poem help

hey guys me and my best friend had this little poem competition and i put the poens that we wrote up here
its fistly
Hero (p1 to 6)
THEN
Hero (p7 to 10)
THEN
Hero (p10 to p12)]
THEN
Hero (p13)
THEN
Hero (p14)

can you please read thses poems they are REALLY long but it would mean alot to us if you voted and commented on them

i WILL return the favour i will read your poems if you read the heros please it would mean the world to us
thanks alot bi