Poems want read?

hey i'll check a few of your poems out if you could read and comment on
Michael and
I'm sorry grandad
thanks
jemma xxx

Hey! I kinda just started putting my poems on here, and I know that not everyone will like them all, but please Rate and Comment. I'd like to know what I could try to do and how I could possibly make them better maybe? I mean, For future poems atleast. But, I write my poems on my feelings. Thanks guys-I will try and read all of ya'lls poems tonight. Bye!
-Nichole Owens