Terra's Three Round Contest (part 2)

Contest Closed

Moving Onto The Final Round

Heavy Hearts Bleed
Poetess
Sociopathetic xLaurenx

Nature- Forever Falling

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Family: Raising Rightousness, please.

K I HAVE YOUR GUYS RESERVED. :)

have a great time writing...

my last exam is the 25th so i will be jugding on the 26th.

Diamond Grace - Nature please

Family-Forever falling please.

K i have you guys saved now we just need to wait on the last three people.

i will be sending them messages shortly

The Due Date Has Been Changed

I just thought i would let you guys know :)

Family
`*3 Diamond Grace

Wow. a family poem.. this is gonna be hard. -challenging i mean.

i am sorry i forgot about this. but i shall do it ASAP! =]

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and even though its family.. its still sad.. and about prostitution.. and child porn.. i can never write happy. wtf.. =[

Diamond Grace

Diamond Grace
Such a pretty name,
Matching a beautiful face
It's truly a shame
that behind her name,
is lies and hatred and disgrace

Grace in itself is only a lie
the surname of a family
that makes the world cry
with a dead-beat father
and a drug addict mother
no one pretends to bother
about the poor girl
or her younger brother

She is divine, just like her name
She should shine, her lights in fame
Little girl should be a star
But her family won't let her go far
Family business- sell their daughter's soul
Family business- turn her heart stone cold
Selling her innocence, she's an underground star
just a child, yet she's supporting them all
with her dirty deeds, she's dug her self deep
every night with another man she sleeps
and with her little brother she weeps
because already he is forced
to go down this lonely course
a path to nowhere,
where no body cares
or is ever there.

Little Diamond Grace
With a pretty name
to match a pretty face
But where her heart should lie
is only an empty space

That is okay dear. i cant write happy either. as long as it is about family it is all good :)

Raising Righteousness.

My dear darkest friend
how you have betrayed me.
A mist of all my troubles,
I've become too blind to see..
The person you've become
behind the doors of your majesty.

Thousands of people who look up
to the one who can only look down.
How, oh how is this even possible
for the ruler of my kingdom to frown?
They're raising righteousness wrong,
he's falling to the ground.

No one can save his broken soul,
he's slipped too far away.
No one can compare to the person
our king was yesterday.
But, it's just too bad he's
changed within a day.

Oh, my brother by blood,
my ruler by society.
King of kings and
hearts of hearts..
Pick yourself up
before you're too far apart.

Sorry its taking me awhile to do this.
I'll write it now.

This is deffinately not my best.
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Forever falling

Forvever falling for your lies
Trusting you; I can not do

I just want to hear the words
'I love you' come from your heart

You nearly broke up our family
And you didn't even care

One day you will need me
And I will not be there

Thank you dear :) you still have until July 1st, and i do not read until i am judging them so if you wish you can change it up a bit before then. :)

I'm gonna have to back out. Sorry Deary! I have a lot to catch up on... =( Sorry!

Ciao

I'll try to go find it and post tonight, but since the site was down and I haven't been on for a week, I may not be able to get it in.
I'm really sorry for the inconvience. =[

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

OKAY EVERYONE! sense the surver was down i am going to be postponing the due date until the 10th.

Change my mind again. till the 6th. i hope the last 4 can still get something to me...

Okay. well here it is. the final marks to the second round

Teria: Raising Righteousness

16/18

Heavy Hearts Bleed: Forever Falling

17/18

Poetess: Diamond Grace

17.5/18

Sociopathetic xLaurenx: Diamond Grace

17/18

Infected With his Deadly Love: Forever Falling

16/18

Moving Onto The Final Round

Heavy Hearts Bleed
Poetess
Sociopathetic xLaurenx

I was just getting ready to put my poem in. =[
I'm really sorry; my internet went down and I was like "aoaisghaoigh!!!! I NEED TO GET THAT POEM IN!!!!" and so forth. =/...
Sorry about this.. I had it written and everything. =[

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Thats okay dear you know me. I will have plenty more contests coming up :)

Congratttts everyone. :]