I need help with a line in my poem

I sit by the phone and wait for your call
As if I have no other choice,
Cause baby boy you just dont know
How Id die just to hear your voice

ok should i put i'd die to hear your voice or i die to hear your voice

*thanks*

ok heres another thang i need help with ok,

it's crazy how you havent left my side yet,
as if you have my mind set.
set on just you and me

i dont know ehat my other line should be? something that rhymes with me

I don't like the stanza at all. Especially the 'cause baby boy' bit. Ugh. Just sounds so.

Crap. Sorry.

Yea.... ok....

I sit by the phone and wait for your call
As if I have no other choice,
And honey you just dont know
How I die to hear your voice

This way It would be more beautiful. Right guys???

Ok the second bit
it crazy how you havent left my side yet,
as if you have my mind set.
set on just you and me

Solution:

You haven't left my side yet
And always have my mind set
Thoughts about you and me
Lingering through freely

Hope it helped dear :)

Yea. thanks!