never can begin

Politics have driven him
However cliche and classy
Becoming a sky pirate
Is his final fantasy

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Vanilla, nice Kadaj avatar! Yeah!

Arrgh! Yuna, I forgot to reserve!!!

Please, pleaaassseeee forgive me!

Blah....I'll understand if you have to DQ me.....but I did write that poem just for this contest.

Mmmm....wish I could follow rules properly.

It's fine! you don't have to ask forgivness. i have reserved you. You are not disqualified!

Hehe, ok, thanks! :P

I think I may have to make the rules smaller. They seem to be taking a lot of space! hehe!

Reserve please

Hey yuna, I know that its too late but im gonna write a poem about ff too anyways, ok?
it sounds like fun!

Sure! I will reserve you!

Um... I'm going to send you (Yuna) a private message, please respond. Yes, it's about the contest :D

A Presence

There is a presence I always feel
A person near me, one that can't be real.
I'm walking around enjoying the day
When I feel a person blocking my way.

Sometimes I run, sometimes I ignore
But from this feeling I can run no more.
It's no longer around me; it's left from my side.
I smile a bit, the feeling finally died.

Moments later when I'm done feeling glee
I run around happy, feeling I'm free
Then a churn in my stomach is awaiting me
Now pain comes with that which I cannot see.

I fall to the ground, land with a shout
Something's inside me begging to come out
I know what it is now, what's inside me
And I'll never get rid of my Nobody.

Oscar I have a quick question for you. What is your poem about. Is it about a certain character? Or about FF as a whole? Or about kingdom hearts?

It's about kingdom hearts, how Sora sometimes felt Roxas (his nobody) inside of him, like when he started crying while leaving twilight town.

Awww! That is so sweet! I love sora. I dressed up as him one time. He is so cool!

There are about 7 or 8 more spots open! I shall write a poem too just for fun!

Is Hatori, Vanilla, and shattered soul almost done their poems?

Kay! Thanks!

This poem was very cool. Good job Vanilla!

Also, if there is anyone else who would like to enter then please do!

6 days left campers!

Only 1 day left! Get in your poems!! Here's who is left....

Shattered soul
Memories of Kana and Hatori

I'm sorry for the delay... I might not get my poem done in time, because of my job and the ideas aren't flowing... Don't wait for me, Kay? I don't want to hold everyone up...

Hatori

Haha, I just sneak in. Wow, this is one of the most difficult contests to do...
Hmm... I did my poem on FF7 Dirge of Cerberus. It's about Shelke and Shalua, so i hope you understand it... Here it is:

Shalua and Shelke (Ballade)

Separated for seemingly forever,
Perpetually lost and never found,
She thought that they would never,
See each other together, so profound.
For Shelke, she simply frowned,
But Shalua's heart began to mend,
That day with WRO and Deepground,
Forever the searching seemed to end.

The day that they reunited, was heartbreaking however,
For Shelke drew her weapon with a single sound,
Took aim at Shalua with haste and a heart truly clever,
Only to be stopped by a mystery man, who could astound.
Vincent Valentine, an experiment that was to cast around,
His heart is strong, no matter what; he would save the sisters, to the end,
In the quest to defeat the SOLDIER's of deepground,
Forever the searching seemed to end.

In the past, they were sisters that seemed to smile forever,
But what could have possibly happened to propound,
Such betrayal, such disgrace, something that should have never,
Never existed in this harsh world where sorrow should be drowned.
This world upon which they live on, forever revolves around,
The actions of the good and evil, before one may transcend.
The sisters refuse to lose or fall to the ground,
Forever the searching seemed to end.

With barely anything left, Shelke Rui of Deepground,
And Shalua Rui of WRO, both have tried to fend,
But their bond will survive, no matter how faint, it will surround,
Forever the searching seemed to end.

Okay... This type of poem is not to be confused with a Ballad! Ok... Here's the definition and rhyming pattern:
Three 8-line stanzas rhyming ababbcbC, followed by a 4-line envoi rhyming bcbC, the same rhymes being used throughout. The capital C's indicate that the same line is repeated at the end of each stanza as a refrain. (The technical name for this phenomenon is rime en kyrielle.)

I REALLY hope that you like this poem, (it took a while)...

Good Luck everyone!!!

Do not fret! I am judging the contest as I speak! It's hard to judge, but there will be a winner out of this! Suspence!

I wanna know...

The results are in!!! I repeat! The results are in!!!!

Everyone did a wonderful job and I thank every one of you for taking an interest in this contest. It was hard judging and i must admit that I spent so long trying to figure out who the winners would be. So without further ado, the winners of the Final Fantasy and Kingdom hearts contest!

1st: Oscar- A Presence
2nd: Vanilla-Field of dreams and Hopes- Thanks for the memories
3rd: Memories of Kana and Hatori- Shalua and Shelke
4th: Just jordan- Mother

Congrats to the winners!!!! yay! Great job all of you and you should be recieving your prizes soon. Leave here feeling happy and satisfied, and if there are any questions then please feel free to PM. Thanks!

Thanks!! Can you RRC any of my poems? On of them being Shalua and Shelke?

Congratualations everyone!

Yay! Thanks!

Godd job to all!

...."Good," even. Hehe.

Wow, thanks. can you do my four featured poems and then any other one that catches your eye.
Thanks.

Oscar

P.S congrats to the other winners